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Posted: 6 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Fallingasteroid

Such an emotional os ... 😭😭😭 Naina's dialogue of" ab toh 2 mausam guzar chuki hai " was 😭 You really have a skill of putting across emotions in words👏👏 the part where Naina stood beside the funeral pyre void of emotions... that's what happens when you undergo shock😭 Beautifully penned down...



Aww that's such a big compliment for me. Thank you so much. I'm so happy I could put the emotion of the song and situation in words and do justice to the beauty of the song. Thank you so much. 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Octothorpe




Jaldi hi unres karna 😆


I've done the unres on the first page...😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: becool97

After reading this OS i become pretty emotional. 😭👏 so i thought of writing a poem for you:

Neela aasman mein koi aisa sitara bhi hai,
jo khud jalta par dusron ko khushi deta hai,
sab dard andar hi andar samet ke rakhta hai,
aankhon mein hasi liye chalta hi jaata hai

uss sitare ko mein dekh raha hoon,
uski garmi mein apni ruh sek raha hoon,
woh bhi hai tanha,
main bhi hoon tanha,
uski aanchal mein apna dard kured raha hoon

uski ankhein bhi hai ojhal meri tarah,
uski seher main bhi hai hulchal,
aur log wahan bhi hai masgull.
unko nahi parwa kya khilta hai.
aur kya marta hai harpal

yahan par bas mein nahi,
aur hazaar bhi aate hain.
muh phulake sar pe haath rakh ke chale jaate hai.
sab thik ho jayega yahi sapna dikhate hain,
hume pyar se niharte nahi humdardi dikhte hain

par ye zakhm hame khud hi sehna hota hai.
apne aansoon ko dil ki zameen pe seench ke,
patthar ka beej bona padta hai.
phirse ek naya ashiyana banana padta hai,
hamare dard ko khushi ki jholi mein piroke.
sajana padta hai

aasman mein ek naya ghar to le lenge.
aur apni hasi se uss seher ko ujaala bhi kar denge.
par dard kisse baantein.
badi lambi hai hamari ye sooni raatein
❤️




Aisa toh nahi ki you're churaofying it from somewhere😉
It's beautiful. Thank you for penning it down. Loved reading it.😃 You're a gifted poet. Don't let that poetic streak fade away, ever!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Labhya

Bhagwan jhoot na bulaye octo beta kya Sundar OS likha hai tune haaa...

It was quite emotional
But you didn't do the good job to kill sameer...
Paap lagega...

I can understand how difficult it must've been for naina and his whole family...

Next time do add labhya friendly tag whenever you post an OS because these things are sort of big D for me... so I'll be careful and cautious while reading such stuff...

Lets not talk about me... This update was good...

Keep it up...
Congratulations
Labhya 😃




Aww thank you so much Labhya🤗
I was just bit into the song when I wrote this one and I couldn't understand what was more emotional. Writing is my way of getting away with the built-up inside and perhaps I was emotionally drained that day when I wrote this😆. Don't worry, I wouldn't be posting any more of these😆
Thank you so much once again🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Prizi

beautifully written


Thank you so much for reading😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: munchkinland

Hash Hash Hash

I am crying
how can you kill Sameer
you know na how much I love him
this was soo emotional for me

Okay and my friend your writing was awesome
this was soo good
Naina's pain reached out to me here

She had their symbol of love to survive
vihaan could not ever see his father

This turmoil for a child is unbearable
And I have seen that




I'm so sorry Su to make you cry🤗
I don't know I was perhaps in a gloomy mood when I wrote this😆
I know how difficult it is for a child to lose his father. 😒
I'm happy I can make you feel Naina's emotions. That's some accomplishment for me as a writer. Thank you🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37
you made everyone cry
paap lagega sach main
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: munchkinland

you made everyone cry

paap lagega sach main




I would do a prashchit of it. 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Octothorpe




I would do a prashchit of it. 😉


phir thik hain
mujhe prashchit ka intezaar hain ab😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: munchkinland


phir thik hain
mujhe prashchit ka intezaar hain ab 😆



It'll be coming soon😉

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