Samaina : os series (part 4 os updated on page 15) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Dharapriya

Really nice update. Suspence banake rakha aapne. Nice. Now eager to know what or who was there on the backseat. Please update soon

Originally posted by: AnjaanMishra

Awesome update dear and I loved it 👏 , please continue this story , what a emotional part 😭

Who is the husband of Naina??

Please reunite samaina 😉

Originally posted by: Rph09

Thank u thank u thank u sooo much 😭 Thank god sharad is not her husband!! Then who is her husband?!! I hope naina is not married & she applies vermilion of sameer's name!! Aap please demotivated mat hoiye. U can buddy your readers & pm them for reading ur story.

Originally posted by: Samaina_loverzz

It was an emotional update but different concept No Words to define..Loved the chapter plzz continue the next soon... And Thnx for the pm..

Twist is nice at the end. Now do something ki Naina married bhi na ho but sirf dikhawe k liye Sindoor or mangalsutra pehnti ho that to Sameer k Naam ka.

Originally posted by: Archie11

Twist is nice at the end. Now do something ki Naina married bhi na ho but sirf dikhawe k liye Sindoor or mangalsutra pehnti ho that to Sameer k Naam ka.

We want Samaina only no one else.

Waiting for next update

Amazing update... Kya twist h jaldi update krna next part

Originally posted by: tejalpatil

Amazing update... Kya twist h jaldi update krna next part

Thank you for your response on my all parts, par is part me mai kafi jayada confuse tha. Bcoz isko padhne ke baad ya to aapka bhut acha lagega ya bhut hi jyada bura. To agar bura lage to use lie advance me sorry hai.

Recap :
Sameer : naina ye sharad driver...
Naina : kyu sharad naam ke do log nhi ho skte kya ?
Sameer : par tumhara pati ?
Naina : wo piche baithe hai...

Aur fir sameer piche ki seats ki tarf dekhta hai. Aur jaise hi wo us aur dekta hai
"THE SANYASI DIES ON THE SPOT"

Sameer us tarf dekh kar shock ho gya ye kehna bhut choti baat hogi. Kyunki jo sameer dekh rha tha wo usne kabhi imagine bi nhi kiya tha.

Sameer : Nain... Naina ye sb kya hai...? Piche to koi bi nhi hai.
Naina : dhyan se dekho sameer...

Sameer look towards the back seat again but there was no one except a photo.
Sameer us photo ko uthata hai aur us photo ko dekhte hi uski aankho se aasu behne lagte hai. Kyunki wo photo kisi aur ki nahi sameer ki hi thi.

Sameer ke man mai na jane kitne hi sawal chal rahe the aur inhi sawalo ke jawab pane ke lie wo naina ki aur dekhta hai...
Par naina uske kisi bi sawal ka jawab nhi de pati, bas sameer ke gale lag jati hai aur zor zor se rone lagti hai.

Sameer(worried) : kya.. kya hua naina. Please tum rou mat.
Naina : na...nahi sameer aaj ro lene do mujhe. Beh jane do ye aansu. Tumhare jane ke baad na jane kitne hi dino tak maine inhe chupa ke rakha tha. Duniya ke samne strong hone ka natak karte karte thak gayi hoo.Par andar se bhut kamzor hoo mai.
Chupa lo mjhe apni bahoo me...

BG Music starts :

Aaj jaane ki zid na karo
Hai mar jaayenge, hum to lut jaayenge
Aisi baatein kiya na karo
Aaj jaane ki zid na karo

Tum hi socho zara, kyun na roke tumhe
Jaan jaati hai jab uth ke jaate ho tum
Tumko apni qasam jaan-e-jaan
Baat itni meri maan lo
Aaj jaane ki zid na karo
Yunhi pehloo mein baithe raho
Aaj jaane ki zid na karo...

Sameer bina kuch kahe naina ko hug kar leta hai. Kyunki isi ehsas ke lie na jane wo kitna tadpa tha. Wo ehasas bilkul waisa tha jaise jab aapka hanth jal jata hai aur uske baad aap uspar barf lagate ho. Wo dono na jane kitni hi der ek dusre ki baaho me rehte hai. Fir kuch samaya baad jab naina thoda shant hoti hai. Tab sameer uske aasu pochta hai aur puchta hai...

Sameer : naina meri photo tumhare pass...
Naina : tumhe kya laga tha. Mjhse itni jaldi picha chuda loge.

Sameer smiles

Naina : Tum(points a finger on him) sirf mere ho...tumhe kya laga mjhe chodkar chale jaoge aur mai aage badh jaungi.
Sameer : nahii... Par ye sb kya hai and ye sindoor aur mangal sutra ye kiske naam ka hai.
Naina : buddu(hit him playfully). Tumhare naam ka hai aur kiske naam ka hoga.
Sameer : par...
Naina : sab batati hoo...

Flashback

Scenes of part 2.3 The practical naina

Aur fir wo apne papa ki aur dekhti hai jo sharad ki maa se baat kar rahe hote hai. Is ummid me ki shayad aaj jab uski zindagi ka sabse painful moment hai to shayad uske papa uska sath denge, par har bar ki tarh is bar bi wo naina ki aankho me chupe dard ko nhi dekh paye.

Narrator : Aur iske sath hi naina ki akhiri ummid bi tut gayi. Uske hak ke lie ladne wala koi nhi tha yha, ek tha jise usne khud apne aap se door kar diya tha aur dusre parivar ki wjh se majbur. Naina ye janti thi ki wo kabhi bi is rishte ko dil se sweekar nhi kar sakti thi. Fir bi is rishte me badhne ko taiyar ho jati hai kyunki aakhir me bhale hi uska pyar har gya ho. Sameer usse door chala gya ho. Par uska parivar khush tha. Wo ek lover ke tour pe fail ho gyi thi but shayd ek beti ki zimmedari nibha di thi usne. Bhale hi sameer ka pyar na hasil kiya ho usne par apne parivar aur apne papa ka pyar to hasil kar liya tha. Aaj uske papa khus nazar aa rahe the, aaj uske papa ne use apna liya tha...

Ab aage...

Naina goes towards the mandap where sharad was waiting for her. She sit there silently.

Apni barbadi ka tamasha apne aankho se dekhne ke lie sach me bhut himmat chahie hoti hai. Jaise jaise pandit ji mantra padh rahe the naina utna hi jyada apne aap ko kho rahi thi. Par fir us din shayad pehli bar bhagwan ko naina pe taras aa gya aur wo hua jisne kai logo ki zindagi badal di.

Suddenly her father and sharad mom started shouting at each other.

Rakesh : are aap hoti kon hai aisa kehne wali. Naina meri beti hai aur usse juda har faisla mera hoga
SM(sharad mom) : rakesh ji naina bhale hi aapki beti hai par ab wo hamari bahu banegi.
Rakesh : ha to maine kab mana kiya hai. Par jaisa maine kha hai waisa hi hoga.
SF(sharad father) : are bhaisaab aise kaise kar lenge aap apni manmani.
Rakesh : aise kaise matlb. Mai naina ka baap hoo. Aur jo kuch uska hai wo mera hai, islie jo paisa uske naam hai wo mere aur mere bete arjun ki cricket coaching me kaam aayega.
SM : ek to hamne aapse dahej ke naam pe ek rupya nhi manga, uske bawjood aap aisa bol rahe hai.
Naina hamari bahu banne ja rahi hai aur shadi ke baad jo patni ka hota hai. Uspe uske pati ka pura hak hota hai.
Rakesh : ha to rakhiye na apni bahu apne pass, lekin wo paisa mere paas hi rahega.
Sharad : waah rakesh ji. Ab mera muh mat khulwaiye, ek to sb jante hue bi mene ha kar di shadi ke lie aur aap...
Taiji : oh bai kya matlb hai aapka...???
SM : yahi ki duniya kya kya keh rahi hai iske bare me, un maheshwario ke ladke ne naina ke naam kyu kiya ye paisa
Tauji : are kehna kya chahti hai aap.
SF : yhi bhaisaab ki sb jante hue bi hm js shadi ke liye taiyar ho gye. Par ab ye shadi tabhi hogi jab naina apne sath wo sari property leke aayegi.
Rakesh : aap is naina ko apne pass rakhiye. Par me apni property me se kisi ko ek footi Kodi nhi dene wala.
Sharad : fir me bi dekhta hoo ki ye shadi kaise hoti hai. Naina wo sb apne sath lekar aayegi nahi to...
Rakesh : nhi to kya...Kya kar lega tu.

And everyone started shouting at each other... For the money.

Naina(inner voice) : ek tarf meri shadi ho rahi thi aur dusri aur mai apne aap ko samjha rahi thi ki ye sab mai apne parivar ke lie kar rahi hoo. Parivar jisne mujhe pala tha, jise meri parvah thi, jo shayad hamesha mera bhala chahta tha, aur sabse badi baat mere papa ne mjhe swikar kar liya tha.

Par in sab ke bich jab wo sb hua to mano aisa laga jaise kisi ne mjhe ek sapne se jaga diya ho.

Mera parivar aur mera honewala parivar ek dusre se lad rahe the, chilla rahe the, par unke ladke ki wajh meri khushiya nhi thi. Balki wo paisa tha jo ki mera sameer mere naam karke naam gaya tha.

Aur aaj fir ek bar sameer ki kahi wo baat sach ho gyi.
""Naina apne parivar se jyada kisi ko pyar nhi kar sakti.
Aur mujhse jyada naina ko koi pyar nhi kar sakta.
Aap aur aapka parivar bi nhi""

Sach hi to kha tha sameer ne uske jitna pyar mjhe sach me koi nhi kar saka...

Mere papa aur sharad ke gharwalo me se kisi ko bi me nhi chahie thi. Chahie thi to bas meri daulat.
Papa ki wo pyar bhari baate sirf islie taki wo mjhse wo paisa hasil kar sake.
Sharad ke gharwalo ki wo tareefe bi sirf islie taki wo paisa me apne sath le aao

Kisk ko kuch nhi chahie tha to wo thi naina

Na mere gharwalo ko beti chahie thi aur na hi kisi ko bahu. Chahie tha to sirf paisa...

Us din mano mjhe sach me yakin ho gya ki betiya parai hoti hai.

Ek sawal mere man me us din bar bar aa rha tha. Ki mujhse bada badnaseeb to shayad is duniya mai koi nhi hoga.
Maine apna sb kuch (sameer ) laga kar ek bazi kheli thi aur anth mai me wo bi har gayi..

Kya aise hi hote hai parivar, kya sirf yahi hoti hai parivar ki zimmedari.
Sameer mjhse aksar kehta tha ki me lucky hoo kyuki mere pass parivar hai.
Par aaj mai usse kehna chahoongi ki agar parivar aise hote hai na to acha hai ki sameer ka koi parivar nhi hai.

Bhut kuch chal rha tha mere man mai. Lekin un sbse pehle mjhe aaj ek faisla lena tha. Ye faisla shayad meri puri zindagi tabah kar skta tha par aaj logo ko ye batana zaruri tha ki...

Mahila ka roop sirf sita mai hi nhi hota
Balki durga me bi hota hai...
Wo agar patni bankar pati ko sawar sakti hai.
To kaali bankar narsahaar bi kar skti hai.

Ek mahila ke kai roop hote hai, aur ye baat mujhe sabko batani thi. Apne lie nhi balki har us aurat ke lie jo apne aap ko kamzor samjhti hai.
Kyunki agar aaj me chup rahi to ye sirf mera nhi balki har aurat ka apman hoga...

Wo kehte hai na ki bahar waalo ke khilaf to sab khade ho skte hai. Par asli himmat to apno ke khilaf khade hone me lagti hai.

Naina(screams) : bas kijiye aap sab log.
Rakesh (angry ) : tu chup kar, dikh nhi rha ke ghar ke bade baat kar rahe hai.
Naina : nahi... Kyunki mjhe aap sab se ek jaruri baat kehni hai.
Taiji : oh bai tujhe samjh me nhi aata ek bar me chal chup chap baith mandap pe.
Naina(shouts) : MUJHE YE SHADI NHI KARNI KYUNKI ME SAMEER SE PYAR KARTI HOO

Everyone was shocked except preeti bcoz she was happy. Ki aakhirkar naina ne apne hak ke lie awaz utha hi li..

Rakesh : kya ? Us ameer zade se. are ye sunne se pehle mjhe zeher kyu nhi de diya tune.
Naina : ha karti hoo, par apne parivar ke lie maine usse bi rishta tod liya kyunki mjhe laga tha ki parivar se badhkar kuch nhi hota,
Taiji : oh bai tabhi us boluram ne sb kuch iske naam kar diya, are karamjali khandan ka naam mitti me milane se pehle tujhe sharam nhi aayi.
Naina : aayi thi taiji bhut aayi thi. Aur islie sameer ko apni zindagi se hmesha ke lie door kar diya, har rishta tod diya usse. Taki parivar ki izzat kharab na ho, par ye sb karke bi me aap sab ka pyar nhi pa payi, kyunki aap sb ko to bas paiso se pyar hai.
Rakesh: are tu hoti kon hai ye bolne wali, tera baap mai hoo aur teri shadi hogi ya nhi ye faisla main loonga samjhi...
Naina : baap aajtak aapne apne pita hone ka kon sa farz nibhaya hai. Hmesha mjhe bhoj smjha hmesha apne aap se door rakha.
Tab kaha gya tha aapka ye pita hone ka adhikar, kya pita ka farz sirf bacho ke zindagi ke faisle lena hota hai. Unki dekhbhal karna nahi.
Tauji (shouts) : naina ye kya tarika hai bado se baat krne ka..

Naina turns towards tauji. And the look on her face was very scary. She was the naina you don't wanna mess.

Naina : bade kin bado ki baat kar rahe hai aap tauji.
Aap jinke lie mera hona ya na hona ek samaan hai,
Ya fir taiji jinhone puri zindagi mjhe kosa hai, mjhe abhagan , jali kundli aur na jane kya kya kaha hai,
Ya fir mere papa jinhone aaj tak kabhi pyar se mere sir pe hanth tak nhi rakha,

Kya bado ka kaam sirf itna hi hota hai ki bacho par apne faisle thopna, unki khushiyo ke bare me sochne ka nhi

Taiji : bhut zubaan chalne lagi hai teri..

And she comes towards naina to slap her, but naina cought her hand in between.

Naina : bas taiji aaj nhi. Aaj tak me mar khati aayi kyunki mjhe lagta tha ki aap hmare ache ke lie marte ho, par mai galt thi...
Tauji(claps) : waah anand!! Yahi sikh di hai tumne is naina ko.
Anand : par bhaisaab...(rakesh cut him in between)
Rakesh : are tu to bada kehta tha ki naina meri beti hai naina meri beti hai, yhi sanskar diye hai tune ise...
Naina : ye chacha ji ke hi sanskar hai jo maine kisi bi rishte se uppar apne parivar ko rakha hai. Aur agar aaj bi chacha ji kehte hai to me ye shadi karne ke lie taiyar hoo

Goes towards chacha ji...

Naina : meri aankho me dekhiye chacha ji aur kahiye ki yaha jo kuch ho rha hai wo sahi hai. Kahiye ki sharad sameer se acha ladka hai. Mai bina kuch kahe ye shadi kar lungi. Aapne hi mjhe sikhaya hai na ki apne adhikaro ke lie ladna chahie, to bataiye chacha ji kya aaj me galt hoo.

Chachaji bi man mai ye jante the ki ye sb jo ho rha tha wo galt tha. par unke andar ghar ke bado ke khilaf jane ki himmat nhi thi. Par sath hi sath unme is baat ki himmat bi nhi thi ki naina ki aankho me dekhkar kahe ki sb shi hai

Anand (place a hand on her head) : tu sahi hai meri bitiya. Bhaisaab bhabhiji jab bache galti karte hai to bado ka farz hota hai unhe samjhana par bade bi to galti kar sakte hai na
Taiji : to ab tu us sameer ke piche bhagegi. Jiska na pata hai na thikana. na jane kaha sanyas leke baitha hai, zinda bi hai ya...(naina cut her in between)
Naina : bas taiji aapko koi adhikar nhi hai sameer ke bare mai aisa bolne ka. Aur kya hua agar sameer yha nhi hai.
Agar wo sanyasi hai, to mai uski sanyasan par ab hme koi alag nhi kar skta, mai sameer ke alawa kabhi kisi ko apna pati nhi smjh skti. Aaj se sameer hi mera pati hai.
Taiji : to ek baat tu bi kaan kholkar sun le agar tune us ladke se rishta jodne ki koshish ki na, to is ghar ke darwaze tere lie hmesha ke lie band ho jayenge.
Naina : agar aapka yahi faisla hai, to mjhe ye bi manjoor hai. Chali jaungi me is ghar ko chod kar...
Taiji : thik hai ja nikal ja is ghar se, aur anand babu aap bi dhyan rakhna agar is ladki se kisi ne rishta rakha to uska aur hmara rishte khatm.

Naina goes towards chacha ji

Naina : Chacha ji mai janti hoo ki maine aapko bhut dukhi kiya hai. Par aap bataiye jo ladka meri khushi ke lie apna sab kuch chod kar ja sakta hai. Usse acha ladka mjhe mil skta hai kya ?
Anand : meri beti ne to heera dhundha hai. Sach me mai khud kabhi aisa ladka nhi dhund pata tere lie, jao mera ashirwad tumhare sath hai.
Tauji : jao jao jahan jana hai waha jao, lekin ek baat yaad rakhna, jab zindagi ke musibato ka akele samna karna padta hai na tab aate daal ka bhav pata chalta hai.

Naina(smiles) : aap bhul rahe hai tauji...
Mera sameer mere lie bhut kuch chod kr gya hai.

Meanwhile preeti brings the photo of sameer from the house and give to naina.

Preeti(crying) : teri bhut yaad aayegi...
Naina : mujhe bi

Rakesh : naina fir soch le ek bar,
tu apne parivar ko chodkar ja rahi hai ???

Naina ke kadam raste me hi ruk jate hai.
Taiji aur rakesh man hi man muskurane lagate hai. par fir naina piche mudti hai.

Naina : nahi papa mai parivar ko chodkar nhi...
Balki Parivar ke pass ja rahi hooo...

Hints given in the previous parts about sameer and naina :

1) Aur ankhirkhar naina ki shadi ho jati hai. Kehte hai ki shadi do logo ki hoti hai par yaha to bas ek hi person tha is shadi me kyunki dusra to bhut pehle apne aap ko kho chuka tha...in 2.3

2) Aur aise hi ek din jab naina apne pati(sameer photo) ke sath car me office ja rahi hoti hai. Tabi koi uski car ke samne bhagta hua aa jata hai...in 2.3

3) Nahi sharad ji sameer mujhe maaf kare ya na kare isse koi fark nhi padta par me ye shadi kabhi nhi todungi...in 2.4

Present seen

Naina(rote huye) : aur tab se mai tumhare naam ka sindoor aur mangal sutra pehnne lagi. Aur tumhari di hui zimmedari (maheshwari industry) ko sambhal rahi hoo. Kyunki ye sirf ek company nhi nanu ke saalo li mehnat bi hai.
Mujhe pata tha ki munna aur pandit bhale hi industry na sambhal paye par wo log tumhe zarur dhund lenge. Islie maine business join kar liya. Aur isi tarh tumhari naina practical naina ban gayi.
Sameer : aaj tumne ek bar fir sabit kar diya ki nanu sahi the, tumse achi ladki mjhe mil hi nhi skti thi.
Naina : I love you sameer
Sameer : I love you too naina
Sameer : Par naina in sab mai tum apne parivar se alag ho gyi, mai ye kbhi nhi chahta tha.
Naina : nahi sameer mai apne parivar se alag nhi hui hoo, mera parivar mere sath hai. udhar dekho...

Sameer us aur dekhta hai aur, fir dekhkar emotional ho jata hai.
Kyunki us aur khada tha naina ka parivar yani asali parivar

Chacha ji ,chachi ji, preeti, munna aur pandit...

Note : I know guys aapme se kai logo ko ye bhut fimly lagega ya ho skta hai aap sb ye accept na karo ki kaise 90s me koi ladki itna bada decision le skti hai.
Aur sach puchiye to me bi yhi manta hoo ki parivar aur pyar me se apko parivar ko chunna chahie kynki 2 saal ke pyar ke lie 20 saal ke parivar chodna galt hai.
LEKIN LEKIN LEKIN...
Uske lie aapko pehle ye janna bi jaruri hai ki aapka asali parivar hai kon, jaise naina ne jana...

Naina : sameer maine to shadi nhi ki par kahi tumne to...
Sameer : shadi kisse karta, meri jaan jo mere pass nhi thi.
Naina(in naughty mood) : acha to fir wo (chintu) bacha kiska tha.
Sameer : mera bachcha !!!
Naina : kya 😕
Sameer : ha matlb tum ho to mera bacha.
Naina(start hitting him) : sameer ke bachche...
Sameer(while running) : wo bi ho jayenge. Batao kitne chahie 😆
Naina : aaj mai tumhe chodungi nhi..
Sameer : waise mjhe twins bi banane aate hai..😃

The title of the story is The end of sameer and naina bcoz ab wo samaina jo ban gaye hai

Finally khatm ho gya. Pata nhi kaisa laga hoga aap logo ko padh ke. Meri ungli me chot lag gayi thi. But still maine kisi tarh time pe complete kar diya, taki valentines day gift mil sake sare samaina lovers ko.
Thank you so much guys for your response on this story. Criticize me wholeheartedly if you find any scenes wrong. And keep suggesting
Happy Valentine's day to all jo bi double hai aur jo meri tarh single hai unke lie...

kuch nhi bhai ghar baitho tv dekho

This was really very nice