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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi Anshika
First of all , mujhe batao jara ke Samaina ke total kitne bar kiss keya 😳 ke bechari Naina thak gaye 😆

Lekin phir bhi Sameer ka man nahi bhara 😉
Arjun finally samajh gaya , accha hai bas aage chal ke Samaina ke help bhi kare against na jaye 🥱

So Sameer ignore karna vo Naina ko 🤣 Bad joke , but pure ek week kiya toh kafi difficult hoga 😭. But still care toh bahut karta hai , vaise karta toh pyaar bhi bahut hai par samajhne me thora time lagega .
Main order karunge toh... that line cracked me up . And bahut cute bhi tha . Literally care karna bhi koe Sameer se sikhe ignore karne try kar rahe hai care karna nahi chor shakta 👏
Thank God Judi jada lamba nahi chala , I know main thore lalchi hun mujhe laga music room me ek kiss hoga 😛 .
So now I am looking forward for their romantic dates and socially for chupke chupke romance 😳

And mere na ek chotu se wish hai , ab lagata nahi ke Cvs pure karange . Toh tum he kardo , ek college toh banta hai after all ab Samaina gf - bf jo hai
😳

And yeah mujhe toh actually accha laga ke inta jaldi love confession nahi hua , hona bhi nahi chaheye Sameer ko thora time to lage ga he realises karne me .

Enjoy your brother's engagement but try karna jaldi update karne na , I think next part me Samaina ke date hoge na 😳 l can't wait ☺️


With love
Shruti
Edited by Shrutikamal - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Mouth watering update.
Loved the entire plot
Lekin ese end kaun karta hai bhaiii?????
Na ji naaa
Humko to tum beech me hi latka kr chale gaye.
Aisa nahi chalega

Everything was perfect
Sameer's concern for her food
His ignorant behaviour
Naina's heartache and her efforts to get his attention
On and all
Dharti phaad update...

Eagerly waiting for the next one
Keep smiling buddy
Labhya
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinku18

So many kisses...cool.

But then sudden guilt and separation and that too for eight days. Though the eight days spent with full ignoring part and Naina's emotions were being shared perfectly but what I missed is Sameer's side of emotions after having all asanskari thoughts for Naina before the millennium 'kiss' and finally sharing the kiss with her. It would have been rather difficult for Sameer than Naina to spend those eight days without seeing, talking and touching her after being so close to her once.
I missed Sameer's pov over here.
But all's well that ends well.
Waiting for more lovely moments and update ahead.


Ok first, thnx for the detailed review. Actually, I have saved Sam's pov for the next update. I guess I will make much more sense then.
Well, I will update by next week. I guess u know the reason
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Panktiii

Chp was sooo good 😊 waiting to read another part😃


Will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: munchkinland

Anshikha wow my friend
matlab yha bow down kaise kru
lekin smjh jao
okay na
But ek min aise kaun karta hain bhai
yha aise update khatm kr dia
In Ekta Kapoor style
kyu
kyu
kyu
And my god you want me dead or what haa
kisses ki barish hogyi yha toh
aur yeh rukte bhi nhi agr matlb saans lena jaruri nhi hota toh
my cheeks god they hurt
they are soo red
my mother thinks I have some disease
that my cheeks keep turning red time to time
ab kaise smjhau unhe ki samaina ka jadu sir chad kr bol rha hain
Chlo acha update ki tarf vapsi
Naina was really excited about the kiss
but mr maheshwari thoda pran vale mode main chle gye hain
ki he will stay away and blah blah
like really man
after kissing her and not able to stop yourself from continuously doing that aap avoid krenge
waah fake claps for you
arjun apologized to his sisters
great
but mujhe aisa kyu lag rha hain yeh abhi drame krega aage
jb sameer naina ke baare main pta chle ga
chlo dekhte hain
Yeh ladka sach main bhut bhuddhu hain
he tried to ignore his joru
matlb seriously
thappad nhi pada naina se shukar mnao
but I loved this cute sa ruthna
main rutha hu
smjh jao
lekin khana khao
haha hilarious
aise avoid krte hain
bs kya kehne aapke toh
naina was bound to be hurt with this behavior
but I am glad she confronted him
and yeh joru ka gulaam ek min main apne pran se fisal gya
apni naina ke aasu dekhkr
how sweet is he
matlb gussa bhi nhi reh skte hum toh mr maheshwari se
He accepted that he likes her to very much and would like to date her
beta yeh pyar hain pyar
Naina ka slip of tongue hote hote reh gya
and she also said pasand instead of pyar
oh ha I forgot to mention how naina told him that she isn't guilty and understands his past actions
very endearing
They have to now hide this relationship from others
mushkil hone wala hain yeh toh bhut
and how will they keep their emotions in check in front of others
yeh toh dekhna banta hain
Aur jo yeh last line thi na aaj se tum meri girl friend main tumhara boy friend
kya mast thi
bole toh ekdum jhakkas
mujhe badi pasnd aayi
aur ha iss line ke baad ek kiss banti thi na
kyu nhi di
I am gussa nowWink
P.s. my request time
mujhe aisa laga jaise update choti thi
main bhut lalchi hu
toh badi vali update next ha
p.p.s. you are mind-blowing
no ghumana of story
sidhe baat pe aana
thank you for doing that
p.p.p.s. You were talking about your love for viat kohli
oh god hi five
we need to talk about this
I am pming you
p.p.p.p.s tumahri aadat ki vjh se mujhe bhi aadat hogyi bhut sare p.s dene ki
And yes continue soon
main stalk krungi okay

lots of love
suhani


Suhani ji, pehle toh advance mein sorry, detailed reply na dene ke liye, par even if I try, my mummy will start that I am not helping her for the big day. I can't mess with that😆


Anyway, mujhe pata that ki readers Ko kisses pasand ayegi, meri tarah asanskari mind hai unka😆

Red cheeks ka toh filhaal koi ilaaj nahi hai, sorry😳

Naina is very mature, got him out of his guilt, and increased his level of self confidence😊

P.S ki aadat dalwa di maine. 😆 Itna influence story ka.😆

Oh God, u like Virat too, matlab mera toh die hard obsession aur crush hai, aapka level mujhe nahi pata.

PM pe zyada baat nahi ho pati thi us din, u know I was busy. Par I m relatively free next week. Then we can discuss our VK obsession.😆

P.S reply detailed ho hi gaya😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: -svetalana-

Beautiful, beautiful update Loved this chapter and this was important to clear off their state of mind. Awesome update. Thanks for this


Thank u for the feedback
Glad u liked the update😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
New reader alert ... Read the story in one go and loved it... Story baaki stories se alag hai aur aachi bhi..
Naina ki innocene and sammer ka chupa hua pyaar haye kitni care kartha hai vo ohhh jow i loved it
Ab next updte jaldi se kardo i cant wait to read it
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina

bhayi bs ek kiss se main ubhari bhi nhi thi

aur yha rounds of kissing ho rhe hain
give my poor heart a rest
be kind towards it
but I am not complaining okay
chappr fad kr do kisses
main bhut khush hu
ok I expected to behave that way
lekin you my friend wow
thank you for not stretching it unnecessarily and leading them to becoming a couple
vaise mr maheshwari itne bhi expert nhi hain ignore krne main
aisa ignore kaun krta hain
matlb usse jabardasti khana khila rhe the janab
chahe khud pav bhaji miss ki hogi
lekin naina toh pav bhaji hi khayegi
And chlo I am happy arjun cleared his diffrences with his sisters
But looking forward how will they hide their relationship from others
and keep themselves in control
continue soon


Writer jab kiss dete hai toh Chapper phaad ke dete hai😉
Ignoring phase se readers Ko nafrat hai, aur mujhe bhi, so Sam Ko iss art mein accha nahi banaya Gaya hai😆
Pav bhaji ki toh baat hi mat karo😃
Glad u liked the bro sis scene
Ok, for that stay tuned
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina9

Nice update... I'm in Love with this story... Waiting 4 the nxt update...


Thanks 😛
Will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: fizah07

Nice one.waiting for the nxt part


Thanks
Will update soon

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