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Satpriya

@Satpriya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#621

Hi,

Kya update tha yaar👏

I just drooled over the kiss.

And chewed up my fingers after thinking agar kiss ne dekh liya toh Kya hoga.

Yaar agla update jaldi de na warna nakhun nahi bachenge

Update k intezaar mein bekarar

Priya

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aditi0410

@aditi0410

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Posted: 6 years ago

#622

O bai kya update h. Kya romantic update h.wo kahte h na hum ne manga ek glass pani hume to sager mil gaya. After reading i am speechless.i was blushing hard till now. Naina ka sameer k liy good luck wala dahi shakker is so much real.i loved the way sameer couldn't control his emotions and kissed her And naina to respond. Aage bhi hum jaise lalchi readers ko aise hi romantic scene aur jaldi update chaiye. Jyada time mat lena next update m kyunki i am curious to know how they felt after kiss.aur conffesion b jaldi dena. Loved your writing skill and the way you show every emotion,its look like we saw them in real and blushed too.as always Owsom update

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UnknownJhalli

@UnknownJhalli

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Posted: 6 years ago

#623

Haaye Raam !!

I am blushing like a tomato right now just because of your " bada twist "☺️

Such a cute update

It's my current favourite ff 😳

I want the next part very soon

Can't wait

Lots of love ❤️

Aishwarya

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tannulove07

@tannulove07

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Posted: 6 years ago

#624

update really exciting & romantic tha ... please update soon wating for the next update ...

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Shippu92

@Shippu92

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Posted: 6 years ago

#625

Read all parts in a go must say very engaging story. Very well written loved the tension, romance and jealousy. I am looking forward for further update. .

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Rashi0812

@Rashi0812

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Posted: 6 years ago

#626

Awesome loved it❤️

all the preparations before the big match was shown so prefectly👏

Acha hai shoe nahi thi iss update mein

Entire match scene was so good aisa lag raha tha main sachmuch match dekh rahi

Captain of vjn ne ek baar wave kya kar diya ki ek ladki behosh hi ho gayi😆😆 Humare captain Sahab ka jaadu hai😉

Jealous sameer team ke saare ladkon se Rakhi bandhwani hai😆

Last part❤️😳

Thanks for the PM

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Svetalana Singh

@-svetalana-

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Posted: 6 years ago

#627

Wow beautiful update. The story flow is awesome. I hope Sameer soon confess his love for naina. Waiting for next update.

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Snehath

@Snehath

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Posted: 6 years ago

#628

That was a fabulous update yaar... When u mentioned about a big twist ahead i never expected this kind of a good twist... I seriously imagined the worst scenario possible . Mei soch rahi thi ki kahi iss baar Shoe aake Sameer ko propose karogi, aur arjun force karke usse accept karne ko bolega ...so that karthik will get hurt..agar aisa twist hei toh i would have cried my eyes out and stopped reading... Mujhse Shoe aur prem bardash nahi hotim..Thank u so much for giving such a wonderful twist. u have given a new meaning to the word twist dr...aise hi achi updates dedo... Pls make shoe and other stays away from Samaina..

Eagerly waiting for ur next update

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Pooja1973

@Pooja1973

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Posted: 6 years ago

#629

Awesome update...the detailing of the match was great...the kiss was so hot n sensuous...Acha wala twist tha...now waiting for more..now they should both confess..thanks for pm.

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