My brother's best friend - ff (New thread updated) - Page 65

Originally posted by: Sivasri

Dhamakedaar twist...

Originally posted by: Yudkbh30

Wow...Amazing update with

Hot & Romantic twist..

This is an unexpected twist...

Twists are generally very dangerous

But this twist is so passionate & hot

Awesome

plz update soon

Originally posted by: Guptasuchi

Amazing update...Superb... 😊😊

Originally posted by: Simadi

Oh my gosh!!!!!!! They kissed...is it real or not...hoping it not to be a dream again...

Excellent update yr.. waiting for the next dhamaka..

Originally posted by: Rph09

Okay I'm dead!!! Mere ankh se ansu nikal aya i had guessed they'll kiss in this part. Phir bhi 440 volt ka jhatka laga yaar.

Sabka haal wohi hai😆

Shirtless sameer ko dekh k naina ka kya haal hua hoga. Thanks sameer this time u didn't control urself.

Iss Baar mujhe Laga ki bechara meri wajah se kitna tadpega, use show mein hi tadapne do

Ek toh they won the match upar se naina ka kiss! Sameer must be singing aj main upar asmaan niche

Surely dear😆

😆 Every student of vjn wanted to win but naina dil se sameer ko jeette dekhna chahti thi. That's why she cried while praying. Dahi sakkar ne bana di jodi yaar 😆

Ab sab ghar pe dahi cheeni khakar hi cricket dekhna😆

I'm still blushing. Why did u stop there 😭😭😭 I wanted to read more. Ek kiss k baad again he kissed her. Gosh it was sooo hot!

Abhi scene is not over, and yes, it's a spoilerrr...

I have a request can u please update next part tomorrow? 😭 I can't wait! Kiss k baad kya hua hoga.

I will update by Friday or Saturday, actually I m very very busy these days. Sorry to keep waiting

Originally posted by: Shinku18

Finally the wait is over... After the sensuous hug, even more sensuous kiss. Amazing update and the description of their wild and uncontrollable desires. Loved it. Seriously can't wait for the next update.

Originally posted by: Pallavikamble

Hey dear thanks for the PM

I like the twist...samainas kiss...u have written that movement really good...

Cant wait for next...

Originally posted by: SAMAINA1999

So nice next part post soon 😆😉

Originally posted by: Samaina_loverzz

Dear

I have no words to xpress this Chapter...

Loved Sameer's Possessive side... Sameer ka toh bas chale Ki woh saare ladko KO Naina ke hathon se rakhi bhandhwadhe...

Sam ke Jeevan ka lakshya yahin hai😆

And last part was just superb with hot and steamy romance and FINALLY Sameer ka sapna pura ho hi gaya Bechara kitna tadap raha tha Akhir ka woh sach ho hi gaya...

So happy ki readers happy hai😆

Main toh puri tarah blush kar rahi thi and Sam ko tho Bas rukh me ka sawal hi nahi paida hota

Scene not over yet

Anyways Chapter was Really Awesome...

Please update next chapter ASAP..

Glad u liked it and thanks😃

And on next chapter I don't need Naina/Sameer feeling guilty about it And Jaldh hi Un Duno ka confession kar hi dho..

Wait for the next

KEEP SMILING

THULASI NAIR

Originally posted by: ratnarao12

What a lovely update

The way u described the buildup to the match ,the toss,the batting by opponents and then by our hero was just awesome

Dahi shakkar part too was so sweetly written ...

And as for the last part

Ahem ahem *** ***

Simply fantastic