My brother's best friend - ff (New thread updated) - Page 64

Originally posted by: munchkinland

Anshikha my friend you are one terrific writer

And btw I really would want to know that you don't mind me calling me by your name every time I comment?

I do that because that way I feel connected to you.

I know wierd but never mind haa.

No it's not wierd at all. In fact, even I feel more connected when I am called by my name😆

First of all thank you for hearing me out and giving us such a long update

I do know that it takes a lot of time to write and even reply to your readers but still you gave us such a lengthy update.

Really very sweet of you.

I am happy that my readers are satisfied, I try to give long ones, but lack of time u know

I do have one more request but that I will make by the end of the comment so that you remember it and it does not get lost.Ok now coming to this chapter.

It was really wonderful.

Thank u so much

Everyone is preparing for the big match

and mr joru ka gulam does as told

eating a sandwich because he has been asked by his joru

but joru is no less she is also having the same food

hubby wifey pure hain yeh

bs shadi hi toh bachi hain

Shadi show mein hone wali hai, toh usse compensate kar lo😆

and when Sameer's gets attention from other girls

I loved Naina's reaction

"inhe badi chinta hain"

Jealous and savage mrs Maheshwari

so she ignored sameer

but madam aapke husband ki attention toh aap pr hi hain

aise kaise aap naraz ho payengi unse

Yaar ek Sam mere liye bhi laa do

aur phr aap khana aise khayengi

how will he concentrate voh toh bs aapke lips pr hi kendrit hain

Ab toh kiss mil Gaya na, happy

I am loving the bond that has been developed between the group

sameer due to his lady loves comfort has already booked her seats

can he get any more cuter

Too concerned hone wala pati

mr prem you are never getting her

so back off mr

Oh btw thank you for no sunaina here in this update and a very minimum prem cameo

Agar aur deti toh comments mein bas shoe aur Prem hating hi milta😆

Nanu teased him

and my god our boy is all shy

mr maheshwari getting shy

such a cool thing

Nanu is the best cupid yaar

Naina took extra care how to dress

already he is in problems aur yeh kaam aise aise kregi

phr toh sameer ki koi galti nhi hain

Naina Ko thodi pata tha, too innocent yaar

she took dahi shakkar

ab voh kiske liye hain

You See KISSke liye

hume bhi nhi pta

we are such innocent people

aapko toh pta hi hoga 😉

I know mere readers kitne innocent hai, mein bhi utni seedhi hoon

Sameer had the dahi shakkr from her offered spoon before anyone could claim it

possessive enough

and then voh rakhi vali baat

hilarious😆

Sameer ki kya galti hai, aise kaise uski Joru kisi aur Ko Apne Mulayam haathon se khilayegi😆

you stay away from his girl

And yes why did I call you a terrific writer was because you described the entire cricket match perfectly

and did not just let it lose

you builded up the excitement of a match

and that is great👏

Kya kare, we live in india, and I m too much cricket obsessed, pls don't get me started on it, warna reply reh jayega aur mera Virat Kohli obsession start ho jayega😆

Naina got really nervous and did not even see the last ball

That moment was really endearing when.she had tears in her eyes because he won

that love is so pure❤️

Purest form of love indeed

and now the most awaited moment

where you won't believe but I literally fell of my bed while reading it

Chhott toh nahi lagi na,

as like finally it happened

He could no longer control and gave into his desires

and she too was no less

This was bound to happen looking at the sparks flowing between them

but when it ceased to this

it was eternal😳

I fell in love with it

I am glad ki ab kiss ki iccha puri ho gayi

He did not let her go just after one kiss but had another one

My god

epic😳😳

Abhi scene Bach hai, oops, I gave a spoiler

This scene was so beautifully written

Now My request time

Please don't let them feel wierd about this

and distance themselves due to what happened

and let them soon confess

because if they don't confess soon

I will go mad at you I swear

no tadpana

jaldi confession dede na

please haa

and Now I would really like to shut up

kafi bol dia aaj ke liye

Dearest Suhani, u re my most loyal reader and I won't comment on it now, just wait for the update and trust me, ek dum blind trust karo and I promise everything will be reasonable. For now, thnx for so much love and keep reading

Lots of love

Suhani

Originally posted by: Labhya

Itna dhamakedaaar twist dekar kaun maarta hai haa?????

Pasand aaya😆

Mamaji k shabdo me kahu to...

Apna to ek hi usul hai

Saaf kehna sukhi rhna

Bole to bohot hi badiya

Maja hi aagya

hai ni hai ni hai ni.

😆

Accha hua jo shoe-naina ka aur prem ka jyada kuch nahi tha... Inko nikaalo hamare samaina ki life se...

I can never understand reader's hate for prem, itna Bura lagta hai kya😆

Along with some more samaina romance can we expect a little swamun and preedit ?????

Ok, right now toh let me wipe off my phailaya hua raita roopi twist, but I m giving swamun, I m more into Preehan actually, pandit and Preeti are better off friends. But, if u want, pm me and then we can discuss...

Kya kare dil hai ki maanta nahi...

Intezaar rahega agle update ka

Keep smiling

Labhya

Thanks labhya😃

Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina

Oh bloody god I loved the update

Thanks😛

See I will say sorry before hand

I know kafi kuch tha iss update main

lekin main vhi kiss par atki huyi ho

uske piche ka mujhe kuch yaad hi nhi rha

Sorry ha

Koi ni yaar, loyal commenters Ko choot hai and besides, I know ki kiss was a distraction

Vrna you know I always try to describe what I find good in every para

but here I am completely and entirely blown off

they kissed

ok can I dance

But My mother will kill me

so a mental happy dance

I got u guys dancing, yipeee

And the way you described the kissing

I was like wow

not many can do that

It wasn't that good, chane ki jhaad par mat chadao😆

to be hot but not gross put you did a wonderful job there

I really hope that no awkwardness crops up after this

Wait for update

and they soon confess their feelings

because to be very honest

jyada ghumayenge to mujhe bhut gussa aayega 😉

No gussa pls, pls blind trust karo mujh par.

aur main detailed comment nhi krungi

hahaha you see your readers

main dhamki de rhi hu

dhamki ki trh lena bhi isko

okay na😆

Itni danger wali dhamki mat do pls😆

continue super soon

always waiting for your updates

Originally posted by: p56789

👍🏼awesome waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Hitanshivyas

Omg omg they kissed finally...

Ab toh happy ho na😆

and hamari team ko to jitna hi tha akhir naina ke hath ka dahi-chini jo khaya tha..

Bas Naina ke haath se nahi kha paye, Khate toh sab maar khaate

yar is arjun ko kahin bhej do tum pata nahi kya problem hai use preena se...

and sameer hahaha uska bas chale to puri duniya ke ladko ko rakhi bandhwa le naina se...

I think ki show wale Sam ka yahin dream hai, sabka haal Karthik ki tarah ho jaaye😆

and the ending kya bolu uske liye to matalb maza hi aa gaya... and you know what now I can't even wait for the next update eagerly eagerly waiting for the next update zyada mat tadpana jaldi update kar dena please..

Will update soon

Originally posted by: PK2018

OMG 😛😛surely big dhamaka this is..Too hot to handle..u are keeping the readers so engrossed dear with each update n your story is not predictable at all..Ur Naina n Sameer are more like a 2019 version ,yet so charming n lovable..Love your twist in the original Sam-Naina tale n the way you weave it different every time ..😛😛