Samaina SS - Thodasa Roomani Ho Jaayen - Part 3 added 19th July - Page 3

Originally posted by: Priya2910

Awesome. Loved it.

Thanks dear! 😊

Originally posted by: _shweta98

Yayaya.. I'm loving this too much!!! Sameer understanding Naina like a pro! Temple visit woth a picnic.. hayeee loved it!!!

Preeti Pandit are also love! Kab samjhenge dono! Samajh hi jayenge.. shayad..

Loved loved loved the update ... extremely sorry for the very late comment! Keep writing!

Thanks for your sweet comment Shweta! Feels so nice to know that the readers have been able to connect and enjoy the story 😊

I too like to see PreeDit dynamics. Pata nahi what the CVs have in mind...

And any feedback is always welcome! Never too late 😊

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Mandir k bahane romance Ka idea Acha tha I liked it.. U described the beauty of the weather so nicely it felt I was present there.. Everything was so good especially last bike ride wala part where naina initiated the closeness .. Infact sameer is such a good bf he understood naina's dilemma and chose to give her space and time.. Totally loved the part.. Thanks for the pm

Thank you so much for your lovely comments dear! 😊

I am so pleased that you liked the descriptive bits about the surroundings in the story, as I am trying to develop my skills in that area. After reviewing some of my earlier stories I realised that I need to focus on details about the surroundings and attire etc too. Feedback like this really appreciated and helpful.

And glad that you enjoyed the plot too! Thanks again 😳

Originally posted by: Ramy_ani

Same thoughts

Superbly written

Thanks dear! So pleased you enjoyed it 😊

May!

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

May!

I'm super duper late for the comments on this one. But tbh, I stayed up just to read both these parts and to comment on them!

Wow! The writing was brilliant! My personal favorite was Part 2 here...the movie date...you've carefully written about everything the fandom could have anticipated...Sameer's expressions and the strong hand hold brought back memories of that "Ouch!" episode...Glad to see you showed Naina contemplating on Sameer's expressions and inherently feeling inferior and not desirable enough!

And Sameer was thinking that Naina was upset about the fight. 🤣 Men will be men! So true! So apt! Why can't men every pinpoint to the exact thing which is worrying us? Lol!

Madhuri broke the dam of control that Naina was building up and it all unleashed on him...realization dawned on him...n the way he showed how desirous he felt for her..wow! I loved the setting of the kiss here! Perfect!

Nothing less could've convinced Naina of how Sameer feels for her...and the knowing smile he gave her when they were planning for the trip! I could so imagine Sameer n his shy, knowing smile here!

The entire date cum picnic was fun to read about...the bike ride finally was much more enjoyable for the couple as well as the readers!

The moment by the brook was captured extremely well! I could visualize the entire scene very vividly including the expressions on Sameer's face as his eyes darted over to Naina's lips!

And of course, you gave us hints for Preedit- I adore them as a couple too!

The dialogues were very catchy (like when Sameer's ego doesn't allow him to reveal that Naina hadn't even touched his shoulders during their bike ride).

An amazing read! Thank you for this piece!

Love

Sur