Thank you for the wishes dear! You lifted my mood up instantly. 😃
Coming to the chapter, just one word: HOT!
Ramdhari's presence did its job, it seems. I felt here Naina's initiation is unwanted considering the atmosphere of the house, both of their emotional state. But if their love is also thought about, involved in the situation then, the desires aren't to blame, them acting upon it isn't wrong. In fact them crossing paths together will ease Sameer, to be more confident about their love as well as in his upcoming professional life, to rebuild the business which is in ashes right now. Sameer's initiation felt right to me.
That Ubalgaya was amazing. 😉
The description of the tiniest details of Naina's body language Sam has noticed made me feel warm, how romantic. Let me give you a trivia about myself, I bite my lips and start tucking my hair behind my ear when embarrassed, nervous or shy. 😆
The mention of Pink raises my heartbeats too, hahhaah, the mention of Madhuri and the extremely popular Ouch this time had me in splits. And the feeling of hotness indeed promised the raise in temperatures, kudos to you for being a talented writer.
The burnt hand, nope, his whole body was burning with the overpowering desires and the unconditional love Naina provided. the warmth of the love. The concern Naina holds for Sam and especiall, the burned skin reminded me of the Mount Abu episode and that was your intention, I suppose.
Loved, loved, loved how you conveyed how his world started revolving around her slowly, his habits, his works, his everything had the essence of Naina, his love. Beautifully described how she was slowly quenching his thirst but this makes me wonder too, more your thirsts are quenched, more you are left unsatiated.
Ice gives you a kind of pain ironically which is very pleasurable. You have used Ice so skillfully, my dear. The melting drops of ice which was the sparks of desire which led way to an inferno which I doubt would be extinguished. The body heat mingling with the chillness the ice provided along with much in love couple will be surely blush worthing and the description of their slow process to intimacy before they crash their lips onto one another was beautiful, the visual in my mind perfect to go along with the writing style. 👏
Going back for a re-read! 😃
Jhanak
