SamAina SS- Rebuilding our home note p.13 - Page 7

Originally posted by: dreamyp

Part 1 - tum dena sath mera o hum nava

My fav song.. every line every word just touch my heart..Thnx 4 using this song.. dnt mke me cry yrr..

Love.. pm me nxt tym..

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Was a beautiful update
The kitchen sequence would rank as the best but the understanding and strength that Naina gave Sameer in the room was amazing

Originally posted by: IamIbe

Originally posted by: mystique123

Hey thanks for the PM and of course for the dedication. Being new to this forum, I am flattered beyond words ❤️

WELCOME TO THE FORUM! I am also new and usually quite shy but this forum has been so pleasingly receptive to my posts that I was encouraged to write more.

What an update it was, perfect read for the Mumbai weather today ⭐️.

Sounds so good! Mumbai rains and the melo theme of my story. I am glad you are enjoying.

Watching your loved one suffer and struggle with the weight of life is the greatest pain and Sameer was buried in it, but Naina she dint stutter a bit. Your Naina was not around to grieve with him or to be compassionate.She was there to assure him of a companionship of lifetime, to heal his wounds and to give him all the love in the world.He is that part of her which she could decipher like an open book, even without uttering a single word...❤️

You have won my heart with such beautiful portrayal of Naina,the rock solid support mechanism of Sameer.

Thank you! I wanted to portray that Naina knows Sameer better then he himself does. This would help strengthen Sameer's belief in himself. I know not many people liked the Delhi track but I absolutely loved it. Yes it hurt like hell but it was such a good way to build on Sameer's characterization and how Naina and his friends pulled him out of this bad phase. It is very easy to fall into bad comapny when you are going through PTSD and think that no one around you cares. This story will build on that foundation and show that because Naina is by his side he will not go through that again rather he will face everything head on.

Blessed are those who have such fabulous person in life who just fills you with optimism and the zest for life, exactly what Naina has done for Sameer. Her words has slowly driven out of anguish and her affirmation that he could never let Nanu down, am awestruck at the way you have shaped the dialogue 👏(This one was the favorite from the show and you have used it so aptly :Sameer mai tumhe bhi bahut maanti hoon). Naina is the fairy Sameer needs today, tomorrow and forever. period!!!!

Indeed SamAina are blessed to have each other and their friends too. Thank you! I am quite wary about writing dialogues because it is quite difficult to strike a balance and not make it too cliched or overly dramatic. That was one of my favourite scenes from the show and I think to this day that line affects Sameer and will continue to do so. I see him as a vulnerable human because all he wants is someone to place their trust in him. And that is what Naina did and won Sameer's heart. That monologue with the sweater in Mount Abu gets me everytime.

I admire you for the minute detailing of Sameer's emotions while watching Naina at his home and this : His mind, his soul, his body, his home even the smallest things about him belonged to his Naina. Super happy that you made Sameer visualize Naina in the saree gifted by Nanu.😊

Thank you! I loved the way Sameer looked at Naina or Kamo when she came into their future house. That scene is actually what inspired this because I wanted to write about his reaction to Naina adapting to their future. That saree was the only gift Nanu gave her before his death. For me it symbolized a promise that above all Naina would love Sameer and Sameer would love her. Which is why that visual of the future had her in that saree.

And the 14+,ahemm...ahemmm...great build up. It was so sensuous and what not. Rains always make me happy and you added all the flavors of hot shot romance to it. I was blushing so hard that even my heart beat was at the same pace as Naina😳.They both were in pure bliss and So Am I.If Sameer's imagination could be this deadly, how would be the real encounter😉

Ahaha if I keep getting the warm response I have received till now I might even do a sequel about a married SamAina. Actually a short story is already in the making but it is more about their romantic lives than the trials and tribulations they will go through together.

Waiting for the next

Love ❤️

Originally posted by: dreamyp

JUst fabulous dear.. m lost in their passion.. love..

Originally posted by: Mayashika

The first part of the update was hauntingly beautiful, Sameer in a broken state broke my heart into pieces and Naina, I adore her, she knows the mess he has become and just being the much needed comfort to him was enough, he would not be able to answer the questions not because he didn't have answers, he was hurt and the mention of the emotional insecurities was needed. That will surely resurface and before rebuilding their home, he needs to rebuild himself.

Thank you. I am glad you thought that way. This is exactly how I want to write this story. Sameer and Naina both have a lot of work to invest in their psychological well beings. Yes they are in love but before they rebuild a future and their financial condition, it is more important to rebuild on thier insecurities. Something I thought the Delhi track and a bit of college track handled quite well but it has faded away from the show. I want to see that track again. After all, a big step in growing up is resolving your past trauma.

Wind is usually symbolised with the troubles in our life and and that was nice touch 😳

Aahh I am glad someone picked up on this symbolic. Keep your out for this symbol in the coming parts. Not all wind related symbols are indication of the bad.

The second part The conversation had my heart, Naina being the sense of warmth and comfort and stand beside him is what I wanted, both of them complete each other and she is his saathi, rightly said by Nanu. Nanu's photo would guide him and that's what matter, his presence will be felt by the couple. He's too vulnerable right now and Naina did right by not asking many question, he needs motivation to get himself and the dynasty back.

This is why I love our SamAina. They are actually one. I am really excited for you to give your feedback on the next chapter now because Naina will try even harder to get Sameer out of this state.

Mount Abu is my favourite and the parallel made my cheeks hurt, loved it dear!

Thank you! I thought it was essential having that there because she is his saviour and will always be. Her love and warmth for him gives him immense strength.

The belonging he felt Naina had in the kitchen, in their home after all she is rightfully the woman of the house. His ecstatic feeling connected to me deeper.

Desired eyes gazing at one another reminiscing their one of theireland times when they were intimate had me blushing for a long time and I am pretty sure, the ice is going to make me blush harder☺️ Loved it!

Thank you so much! Blame Randeep and his eyes which literally do something to my heart, I swear. I am still writing the ice part. Stay patient it will be here soon.