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@IamIbe

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Priya2910
Beautifully portrayed emotions. Shattered Sameer and a very sensible Naina. Both always compliment and complete each other. Well done.

Thank you so much Priya! I am glad you liked my writing! Keep supporting me <3

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Wow.. you have described his breakdown so beautifully! And Naina standing by him.. anticipating his needs and caring. She knows just how to become his strength in any moment of crisis.

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@IamIbe

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain
Wow.. you have described his breakdown so beautifully! And Naina standing by him.. anticipating his needs and caring. She knows just how to become his strength in any moment of crisis.

Thank you so much! I am glad you picked that out so well and appreciated my style. I was worried these parts might seem too draggy.

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@IamIbe

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

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@mystique123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Oh God Sims!!!!!...what was this: luscious, fiery, passionate,sensual...Argh!!!I am running out of words dear 👏😳

The intense gaze reminds me of Eyes flirt the most and the Best Kiss is the one between the Eyes before it has reached the Lips.!!!!😉

Ramdhari's Ubalgaya was the fuel in the burning fire for Naina.😳

Even in the ruckus, the boiling passion may be in the spur of the moment with Sameer looking on for support and Naina surrendering to his feelings. But if you look at it from a broader perspective, physical intimacy is more than exchange of emotions or hormonal surges, it is sharing the totality of personal energy, emotions and in a way mental support as well. So even in such a state,this could be the boost that Sameer needs to become a Pheonix bird.

Adore the minute detailing of Naina's gestures though you have chosen to show it as Sameer reading Naina as if she is an open book to him. He just connects with her soul so deeply, Naina is the mystery only he can unfold.😊

Pink and Naina brimming up desire in him as if she is the sunshine and he is the planet pulled towards her by her gravity.

Mt.Abu had changed his life and she had become his world, his heart beat ⭐️

The burnt hand.the touch and the symbolism of ice:She was the fire that ignited him, the heat of her body soothed his frozen heart and he was ready to step into the inferno just to feel her warmth. And then he became the fire and she the ice and nothing could melt them as they embraced in desire.😳. When two souls who are committed to life are ignited, their yearning is inexplicable.😊

I dint fail to notice all those one liners which just added to the beauty of the update 😊

Do I need to tell more how much I loved it.❤️

Lots of Love 🤗

Edited by mystique123 - 7 years ago

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Lakshmi

@lakku19

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Hot..

It was too good..

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

It was too hot and passionate .. They lyrics matched well.. . Am looking forward for the journey of sameer jaiprakash maheshwari soon .. That ice romance was too good