Samaina SS : The Bet Reversal (ON Hold) *Note on Pg 26 - Page 9

Originally posted by: dreamyp

Hey ayushi

Fab concept n hv started on right pace.. well written.. me to abi se darne lgi ki sameer ko pta chla to kya hoga..Gosh. goosebumps aa gye.. loved it..

Love

Meenakshi

Originally posted by: mystique123

Aayushiii...

Shall I describe this as Ravishing!!!!I guess I should.😊

Awww! Thank you so much yaar 🤗

If chapter1 could be so beautiful, I cant even imagine how it would be as the story unfolds. 👏

Wow! You do praise me a lot! ☺️ Thanksss!

So the bet phase has commenced, I hate Kamya and her mannerisms. Who the hell is she is to mock my Naina 😡. Then I pacified myself that it is just a matter of time, my Naina would emerge victorious. I am trying to visualize Kamya's reaction now itself. Stupid me right, but yeah I am so much hooked to your story 😉

I hate kamya too, but I like writing her character here 😆 Exactly, I pacify myself saying she's gonna face worse things ahead 😉 Haha I can imagine her too, when she gets to know Sameer-Naina have fallen in love 😳 That's great! I love that you're hooked and my first chapter could do that 😊

Three love stories, how would my poor heart cope with this. My Preedit heart did skip a beat!!! Immensely happy to see the growing friendship between MP and SwaPreeNa.

I guess everyone absolutely loves the fact that I'm giving the three love stories. I actually wanted to give Preedit parts as well as Swamun parts but the chapter went long, next time I will 😃

The prankster Preeti, was it her plan to lock down Samaina, did she really believe they would have a heart to heart convo. To be frank, I was scared with this harkat of hers and but you made it look as the best plan when I saw change in Sameer's demeanor, admire your story telling.😊

Ohh yeah, Preeti is smart 😉 Preeti being preeti doesn't understand what would have happened inside, she just meant to play her cards out, they are big "chitrahaar" fans you see 😆 Ladka ladki aise hi paas aate hain uske hisaab se 😛

Both of them are almost devoid of their mothers in their life, but that broken piece certainly has brought them together.

I'm so glad to know you liked the way the library conversation shaped out. Yes, I wanted to show that as the start of their relationship 😳

My greedy heart wanna know what happened next, bless us soon pretty soon please 😳

Lots and Lots of Love

I'll try giving it very very soon 😃
Thanks so much! Loads of love to you <3

Originally posted by: Ishh..

I'm loving this story... its amazing!!👏

Thank you ishu! 😃 Hope you don't mind me calling you that :) Glad you liked the story.

This time bet is from naina's side..but love is real. Actually i'm curious to know sameer's reaction after this bet revelation.

That would take a bit of time since, I have to make him fall head over heels in love with her 😳

We have seen it how naina was shattered after this...and i'm sure Sameer will too shattered after knowing the fact that she do this for the bet...which actually is the half truth.

Yes! Absolutely, you're right, he shouldn't take it well! But he will know half the truth. 😊 Maybe his reaction would be extreme, you never know :)

But how naina will regain his trust... is going to be amazing.

She would have to earn it , that's all I can say 😛

Waiting for the next update!!

Thanks for pm.

Thank you! I'll update soon 😃

With love,

Ishu.

Much love ⭐️

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Ayu! I am late, aren't I? 😲 Well, loved the first chapter! 😳

Haha no! You're not late my music buddy 😉 Thank youu! :)

Firstly, the voiceover instantly connected to me and I knew it I would have to follow this story till the end. 😉

Gladdd! So glad that the voiceovers hit the right cord with someone at least 😆 I'm glad they'll make you come back here!

Just like Sameer in the show, older Naina regrets the bet with the same intensity, I have concluded from the voiceover.

Yes! Exactly, she does regret it. You'll know more as it goes forward! 😳

Well, Kamya is gonna be a pain in the ass in the story!! But can't say much you know, she has to win the bet so she will say all these demotivating things but it's Naina, she shouldn't pay much heed to all her stupid talks. 🥱

Truee 😛 Kamya is here to stay, she is the trigger that'll get many things done 😉 Let's see how Naina reacts to her in future :)

I will be honest here, sweetie. I am not feeling good about Preeti not knowing the fact that Naina is actually in love with Sameer, I am already expecting a confrontation between the sisters. Isn't it unfairness upon Preeti?

I understand! The Preeti angle was thought by me for a reason! I'll let you know about that in the upcoming chapters 😊 It is unfair, you'll know how and why it is happening.

Ok,😆 the story just started but this one is keeping me hooked, loving it.

Haha! Glad again that something keeps you hooked ;)

Preeti is full of ideas😳

The conversation between the girls has provoked Naina to act over the bet, this emotional switches is what I am keen about.

She'll be in a lot of dilemma over the updates, obviously she will fall harder and along with it regret will follow 😛

Gosh, motu-patlu cracked me up so badly considering M for Motu, M for Munna. P for Patlu, P for Pandit. 🤣

That was the intention! Finally someone got it 😆😛

The small scene where Swati felt emotional seeing Naina laugh finally, friendship goals!😳

Thankss! I really wanted to showcase that in here 😃 You can get more of friendship in this as it goes further :)

Like the voiceover, the bet is gonna be the biggest cupid between them too and I am excited how you portrays it.

Yes, it will indeed be. I am excited too seeing how much you love this chapter, I have to make the next one even better 😳

Getting them locked in the library was a part of the plan but the conversation that happened between them wasn't it's part and I didn't need the voiceover to understand it, it's impossible to fake such heartfelt tears😭

I know, no one really needed a voiceover to understand that. Naina may have taken interest in the bet, but she can never be manipulative right? 😊 Yes, all of their talks and tears were real!

An emotional start to their friendship and now I am excited for the next!🤗

Happy to see you liked it so much Shreya! ⭐️ Much love <3

P.S. Btw I wanted to know the reason behind your UN! Mayashika? Maya is it related to jennifer? Idk I just wondered it right now. :)

Originally posted by: A.Green

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Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Hi Aayushi!😃

Hey Minu! 🤗

Wow..Must say you have really designed the outline well.The bet already on show and delivering some unforgettable epis..its difficult to match up to those episodes ...

Thank you for saying that 😳 I agree, I am not even trying to match it up, it'll be different and interesting in its own unique way :)

But you have taken the challenge and must say you are delivering it in perfection.👏👏

Glad you felt so! 😃 Happy to see you liked this chapter!

I could visualise each scene..Naina's predicament,Kamya's bitchiness and Preeti and Swati's excitement.

Visualization is the key to success so I think I achieved what I wanted if you could do that 😊

The dialogues are crafted really well.,The VO takes the cake.I could imagine reading them in Sadiya's voice.😃

Thanks for liking the dialogues and the voice over! I wrote them in a way that I could imagine them myself 😉

The library scene was emotional yet a new beginning.Loved the scene.

Yayy! Thank you so much!

Can't wait to see whats next on Naina's plan.

Update soon plz and thanks for the PM.

Will update soon and hope the next one can interest you just as much! :)

With love-

Minu.

Much love <3