Samaina SS : The Bet Reversal (ON Hold) *Note on Pg 26 - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Mayashika

You're welcome😳
Yep, you got it right. Being the biggest fan of Jennifer, I had to name my UN related to her so Maya comes from there. And also, before naming me Shreya, one of the names suggested was Mayashika so that's the reason behind my UN. 😃


Ohh! 😲 It was one of the names suggested for you aww 😳

It's nicee! Unique and different. Haha so Maya was the right guess 😉

I particularly noticed her beauty and brilliance in Beyhadh myself, I never thought an actress could perform so brilliantly
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: A.Green


Ohh! 😲 It was one of the names suggested for you aww 😳

It's nicee! Unique and different. Haha so Maya was the right guess 😉

I particularly noticed her beauty and brilliance in Beyhadh myself, I never thought an actress could perform so brilliantly

It's kinda unique name😃
Gosh, YAS! Jenny remains my girl crush forever❤️ She is amazing!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Mayashika

It's kinda unique name😃
Gosh, YAS! Jenny remains my girl crush forever❤️ She is amazing!


Truee she is class apart! Can make any character memorable
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
loved the update ayushi...
things are getting interesting...

i'm keen to see how the other 2 girls also realise their true love during this course of "bet"

i would love to read sameer's voice over too... especially coz it was missing in the show during the bet phase

waiting for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: -vandy-

loved the update ayushi...

things are getting interesting...

i'm keen to see how the other 2 girls also realise their true love during this course of "bet"

i would love to read sameer's voice over too... especially coz it was missing in the show during the bet phase

waiting for the next update


Thank you Vandy! 😃
Glad you liked it :)

Ohh yes! Everyone is gonna realize something during this bet 😆
I wanted to give Sameer's voice over, you will get it in the next one for sure 😳
Will update soon! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
Wonderful beginning dear...loved how you correlated the show n ur story n drew beautiful parallels here...is baar detailed comment nai de pa rai...sorry yaar...next pe udhar raha! Keep writing...
Love
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Wonderful beginning dear...loved how you correlated the show n ur story n drew beautiful parallels here...is baar detailed comment nai de pa rai...sorry yaar...next pe udhar raha! Keep writing...

Love
Sur


Thank you! 😳
I am glad you think I managed to do that 😊
Koi nahii! I understand you're busy! I'm just happy you took out the time to read it :)
Thanks again 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey dear Aayushi, first of all really sorry for late reply.
I got busy with some stuff so I wasn't able to take some time and read updates.
Now I'll only read now.

Now coming to this update!
It was awesome start.
First chapter is beautiful, and beautiful portrait.
Naina is frightening to do something beyond her own limit.
That was beautifully expressed by naina's behaviour and VO
But she couldn't step back because of Kamya and Swati.
Preeti finding it funny, she's way positive girl which make every situation light and pleasant.
Aeda ban ke peda khana hai Swati or Preeti Ko 😆
Loving the situation which bring them close.
Continue soon.
Thanks for pm.
Will be reading soon you preedit os.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Hey dear Aayushi, first of all really sorry for late reply.

I got busy with some stuff so I wasn't able to take some time and read updates.
Now I'll only read now.

Now coming to this update!
It was awesome start.
First chapter is beautiful, and beautiful portrait.
Naina is frightening to do something beyond her own limit.
That was beautifully expressed by naina's behaviour and VO
But she couldn't step back because of Kamya and Swati.
Preeti finding it funny, she's way positive girl which make every situation light and pleasant.
Aeda ban ke peda khana hai Swati or Preeti Ko 😆
Loving the situation which bring them close.
Continue soon.
Thanks for pm.
Will be reading soon you preedit os.


Heyy! Its alright, hope all is fine with you 😊
You finish up your priorities first, all this can wait 😳

Thank you! Happy to know you found the start satisfactory :)
Glad you liked Naina's behaviour and voice over, it made you connect means I achieved what I needed 😃
Yeah! Naina isn't keen on this but she has to go ahead. Preeti is always there to lighten up the mood 😉
Haha I guess you like the line 😆
Thanks again for liking it so much :*

You take your time reading it, no hurries ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aayushi.. I was waiting for this, but I'm late to comment

First of all, let me tell you.. I was comparing each scene with the show and I was very happy while doing this 😃

Wonderful start dear.. Totally loved it!! 👍🏼

I don't like this Kamya.. But she is the reason to bring them closer, toh seh lenge hum usse 😆

I liked the way, how did you involve Preeti in this Bet.. Preeti se achha helper koi ho hi nahi sakta 😉

At least Naina is concerned about his heart.. Sameer ko toh pehle wo bhi nahi thi

Seriously, I was laughing like a crazy when I read Swati and Preeti were adding fuel to the fire 😆.. dekha to sirf MunDit ko hai par ye padhke sach mein bohot achha laga

Motu patlu ko patao.. MunDit ko bhi patana hai ab Naina ko.. "Mere chakkar mein tum dono yeda ban kar peda khana chahti ho this line literally cracked me up.. Too hilarious 🤣.. You have written their conversation so beautifully 👏

Why do I feel that the door was closed by only SwaPre?.. Isase mujhe picnic ke time MunDit ne SS ko library mein lock kiya tha ye yaad aa gaya 😆

Finally, their friendship has started, and the first topic was mother.. So they have started to attach emotionally 😊

Jab kamya ko pata chalega ki wo dono dost ban gaye hai tab uski shakal dekhne layak hogi 😆

Are you thinking of Romeo-Juliet drama in the story too?.. Then please cast Naina as Juliet at least here 😳

I must say that, it's a bit daring concept.. Because she is such a simple girl then it's hard job to make him fall for her.. And in the show, Sameer had a charm and Naina was already in love with him, so it was a little easier for him but it would be interesting to see what Naina will do.. And hats off you for this 👏👏

Please update soon and thanks for the PM

About PreeDit OS.. I will read it in 2-3 days

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