Originally posted by: _.SilentHeart._
Aayushi.. I was waiting for this, but I'm late to commentYou were waiting for it? 😳 That's enough for me 😊First of all, let me tell you.. I was comparing each scene with the show and I was very happy while doing this 😃
Wow! You were able to compare it, gladd! Thank you 🤗
Wonderful start dear.. Totally loved it!! 👍🏼
Thanks a lot Sona! ⭐️
I don't like this Kamya.. But she is the reason to bring them closer, toh seh lenge hum usse 😆
Hahaha!! You have to bear her for a while bas 😆😛
I liked the way, how did you involve Preeti in this Bet.. Preeti se achha helper koi ho hi nahi sakta 😉
Exactly!! Preeti ke faadu ideas sabki waat laga denge 🤣
At least Naina is concerned about his heart.. Sameer ko toh pehle wo bhi nahi thi
Haan! Coz she's already in love with the boy :)
Seriously, I was laughing like a crazy when I read Swati and Preeti were adding fuel to the fire 😆.. dekha to sirf MunDit ko hai par ye padhke sach mein bohot achha laga
Haha! I could imagine them doing this. 😆 Thanks! Glad you could relate this as well 😳
Motu patlu ko patao.. MunDit ko bhi patana hai ab Naina ko.. "Mere chakkar mein tum dono yeda ban kar peda khana chahti ho this line literally cracked me up.. Too hilarious 🤣.. You have written their conversation so beautifully 👏
Nahi nahi, unko Preeti-Swati pata lengi 😆 so you did find it hilarous, I liked adding it but no one appreciated it. Glad you did 😛 Thankss! I wanted to write their conversation nicely! :)
Why do I feel that the door was closed by only SwaPre?.. Isase mujhe picnic ke time MunDit ne SS ko library mein lock kiya tha ye yaad aa gaya 😆
Haha yes. Preeti closed the door, voice over of Naina tells it na 😉 same type ki harkatein krenge na 😆
Finally, their friendship has started, and the first topic was mother.. So they have started to attach emotionally 😊
Yes! Before bonding any other way, I think emotional level is a good pedestal 😃
Jab kamya ko pata chalega ki wo dono dost ban gaye hai tab uski shakal dekhne layak hogi 😆
Sabko ye reaction bada dekhna hai! I'll have to give this in next one 😛
Are you thinking of Romeo-Juliet drama in the story too?.. Then please cast Naina as Juliet at least here 😳
I haven't really thought about that as of now. Will try to give something on those lines :)
I must say that, it's a bit daring concept.. Because she is such a simple girl then it's hard job to make him fall for her.. And in the show, Sameer had a charm and Naina was already in love with him, so it was a little easier for him but it would be interesting to see what Naina will do.. And hats off you for this 👏👏
Thanks! I know this can go terribly wrong if I write even one thing in a wrong way. Yes, it'll be hard to make him fall for her but I want them to progress as friends first 😳
Pyaar toh ab kabhi bhi kaise bhi ho jaata hai 😳 Glad you feel I have done justice till now :)
Please update soon and thanks for the PM
About PreeDit OS.. I will read it in 2-3 days
Will try updating soon and you take your time 😃 Thanks a lot for this wonderful comment! Der aaye durust aaye 😉