Samaina SS : The Bet Reversal (ON Hold) *Note on Pg 26

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Ayu, kya mast update tha😃

Ye Kamya humesha Naina ko indirectly trigger krti rhegi.. Aur uske fayda SamAina ko hoga

Preeti-Swati ki planning😆 Naina k liye thi ya apne liye.. Anyways, ek teer se teen nishane😉

Preeti ne lock kiya unhe library mein.. Aisa khurafati dimag usi ka h😆

Dosti ho gyi SamAina ki.. Ab Kamya jal bhun k rakh ho jayegi😃

I want to see everyone's reaction on knowing ki ab Sameer aur Naina dost h😛

Update soon

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Chaaru

@chaaru26

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Loved the first part

Aww...Naina is concerned about Sameer getting hurt

So Preeti doesnt know that Naina really loves Sameer... interesting

Motu- patlu😆

Topper Naina not concentrating on Preeti's subject🤣

And the last part, locked in library and friendship starting between them was amazing😳

Thank for the pm and eagerly waiting for the next update

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Aayushi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani
loved the update dear
wowww
So finally friendship ho gyi Samaina mein good
Preeti and her great ideas "hum tum ek library mein band ho"
Sameer gussa Maheshwari still he is a sweetheart
kamya is such an evil
And PreeDit and SwaMun to set ho gye
It was awesome
plzzz update soon
I m waiting
Lots of love 😳
Aishwarya

Thank you so much! 😃

Haan finally they have become friends :)

Haha yeahh, library mein band hon ;) Preeti is indeed smart haan?

Yeah, he never intends to hurt her 😳

Kamya will be purely evil in here :P Sabki setting hogi end tak 😆

Thank you! I will try updating soon enough 😊

Love

Aayushi :)

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Aayushi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Ayu, kya mast update tha😃
Ye Kamya humesha Naina ko indirectly trigger krti rhegi.. Aur uske fayda SamAina ko hoga

Preeti-Swati ki planning😆 Naina k liye thi ya apne liye.. Anyways, ek teer se teen nishane😉

Preeti ne lock kiya unhe library mein.. Aisa khurafati dimag usi ka h😆

Dosti ho gyi SamAina ki.. Ab Kamya jal bhun k rakh ho jayegi😃

I want to see everyone's reaction on knowing ki ab Sameer aur Naina dost h😛

Update soon

Thank you Anji! 🤗

Haha haan indirectly cupid play kar deti hai Kamya 😉 Aage aage dekho Kamya is very important here 😆

Jiske liye bhi plan kara ho, plan krke sabka fayda ho gya ;)

Haan! Preeti is the prankster, uski aur Sameer ki achi jamegi 😛😆

Yep, friends ban gye hain! Kamya ko shock lagega :P

Dikha denge phir sabka reaction. 😃

Will update soon! :)

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Aayushi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: chaaru26
Loved the first part
Aww...Naina is concerned about Sameer getting hurt
So Preeti doesnt know that Naina really loves Sameer... interesting
Motu- patlu😆
Topper Naina not concentrating on Preeti's subject🤣
And the last part, locked in library and friendship starting between them was amazing😳
Thank for the pm and eagerly waiting for the next update

Thank you! 😳

Yes, she is concerned about him :)

Preeti knows half the truth for now, but she is so smart, it won't take her long to understand 😛

Hehe you liked Motu-Patlu, after writing it I realize these names match with their first names, Munna-Pandit 😆

Yeah, wavering concentration :P

Glad you liked the last bit too 😳

Thanks again! Will update soon! 😊

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Priya

@Priya2910

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Smashing update.

Kya bonding hai Swapreena ki. And Preeti is so full of dhansu ideas. Sameer ke Saath Saath Munna aur Pandit ki bhi love story shuru ho gaye...Haan Haan.. .Abhi Samaina ka friendship phase chalega. They need to first get to know each other better. That strong bond needs to be formed.

But loved the way you are handling this bet reversal concept . Well done. Looking forward for more updates.

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Samainadeewani

@Samainadeewani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

I'm loving it

This is engaging to another level and voice over makes it more close to the show ..

That kamya is soon going to burn with jealousy when sameer will ignore her .. I'm so waiting for that day ..

Her face will be worth watching

Munna Pandit ki toh free fund mein chaandi ho gai !!

It was cute

Naina is worried about his reaction when he will get to know about the whole bet drama whereas Preeti is sure he will be unaffected .. Hmm its going to be a amezing journey

The library scene was soo cute

The situation was planned but what happened was real

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Update soon

Love

Laalchi reader

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MeenAkshi Kalra

@dreamyp

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Hey ayushi

Fab concept n hv started on right pace.. well written.. me to abi se darne lgi ki sameer ko pta chla to kya hoga..Gosh. goosebumps aa gye.. loved it..

Love

Meenakshi

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Aayushi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Priya2910
Smashing update.
Kya bonding hai Swapreena ki. And Preeti is so full of dhansu ideas. Sameer ke Saath Saath Munna aur Pandit ki bhi love story shuru ho gaye...Haan Haan.. .Abhi Samaina ka friendship phase chalega. They need to first get to know each other better. That strong bond needs to be formed.

But loved the way you are handling this bet reversal concept . Well done. Looking forward for more updates.

Thank you so much!! 😃

Glad you liked the girls bonding :) Preeti toh paida hi smart hui thi 😆

Haan! Sabki saath mein shuru hui, dekhein kaunsi kahan tak jati hai 😉

Yes, pehle samjhenge, phir ladenge and then pyaar hoga na 😳

Thank you for saying that! Means a lot 😊

Glad you feel so. I'll try updating soon :)

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Aayushi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani
I'm loving it
This is engaging to another level and voice over makes it more close to the show ..
That kamya is soon going to burn with jealousy when sameer will ignore her .. I'm so waiting for that day ..
Her face will be worth watching
Munna Pandit ki toh free fund mein chaandi ho gai !!
It was cute
Naina is worried about his reaction when he will get to know about the whole bet drama whereas Preeti is sure he will be unaffected .. Hmm its going to be a amezing journey
The library scene was soo cute
The situation was planned but what happened was real
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Update soon

Love
Laalchi reader

Thank you so much! Glad you feel it's engaging and close to the show, I felt really happy reading that 😳

Haha, yes that is bound to happen soon enough 😉

kamya has a lot to do here! ;)

Haan munna-pandit ki lottery lag gyi 😆😛

Yeahh dono behne alag sochti hain, dekhein ab sameer ka reaction actual mein kya hota hai 😊

Glad you liked the library bit :D Yes a plan but it was all bound to happen 😳

I'll try my best to udpate soonish , thanks again! ⭐️