Sur sur sur
Magical, magnificent,melodious,stupendous!!!!!!
I had you
My sunshine
My earth moon stars
My universe
In yours was my world
You laughed and my sun shone brighter
You made me dance and my eyes crinkled in mirth
You made my soul flutter and my insides had those butterflies all over
You were there to sprinkle happiness
I had never learnt to love
But you made me cherish
The dull gloom of the rain made me happy because of you
I learnt to hear music in all the pitters and patters
I played cynical games of my own
But you made me play games like never before
It felt like i was living a fairy tale
You read fairy tales to me
And I often felt jealous for all the love that you showered on the fictional heroes
You made me read those fairy tales
To be alike those stupid heroes
Only for you
So that i can show you that i was better than them
I was worth every second that you spent with me
Yet it never felt enough
You made me soar heights
Made me believe in heights
The pride I felt when your eyes misted over my success still makes my skin prickle
And then it was all gone
Suddenly we had grown apart
I felt my life to be destroyed
I felt myself slipping into an abyss
Yet i picked up my pieces
My eyes looked out for you still
What if?
My soul searched for you
I never stopped looking
Though i coddled myself with the feeling that i was over you
And yet
Today when you came in
I knew nothing had changed
That you and me are not over
That you remember
You would always remember
And that you would always be that one woman
Whose wish I would cherish all my life
Until eternity
Till death do us apart
We are not over
We are just yet to be together
Sur I have been the worst of readers, so this time instantly wanted to comment after i read the part. Though a lot has transpired and a lot of water have flown under the bridge yet some things remain the same. As in the case of sameer and naina. I would like to point out that one thing which has been the highlight of this story, that is communication gap. Sameer and Naina are bound by love, they have trust for one another but no communication to cement their love and that is what has been their problem from the start. They have never really bared their souls to each other as in the case of their relationship. Sameer had been confused but naina had been living a dream, almost a fairy tale where everything falls into place at the right time. They never pondered over the dearth of communication, or even the fears that they felt for one another. If only they had bared it all they wouldn't have been here. But am glad they didn't since I get to read this gripping story and no matter how long an update you pen your readers are gonna be parched forever. It is almost like a drug and you are itching for it desperately until you get your next dose and yet you aren't satisfied. But dont take it as criticism rather be proud that you actually make people want to turn the pages fast and somewhere they are famished looking for more.i guess you have a judith in you, and i can see the glimpses of her in this update. Paradise is that one book which hooked me on to romance. I never thought before the book that romance could be racy and that it could make you want to turn the pages but it did and then there was no stopping me. And infact I spurred on this plague suggesting every individual I could get hold of, you being one of them and then more and more people joined the herd. Am so happy that i could inspire you through offcourse judith. As am typing my review am grinning from ear to ear, I must say this your language seems to have gone a notch higher and the plot seems tightened up and am bracing myself for the upcoming updates since I know am in for a ride, a ride that would be an unforgettable one!
I loved it
Lived it
Amazing stuff
Keep going buddy
A request from my end
Can you incorporate a little of Ben too sometime in the upcoming parts for me
And do read the hating game by Sally Thorne
Am sure Joshua would give you a few pointers from where matt left off.spoiler alert he has a little something thats similar to Sameer.
Edited by doublecross - 6 years ago
