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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Lord !! how did miss this one ...Loved it !! Loved it !! Loved it !!too good...please update soon ...

Thank you so much! I'm extremely delighted to see new readers! You may check out other stories written by me on the index page!

Thank you once again!

I'll update by this weekend! 😃

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: -Aniisha-
Teasing teaser 😳
Please update asap

Thank you so much!

Will update by this weekend! 😃

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Teaser☺️.. Bohot kr liya tease, Ab jaldi update krdo Muskaan

Bas kuch din aur Aarti...aur phir suspense khul jayega 😉😆

Thank you so much!

Muskan 😃

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Sona../PJ

@Sona07

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Hey Muskan.. Kab se soch rahi hu tumhari stories padhu, par time thoda kam milta hai..

But definitely I will read it 😃

Edited by _.SilentHeart._ - 7 years ago

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Priya

@Priya2910

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Loved the teaser. Truly amazing. How long till the next update.

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: _.SilentHeart._
Hey Muskan.. Kab se soch rahi hu tumhari stories padhu, par time thoda kam milta hai..

But definitely I will read it 😃

No worries at all...take your time Sona Di...

I'll be waiting for your reviews 😃

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: _.SilentHeart._
Hey Muskan.. Kab se soch rahi hu tumhari stories padhu, par time thoda kam milta hai..

But definitely I will read it 😃

No worries at all..take your time...I'll be waiting for your reviews

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Priya2910
Loved the teaser. Truly amazing. How long till the next update.

Thank you so much!

I'm updating today...do read, review and comment ! 😃

Muskan😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Sorry. This story is no longer available.

Edited by Muskan2001 - 7 years ago

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Res!

First again! 😆😉

I have to open another tab to comment on this! I will forget the important parts otherwise na 😳

I don't have words to tell you how much I adored this update

It was beyond flawless for me! Not a single moment where I wasn't intrigued and in a dreamland! When you posted it , I was in my coaching class and instead of hearing the teacher, I was reading this 😆

Coming to the update, contrary to popular belief, the one on the door was Kristina! I knew it , I knew she liked him!!! Ahhh 😛

When she was clinging on to him and he was being cringy, I wished he had slapped her 🤣 (This is purely fictional, I don't want to slap her in reality- disclaimer warning for some people 😆)

Theek hai, Now, I loved how he was dumbstruck seeing Ashi ❤️ Mere cutiess! I seriously thought they were dating, how you described them in the start , flirting and calling her baby and all haan? 😉☺️

But alas! Ye gadhe toh pyaar karte hain but not confessing, and Ashi toh aur badi dumbo hai 😆😛

Mumbai is her first crush! OMG mine too

---Then you have the Ashi you always wanted, Randeep.

--- I'm not some Naina Agarwal to fall for you."Wish you were. - These lines have my heart ❤️

I knew she was teasing him saying acha toh main jati hun after he mentioned the after party, they're such cutiess!

The cake cutting and the conversation that followed was love! 😳

She liking Bollywood and he liking EDM reminded me of my boyfriend though he's not as cute as Sameer to change the song for me! 😆😛

What was her reaction at that Kristina! He was freaking saying I love you girl And she was going on about Kristina!! :/

I wish next part mein Ashi ko akal aaye 😆

The last line Punishment ho toh aisi ho, warna na ho! 😉

Amazing update Muskan! Update veryyy sooon! 😳😃

Edited by A.Green - 7 years ago