AshDeep TS:- Who First? (DELETED) - Page 5

Originally posted by: -Aniisha-

I'm sure the intruder is none other than Ashi 😳
Awesome start 👍🏼
Love the update
Please update the next part soon

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Muskan dear!

Just caught up on the story.Let me confess --I get uncomfortable a bit reading about real life people.

But let me tell you..you have a beautiful style of presentation and narrative technique which holds attention.I read through the first part and loved the build up.👏👏

You are too good with concept and writing beautifully.

Thanks for the PM dear and do update soon.

Keep coming with your best.

With love-

Minu.

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed

The start of the story was so goood loved it ..

Thank you so much!

I love reading AshDeep

I love reading and dreaming about them too! 😆😳

Wow the way you started the story with deepu's pov ..

Thank you so much! My last AshDeep one was from Ashi's POV, so thought of exploring something different this time. i'm glad to hear you liked it 😃

👏

Hayeee Dil le lo

❤️

So I guess there is somthsome seriously wrong ahmm lol my mind but isn't it something with Kristina and ASHI and Ayesha definitely knows it .. loool I love Kristina but if she had done something then 😆 Gawwd my mind horses are running so much ..

Well...you'll have to wait to know what happens next 😆

Don't tell me that Kristina is interested in Rando .. noo please

Rando was kinda uncomfortable with all the gestures of kittu ..

So I guess Ashi was on the door

Hayeee eagerly waiting for next part ..

Thank you so much! Will try to update as soon as possible

Ahmm can we get something romantic in next part of only Ashi was on the door ..

I'll try my best! 😃