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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Hitanshivyas
Wonderful story please update soon don't make us wait for more waiting waiting...

Thank you so much!

Will try my best to update by next weekend.

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: GiniRejith
You left me in cliffhanger and I hate cliffhanger s please yaar update soon can't wait for long update soon

Thank you so much!

Will try my best to update by next weekend

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar
Thanks for the pm
Loved it
Update soon

Thank you so much!

Will try my best!

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Anjali33
AshDeep TS I love it
Deepu k birthday pe Ashi hi nhi ayi.. That's so unfair
But mujhe pura yakin h ki wo intruder Ashi h😉

Rishina asked about his gf n he thought of Ashi.. What an aww moment

Kya hua h jo Ayesha chhupa rhi h?? I'm bheri curious

BTW, what's with Kristina n her numerous hugs

Please update asap.. Ab dharmsankat ye h ki pehle kya update krogi tum.. FF, SamAina wala TS ya AshDeep TS??😆

Aarti!!! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

Wohi toh...bechare Randeep ko kitna bura laga 😭

Let's see intruder kaun hai...

Thank you so much...I wish Rishina aur Randeep ke beech aisa convo sach mein ho 😆

Ab har koi chahega Randeep ko hug karna...toh Kristina kaise mauka chod de 😆

Wohi toh...I, myself get confused nowadays...😆

I'll update saare soon...Thank you so much! 😳

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Prizi
oh no
cliffhanger!
hmm ashi on d door???
plz continue soon

Thank you so much!

Let's see who the intruder is...😉

Will try my best to update by next week

Muskan 😃

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Muskan dear!

Just caught up on the story.Let me confess --I get uncomfortable a bit reading about real life people.

But let me tell you..you have a beautiful style of presentation and narrative technique which holds attention.I read through the first part and loved the build up.👏👏

You are too good with concept and writing beautifully.

Thanks for the PM dear and do update soon.

Keep coming with your best.

With love-

Minu.

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Alisha

@AlishaSyed

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

The start of the story was so goood loved it ..

I love reading AshDeep

Wow the way you started the story with deepu's pov ..

👏

Hayeee Dil le lo

So I guess there is somthsome seriously wrong ahmm lol my mind but isn't it something with Kristina and ASHI and Ayesha definitely knows it .. loool I love Kristina but if she had done something then 😆 Gawwd my mind horses are running so much ..

Don't tell me that Kristina is interested in Rando .. noo please

Rando was kinda uncomfortable with all the gestures of kittu ..

So I guess Ashi was on the door

Hayeee eagerly waiting for next part ..

Ahmm can we get something romantic in next part of only Ashi was on the door ..

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: surbharati
Excellent...please update soon and do not make us wait...excellent

Thank you so much!

I'll try my best to update soon...

Muskan😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani
It was amezing
You ended it at such a point ..
I'm eagerly waiting for the next part

Thank you so much!

I'm glad to hear you liked it!

Will try my best to update soon...

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
I usually avoid Ashdeep stories but you have written really well Muskan... I think the intruder is none other than Ashi... good going dear...thanks for the pm😊

Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you liked it!

Let's see who the intruder is...😉😆

Muskan 😃

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