Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#121

part 2
loved it
so priyank is the one.. I hate him
indeed it's a cheating...

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#122

Hey minu

Finally I'm here..

I know very late but due to Ramadan it has been very difficult to give time on IF though I don't regret😉😆

Coming to the story it's nice and interesting

Of course if it's coming from u it will be worth a read.

Last chapter what happened to Naina..

I'm sure the bad gang must be having a hand .

And I'm waiting for KP update

Where is that?

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#123

It was awesome Minu

I loved the part where Sameer combed her hair.. That was just❤️

Flashback was nice.. BTW Preeti coming to college with jijaji in his car😎 that was cute

Please update asap

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#124

Minu - first of all apologies for the delay... I am so lagging behind in commenting on all the updates, especially yours and Sur's...

So here's my comment for part 2:

Sabse pehle to I love bright red nail polish... 😳😳

Yay..!! Sameer scored, and then he sauntered off to collect his reward... hahaa... Naina was so nervous... all that brave talks of flying kiss se zyada came back to torment her... but still she went with him to that abandoned basketball court... aww... so much trust and love...

Sameer is fabulous boy-friend... The way he struggled to study... wanting to ensure her happiness... He had said Naina ki khushi ke liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hun... and he proved it... her smile, her happiness means everything to her...

And Naina asks tumhe sach me kuch zyada chahiye kya... hahhaa... my girl, you don't even know how much more he wants... 😆

Loved Sameer's declaration through that song... along with Naina I laughed too...

Then her happiness on knowing the results... that squeezing hug and a forehead kiss.. lovely...

The inclusion of Priyank is not giving me good vibes... I am sure JBR told the truth the first time... kuch to jhol karke enter hua hai... not really scored... and there's a reason you have kept Sameer's score just slightly above the required criteria...

Off to read part 3 now... Have a meeting though, so might take some time to comment... 😳

As always, beautiful writing sweetheart... 👏👏

Love,

Mou

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Isha

@mystique123

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#125

Aww...the chapter again caught me hooked.

I really hope Naina is fine and she is sad because of staying away from Sameer.

Sameer wont spare Karthik and his gang, if they have any role in her sadness.

Do update soon.

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#126

Part 3 also done...

Minu, I want to complain... Kyun Naina ke sapne tod diye... She so wanted to go with Sameer, and I had my heart all set for some Nagpur romance... even though I was anticipating this to happen after reading about Priyank in part 2, I was trying to keep my fingers crossed and hope for the best...

But I too felt so sad to read about Naina crying so much... But adored the way Sameer comforted her... and he was right she shouldn't back out of the competition just because he wasn't going... Loved the line where you mention he could bear her tears, but not let her be a broken dreamer... 👏👏

That gesture of combing her hair, and putting on that hair band was pure love... ❤️

And of course, Sameer hai to matlab Naina ke sawaal pe flirt to karega hi... to kya sochu nahate waqt... 😆😆😆 I was also like - yeah Naina, please be specific... there are a lot of things to dream about while bathing...

The rain flashback was cute... Auto me sab saath me... and that stare from fellow passenger on seeing that Sameer wanted to pick up girls... hahhaa... 😆😆

So now, there's something that happened which made Naina lose her smile... Not good, not good... Are we going to get to see an angry Sam??

All in all, loved it Minu... 😳

Looking forward to read more...

Love,

Mou

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bushra

@BushraN

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#127

great update...hahaha safari suit ka damaad...sameer combing naina's hair was just ... hope kuch zyada bura na Hua ho brains meet me...

update soon dear...

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#128

Minu..

I was trying to read it kabse...finally aaj office me chup chup ke padh liya...mujhe lag hi raha tha ye sukapr gang kuch siyappa karenge...I'm sure Sameer deserved to go...but ye trustee ke pote ki chaal hogi...I was as sad as Naina here...n the flashback was love...baarish! Need I say more? Sameer akele thodi chodega apni jaan ko...ab kya naya kaand kar diya us kutil tikdi ne...Sameer koot dega us Kartik ko!!

Jaldi jaldi update karna Minu...I'm eager to know hua kya hai!

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#129

This story is depicting a new side of naina which is quite lovable. We usually see her as someone with a sound mind and judgement with he'll lot of patience and quite mature for her age though her innocence deep down within is intact. But here we are seeing a more childlike naina who throws tantrums and sheds a year or two to get her way with sameer. Love it when sameer holds her close and consoles her with all the reasons and logic. That prize talk was cute Minu. I felt like tweaking their cheeks together. They are such overload of cuteness. You left It as a cliffhanger, now what happened that naina is upset. Am intrigued.

Do update soon

Please forgive me for replying late. Amidst dirty diapers, a equalling infant and sleep deprived eyes, it's a little difficult at times. But promise I'll always come abd read your work because I enjoy them a great deal.

Update soon