Samaina OS- The Unexpected Kiss - Page 8

Both are not sure about what they feel when they are together . But Kiss happened. I was more eager to see their reaction after that especialy Naina's would she slap him for that...😆 (but u end it. Its okay) It would be more interesting. Plz do continue.

Originally posted by: dakshaavi

Beautiful dear...

Continue writing ..

Originally posted by: PrabhakarVK

Both are not sure about what they feel when they are together . But Kiss happened. I was more eager to see their reaction after that especialy Naina's would she slap him for that...😆 (but u end it. Its okay) It would be more interesting. Plz do continue.

Thanks for PM.

Sorry for late cmnt.

Hi shreya...first of all thank u for the pm...sorry for being late to reply as was on vacation...

Originally posted by: Uv78

Hi shreya...first of all thank u for the pm...sorry for being late to reply as was on vacation...

The os was beautifully penned down...it was indeed unexpected...who could have guessed that stealing shoes can lead to a kiss...just beautiful...that too a kiss during that stage of the story...

Shreya waiting more from your pen...would love to read more...

Hey Shreya! This is simply amazing. I loved the confusion and the dilemmas you portrayed on both the sides. I really like your feisty Naina who was ready to fight Sameer back and refused to have him overpower because of the feelings he aroused in her.

Originally posted by: IamIbe

Hey Shreya! This is simply amazing. I loved the confusion and the dilemmas you portrayed on both the sides. I really like your feisty Naina who was ready to fight Sameer back and refused to have him overpower because of the feelings he aroused in her.

Thank you! Poor girl was fighting against the feelings that were slowly developing inside her and Sameer coming to the library when they are alone, she wasn't sure whether she could control her feelings and Sameer could control his anger.

To be honest her one sided crush on Sameer was cute but really annoyed me at times but she was instantly forgiven whenever she fought against him and held her own moral ground in the show. These moments are essential for character development.

One sided love has its own share of pain and charm but it should never cross limits where you start forgetting yourself. Can understand the pain where you love someone deeply and to find out that it was never genuinely reciprocated. I like my characters strong. 😃

@bold: I completely agree!

I honestly really enjoyed the rawness and the primal intimacy in that kiss. Neck kisses are lethal anyway and given in such proximity my my. You should turn this one into a ss and explore their journey through the aftermath of the kiss.

I don't really have experience writing intimacy so I avoid going descriptive. Yeah, Neck kisses are really dangerous when you are trying to draw a border on your feelings😉

I would have really liked to continue this but there is no logical plot coming in my mind so unfortunately this stays as an OS.

Would love to read it 😳😳

Do PM me when you write next

Sure! I hope I can present another one on Samaina soon!

where is part 2 of this OS

So hard to believe that it's your first attempt at writing a story.

Originally posted by: VeebafanSonam

where is part 2 of this OS