Samaina SS - I Can't Live Without You pt 2 pg 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: GiniRejith

Please update soon I really want to know what will happen next and I wish the show crew did something like this to bring sammer to the right path


Hehe thnxcc 4 giving ur precious time here.. ll update today or tmrw..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
Loved it ... Bechara sam pgl ho rkha h ab akal aayegi jb naina avoid karegi usko
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Unres on pg 1..
Reply kar dena.. would love to read your reply 😉
Edited by msdfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow you would write on this...i never expected but im happily surprised...a very nice start Meenakshi...i really love your cute writing and your hihi in between ...thats the best😃👏😛
Loved the start...please do update soon😃
Sorry for commenting so late this time...pata nahi aajkal forum pe aane ka time hi nahi milta😳

Thanks a lot for the pm dear😊🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Loved it ... Bechara sam pgl ho rkha h ab akal aayegi jb naina avoid karegi usko


Hehe let's c kya hoga.. updating..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: msdfan

Unres on pg 1..

Reply kar dena.. would love to read your reply 😉


Hehe padh liya.. tum sb se hi seekha h climax pe story chodna.. hihi.. thnx for beautiful words for me..Feel so happyyy😊

Updating in few minutes..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Wow you would write on this...i never expected but im happily surprised...a very nice start Meenakshi...i really love your cute writing and your hihi in between ...thats the best😃👏😛

Loved the start...please do update soon😃
Sorry for commenting so late this time...pata nahi aajkal forum pe aane ka time hi nahi milta😳

Thanks a lot for the pm dear😊🤗


Owww I was waiting for your comment yrr.. time nikalo bhii hmare liye.. hihi..
Forum ki jaan ho tum.. love u lots..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2
Next day in class...
Sameer was waiting for naina 's arrival as after whatever happened yesterday he was worried for her.. munna pandit tried to make him understand and talk to naina but he ignored their talks. His only focus was on door.

After few seconds Naina entered with preeti , sameer eyes lit seeing her but without giving a glance naina went and sat at last bench with preeti . Her face seemed pale , yellow indicating something very bad happened to her. Preeti was worried and confused too with naina behaviour bcoz she didn't tell her about yesterday. But she assumed something big happened with sameer n naina that's why naina has forgot smiling.
She thought to talk to sameer but this was not right time.

Other side
Mundit were observing naina , she was no more chirpy and bold naina..

Munna - sameer aisa b kya keh diya tune bhabhi se ki wo hasna hi bhul gyi?

Pandit - haan.. dekh kaise udas baithi h..Hmari taraf dekha b nh..
Sameer kept mum..

After 3rd lecture, it was free period, all students went out except 3 girls..
Preeti - naina chal canteen.. bhook lgi hai..

Naina who was solving questions didn't pay attention to her and said - tu ja..Muje bhook nh hai..Or fir library me kaam bh hai..

Swati tried to force her but preeti stooped her seeing naina adamant behaviour. She knew naina won't come. So they left , preeti made up mind to talk to sameer finally.

In canteen
Boys ordered samosa but didn't even touch them. Seeing them not eating sameer picked up coke n tried to cheer up them..

Sameer (fake smile) - yrr iss canteen ke samose sach bhot tasty hai..Khao na..

Preeti came with High temper - wahan meri behan ne khana pina chod rakha hai or tym mjje se samosa kha rhe ho.. wahh sameer..Muje tumse ye ummeed nh thi..

Sameer - aisa nh h preeti me to bss..

Preeti - tum to kya bss sameer? Haan? Jis ladki ne tumhe itna pyar kiya tumne usi ka dil tod diya? Aisa kya hua tum dono ke bich jo naina ki aiso halat ho gyi hai..? Kl se pta nahi kahan khoyi hai .Kuch kha pi nh rh..Sahi se bat nh kr rh.. muje bhot darr lg rha hai uske liye kahin khudko kuch kar na le..

Sameer eyes opened up listening that naina hasn't eat anything from yesterday. He ran to talk to her. She can't torture herself like this bcz of him he thought.

On the other side naina who has lost her love her faith was sitting in back side park on college..All beautiful memories were roaming in her mind as a result a lone year escape from her eyes. While sameer was search ing for her in whole college..

Bell rang declaring next period which made her come back in reality. She was feeling disst because she had nt ate any thing from yesterday neither she wanted to have any thing. Talking support of tree she tried to stand up but her head started spinning and she was about to fall when 2 strong arms held her..

Naina (subconsciously) - sameer...
Sameer who was searching for naina finally saw her near tree, when she about to fall he came running and held her.

Sameer (worriedly) - naina..Naina.. utho.. plzzz..

He took out water bottle from her bag and made her drink water , sprinkled on her face too. He was hell worried. ''sb meri galati hai '' he murmured. Slowly naina opened her eyes and saw her love her life infornt of her , that's all what she want..

Sameer (angry) - ye kya halat bna rakhi h tumne? Kal se kuch khaya kyon nahi? Tumhe kuch ho jata to...

Naina - toh ...? Tumhe kya farq pdta hai..Me jiu ya..
Sameer - sshhh... He put a finger on her lips making her silent.. naina shivered with the intensity and his touch. Sameer ws so close to her and he touch on her lips made her shiver..

Sameer (coming lil more close) - muje farq padta hai naina.. iss duniya mere liye tumse jyada imp koi nh hai..Koi bhi nahi.. samjhi...

Naina just nodded.. and feeling happy she hugged him , this time sameer too reciprocated and hugged her back.. both were crying but these were happy tears..

Naina - ab kbi muje chodke mat jana.. tumhari naina nahi jee sakti apne sameer ke bina..

Sameer - me bh.. abse meri zzindgi ka hal pal tumhara.. promise..

Both smiled..After some minutes they realise they position. Naina came out from hug first feeling shy.. it was first time both were hugging like this and that too in public.

Sameer (teasingly) - ohhh to meri naina ko sharam aa rh hai..
Her cheeks went more pink
Sameer took her both hands in his and said looking into her eyes - I LOVE YOU NAINA..

Naina - I Love You Too.. and kissed him on forehead , made sameer shock.. then hugged him again feeling content , she hide herself in her sameer in her world.. now she won't let anything and anyone come in their life she promised herself. Sameer too promised himself that he ll always keep her happy like this.. forever..

Sameer - naina..Kahin bahar chle?
Naina - hmm..Thodi der me..Abi muje aise hi rhne do..
Sameer smiled and both sat their for sometime just celebrating that moment..


P.s. ok done..I hope it was not short update .Jitna b likhti hu kam reh hi jata h hmesha hogi
That's all for this story as I have other story pending..Goshh..
Waiting 4 replies n reviews...Love u all..

Meenakshi😊

Edited by dreamyp - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Tumhare PM de pehle hi padh liya... very nice & beautiful ending... chalo hug & kiss bhi mil gaya!
Edited by Radkam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Haaye, it was a cute ending to the manhoosiyat...😳
Loved Sam forgetting everything when he heard Naina hasn't eaten anything...
Love,
Shreya

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