Samaina SS - I Can't Live Without You pt 2 pg 5

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Azraa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Read this now only and it was such a feisty yet sweet concept.

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Hey Meenakshi... Finally read this one... 😳

Beautiful... A different take... 👏

I have always believed communication is the key in any relationship... the first part was all about it... making Sameer talk when he was trying to run away from her... Loved their library confrontation... kitna galat sochte hai na log kabhi kabhi ke hum pyaar me jo bhi karte hai dusre ke bhale ke liye karte hai... Sameer had no right to take that decision by himself...

Part 2 was also lovely... Sameer didn't even probably realize what a pain he was giving her... and Naina stopped eating and laughing... Simply amazing how Preeti reprimanded him... It was required... Sameer could finally realize how much Naina was hurting herself...

And so the lovers unite... achcha hua Naina ki taklif dekhke apni manhoosiyat bhul gaya... 😃

Loved the hug and the forehead kiss... ending was perfect... thodi der aisai rehna hai... Ah that feeling...

Great work Meenakshi... Keep coming with more... 😳

Love,

Mou

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MeenAkshi Kalra

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Prizi
lovely update

Thnx dear😊😊

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MeenAkshi Kalra

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: moumita04
Hey Meenakshi... Finally read this one... 😳
Beautiful... A different take... 👏

I have always believed communication is the key in any relationship... the first part was all about it... making Sameer talk when he was trying to run away from her... Loved their library confrontation... kitna galat sochte hai na log kabhi kabhi ke hum pyaar me jo bhi karte hai dusre ke bhale ke liye karte hai... Sameer had no right to take that decision by himself...

Part 2 was also lovely... Sameer didn't even probably realize what a pain he was giving her... and Naina stopped eating and laughing... Simply amazing how Preeti reprimanded him... It was required... Sameer could finally realize how much Naina was hurting herself...
And so the lovers unite... achcha hua Naina ki taklif dekhke apni manhoosiyat bhul gaya... 😃
Loved the hug and the forehead kiss... ending was perfect... thodi der aisai rehna hai... Ah that feeling...

Great work Meenakshi... Keep coming with more... 😳

Love,
Mou

Hehe me b ye soch hi rh thi ki mou ka commnt kaise nh aya😆 late but koi nh.. u knw na I love u.. your comments your updates your every word.. your support means a lot to me.. thnx dear.. 😊😊