Short Story:MY STOLEN HEART (Part 21Concluding Part updated page 102 ) - Page 7

Oh, it's getting so intriguing

First Story which made me restless and think what could happen next was Mis-matched and now this one..please please please update soon next part...eagerly waiting for the same...

Superb! Superb! Superb!

Finally got time to catch up with fictions on forum .. it was sooo goood dear ... I liked how you used the concept of arrange marriage for samaina .. the awkwardness between them is so natural ... Am liking the fact that sameer is finally attracted to her beauty ... Pls update soon ... If possible pm me dear

Again amazing.sameer updt and nicentralized u updated so soon.naina said yes immediately but I thought she would say no.maybe the circumstances she had no choice.waiting g eagerly agn

You have given another part of this story very soon.. Thanks for that 😊

It was wonderful update.. Loved it!! 👍🏼

Sameer is possessive for Naina.. And he was blushing also.. he is slowly falling in love with her innocence

Lehenga selection part was so good.. 😃

It's very engaging concept.. now it's getting more interesting

Please update soon.. If possible please do PM me.. Can I send you a buddy request?

Please please please update soon next part...

Originally posted by: Hitanshivyas

It's a amazing story and with a good different concept i like this vishakha a lot now looking forward to naina's reaction when she comes to know about Sameer's marriage proposal eagerly waiting for the next update please update soon 😊

Thank you so much !!

Originally posted by: mehraan

Ashuuu im sold away wit ur stry!!!😆..Wat a concept n wat a start...Really engaging n beautiful characterizations...So Naina believes Sam.is marrying out of sympathy n his first love will always be Kamya...so tis is painful actually...Wen she always loved him from Day1!!!..Now im really waiting for tis truth to b unfolded as Sam needs to kno that this Behenji had unconditionally loved him so much that she suffered herself in silence ..without hoping anything in return ..but his happiness!!...Please ASHU. update it soon n mke it spicy for usss...Please!!!!!😆

Thank you Meher!! As far as making it spicy... 😳 will try.. 😳

Originally posted by: angelic567

Chapter 2 was fabulous

The way he asked her whether she has agreed to marry him out of pressure was such a nice gesture... Sameer wants a simple court marriage was amazing as well... In a way its good for naina's family.

Sameer is getting to know about his newly found feelings... It gives him immense happiness too... Sameer realizing that this is the first time he is feeling this way... Not even with kamya did he feel like this.

Vishakha is really playing a cupid every now and then... Loved the lehenga selection part... She went away giving the couple their privacy... Possessive sameer😳... The way he said he's already possessive about her... Asking her whether she feels the same way too... So cute... Sameer choosing lehenga for naina is like a dream come true.

Sameer asking her to jeep smiling was too good... I am loving how sameer is able to see her mental as well as physical beauty... He's getting more and more attracted to her... Getting impatient to meet her... Even two weeks gap becoming unbearable for him... So loving this desperation of sameer.

This story is going amazing... Eagerly waiting for the next update... Pls do me pm me too.

Thank you so much !! I always felt Sameer had feelings for Naina from the day1 ...that is what I wanted to incorporate in the story.. with Kamya its more of an infatuation...or the fact that the most popular girl of his batch was his girl friend...more like a trophy GF...which he eventually accepted as love ...leading to marriage...but his heart was always with Naina...