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surbharati

@surbharati

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Surbhi...excellent...what we all Samaina fans are expecting in YUDKBH...we are getting in your FF...please continue both your FF soon...

eagerly waiting for the next update

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Niakhush

@Niakhush

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

wonderful update dear...it was awesome!!!

Naina coming to Delhi is a dream...n stories at forum are making it real...so goid to see that!!! I really loved the way Sam said...me pagal hogaya hu muje Agra Jana padega...n Pandit's dailouge side characters k Bina story thodi chalti hai...so true!!!

I really loved hw u developed the bond between sameer n Rohan. n arjun shefali vwas fun!!!

Bt the best part was sameer seeing safari suite n arjun n his comments on that...I was laughing hard on it!!

Great piece of writing!!!

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Samainadeewani

@Samainadeewani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Taareef karun kya tumhari !! Ki tumne itni cute story banai !!

It was amezing, beautiful , superb , fantastic what not

I'm seriously in love with your story

You took me to a totally different samaina land

I could feel all the emotions you had put in the story

The mandir visit of Sameer was so heart touching and rohan's comment on that was cherry on cake ..

Seriously loved the self talking of Sameer after seeing safari suit ..lol it was so funny

And that saala from Sameer was soo ...I don't have words dear

Sameer laughing seeing Naina and saying he has gone mad was really cute and then that hug ...I felt it

And then comes the gang reunion

Samumdit are my jaan

Sameer hugging rohan with love ...thats all I want

I loved your version of rohan ...and I'm sure we will witness more or less like it in the show also

Rohan calling Naina his bhabhi ...I was literally waiting for this

And my most favorite part Preeti blushing and enquiring about Rohan had me in splits ...I was imaging this scene in my head

Blushing Preeti will be a treat to watch

Rohan and Preeti conversation was so cute

" dil le lo " and Preeti 's " kahan milta hai ye dil " was the highlight..

I'm sure Preeti will be the one who will push the accelerater towards this relationship rohan toh sharmili Tagore bans rahega

And that " aag dono taraf lagi hai " isy favorite

How can I forget my Sameer the dreamer Maheshwari

Looking outside the window imaging his date with Naina was so romantic...

I'm eagerly waiting for their date in Delhi full of romance

Sameer jygadu hai safari suit ko sambhal lega

And off course waiting for more of Preeti and rohan

Update soon ...janta duayen dengi

I want to see their date asap

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1133597

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

awesome really enjoyed very much reading this

it is the dream of all the fandom which we r wanting to come true

rohan preeti dil le lo❤️

rohan ko jitne dialogues show me nhi mile aapne use double dediye 😆

thanks for the pm

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Finally I got to see a brotherly bond between them... which I have been waiting to see in the show... but here it was amazing 😃👏

The idea of everyone coming to Delhi and he arranging the meeting of two lovers... wow... can we get this in the show please... 😊

Rohanji was so cute😛

Such a feel good TS Surbhi... Such a relief from the negativity surrounding the show these days. 😃

Just loved it to the core😃

Thanks for the pm 😃

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priyanka

@doublecross

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

I loved the bond between Sameer and Rohan, wish they would depict the same in the show. This story is the perfect amalgamation of innocence and love. Am loving the way you are coming up with such varied concepts. One so different from the other.

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki
Wow what an imagination dear ... I really like how you developed preeti rohan story ... Am very much excited for their story to kick start soon on serial as well. .. i like both of them as a couple

Thanks a ton dear!! Happy to see you enjoyed the story esp Preehan 😳

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: moumita04
Yaar Sur... Pehla question... usime kyun continue kiya? why not another page? I really wanted to hit "Like" but 2 baar possible nai...

Dil me ghanti, muh se seeti sab baj gai...!! Woohoo!! 😳😳
Kya update diya hai... Meri to smile ruk hi nai rahi...!! 😃

Arjun ko sab blackmail karne pe tule hue hai... Khsithi ne Sameer se karvaya, Maine Naina se aur ab tumne Shefali se... Hahaahaa... 😆😆😆 Aur koi potential bacha hai?

Sameer being happy on seeing sasurji was so damn cute.. .and then the confusion ke dream me bhi villains... haha... Aur finally when he sees Naina, and realizes its not dream but the most beautiful reality... God... My heartbeat stopped and then jumped with joy... It was AMAZING...!!

And that hug... Oh my... Aisa laga jaise I can feel all their feelings... ☺️

Preeti's enquiry about Rohan... hehe... Preeti blushing would be a sight to see... no wonder Sameer was surpised... And Mr. Timetable to bahot pahoncha hua nikla... pehli mulakaat me hi "Dil le lo"... 😉

LOVED IT... Totally... Completely.. Absolutely... ❤️

First update padhke dil me tamanna thi ke Samaina mil jaaye... aur kya dhamaakedar tarike se milvaya hai tumne Sur... 👏

Ek aur update milega kya...?? TS to three shot bhi ho sakta hai na... Third update on "Dilwalo ki Dilli me Romance" 😳

Awww Mou...love you for such kind comments 🤗 Thank you so much dear! Your comments mean a lot to me...wo yaar maine socha continuity rahegi isiliye isi me update kar diya...I'm happy that you enjoyed the update and that it brought a smile to your face...you know I wrote it as a OS...made it Two shots...ab chunki tumne Dilwalon ki Dilli ka vaasta de diya...I've to seriously think about the 3rd one (Dil se pakki Dilliwali hun na main😆)...sach bolun to I'm not finding enough time to write n bahot baar I write something n then scrap it away...I thought this is done...now I'll focus on the other two pending FFs...ek to start bhi nai ki forum pe...target weekend again😉 Bas aap jaise readers hamein encourage karte rahein to shuru kar denge wo bhi 😳😊 n abki baar ispe update kiya to different page pe karungi pakka!!

Edited by Samaina_1990 - 7 years ago

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Sujz
Its Aweeesooomeee...
How I wish something like this happened in the shooowww😳

nailed it gall!!!!!!

now jaldi se update ur new storyyy

Hey Nanhi Pari...thank you so much dear 🤗 Pakka pakka...side by side working on that too...

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Awww Mou...love you for such kind comments 🤗 Thank you so much dear! Your comments mean a lot to me...wo yaar maine socha continuity rahegi isiliye isi me update kar diya...I'm happy that you enjoyed the update and that it brought a smile to your face...you know I wrote it as a OS...made it Two shots...ab chunki tumne Dilwalon ki Dilli ka vaasta de diya...I've to seriously think about the 3rd one (Dil se pakki Dilliwali hun na main😆)...sach bolun to I'm not finding enough time to write n bahot baar I write something n then scrap it away...I thought this is done...now I'll focus on the other two pending FFs...ek to start bhi nai ki forum pe...target weekend again😉 Bas aap jaise readers hamein encourage karte rahein to shuru kar denge wo bhi 😳😊 n abki baar ispe update kiya to different page pe karungi pakka!!

You are such a sweetheart Sur... 🤗Tum Delhi se ho? Mereko to pata hi nai tha... In fact aaj hi I was thinking that you don't come in chat house to tumko alag se PM karke puchu about you... maybe I still will drop that PM. 😳

I totally understand your pain... asli duniya ka bulawa ignore nai kar paate... meri bhi stories atki hui hai... Sometimes I itch to write, par time hi nai mil raha... Chalo good to know we will get something from you on weekend... 😃 Good Luck! and thank you so much for considering my request... no hurries and no compulsion... Its for the writer to decide how the story should flow and where should it end... 😳 And of course, I am there to encourage you always, just like you are there for me!

Edited by moumita04 - 7 years ago

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