TS: Kaun Apna, Kaun Paraya (Part3- Page17)

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aishwarya12joys

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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

This was amazing and the end was perfect.
The dialogue which sameer said to rohan at the end left me grinning

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: moumita04

You are such a sweetheart Sur... 🤗Tum Delhi se ho? Mereko to pata hi nai tha... In fact aaj hi I was thinking that you don't come in chat house to tumko alag se PM karke puchu about you... maybe I still will drop that PM. 😳
I totally understand your pain... asli duniya ka bulawa ignore nai kar paate... meri bhi stories atki hui hai... Sometimes I itch to write, par time hi nai mil raha... Chalo good to know we will get something from you on weekend... 😃 Good Luck! and thank you so much for considering my request... no hurries and no compulsion... Its for the writer to decide how the story should flow and where should it end... 😳 And of course, I am there to encourage you always, just like you are there for me!

Hehe yeah Mou...I've been born n brought up in Delhi...you know when Sameer ko Dilli leke ja rahe the...I told my husband...life me pehli baar lag raha hai koi Dilli na jaaye...Dilli jake kya karega...Ahemdabad hi acha hai 🤣 Mou, what about you? Where do you belong to? We can discus over PM though 😊

True yaar...real life...lagta hai bhaagun office se ghar and open my lappy n start writing but sadly life isn't always so 😊 yes will write pakka...but pehle thoda dono FFs ko shape karti hun...

N I just forgot the blackmail wali line...🤣 acha pakda tumne...sab Arjun ko hi blackmail kar rae h...vaise I would like Preeti to do so too (any writer listening?) 😆 Vaise wo Arjun hai hi isi layak...ab serial me to ise kuch kar nai sakte to hum apni stories se isse badla lete hain...😉 Kal to sach me I was like do laga dun ise...ab sharmana khatam ho gaya iska...khullam khulla Shefali se setting kar raha hai...Sameer ne ise sahi pakda tha...meri love story me villain banta hai...yahan khud ki love story set kar raha hai...Matlab Naina aur Sameer pe daya nahi aati ise😡

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: umam
How did I miss Part 2 - just read it now 😃 -- it is so visually appealing that I cannot but wish for such scenes

Hey Uman...thank you...actually I updated the second part today only...but in continuation to part 1😊

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: lakku19
loved the second part too..
the way how u brought them to delhi was too good idea..
nice update.

Thank you dear...🤗

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Hehe yeah Mou...I've been born n brought up in Delhi...you know when Sameer ko Dilli leke ja rahe the...I told my husband...life me pehli baar lag raha hai koi Dilli na jaaye...Dilli jake kya karega...Ahemdabad hi acha hai 🤣 Mou, what about you? Where do you belong to? We can discus over PM though 😊
True yaar...real life...lagta hai bhaagun office se ghar and open my lappy n start writing but sadly life isn't always so 😊 yes will write pakka...but pehle thoda dono FFs ko shape karti hun...
N I just forgot the blackmail wali line...🤣 acha pakda tumne...sab Arjun ko hi blackmail kar rae h...vaise I would like Preeti to do so too (any writer listening?) 😆 Vaise wo Arjun hai hi isi layak...ab serial me to ise kuch kar nai sakte to hum apni stories se isse badla lete hain...😉 Kal to sach me I was like do laga dun ise...ab sharmana khatam ho gaya iska...khullam khulla Shefali se setting kar raha hai...Sameer ne ise sahi pakda tha...meri love story me villain banta hai...yahan khud ki love story set kar raha hai...Matlab Naina aur Sameer pe daya nahi aati ise😡

Sur... PM karti hun raat ko... 😃

Arjun ka to kya hi kehna... woh kare to raasleela... Sameer-Naina kare to character dheela... Aisa situation hai... Na akkal hai, na sensitivity, and naa hi courage... Behen ke kaan pakde Taiji ne to flinch kiya but beech me kuch bolne ki himmat nai... Usse choti Preeti me kitni daring hai... Aur khud apni zindagi me tadka lagane ki koshish me laga hua hai... tab safari suit se darr nai lagta usko... Naina ka saath dene me hamesha darr lagta hai... 😡

Preeti blackmailing Arjun is interesting scenario... Minu (TereLiyeMinu) baki hai blackmailing me... Usko batate hai..!! 😆

Edited by moumita04 - 7 years ago

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Wow yaar

Part 2 was simply amazing

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Phoenix

@Phoenix100

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Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Sur... It was simply amazing dear.

The star of this story is Rohan 😆... Show main na sahi yhan pe toh kuch kiya usne... Loved the brother bonding between sam and rohan... Arjun as selfish as ever... Even helping naina for his own selfish motives😡..

Sam vishakha bonding even for a small time was really beautiful... Loved how sam got some happiness... Sam thinking about naina being a dream was so cute... The desperation and pain was beautifully penned... The hug was mind blowing.

Preeti liking jeejaji's bhai😆... I liked that preeti made the first move... Rohan though shy, still noticed preeti and indirectly trying to know whether she's taken😛... Sam being the best bhai and jeeji playing cupid was damn cute..

I must say one thing sur... U always fulfills my wishes through your stories... Be it nanu naina meet or Rohan sam bonding... Loved this one as much as your previous ones.

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Sameer's dialogue to Rohan at the end had me grinning from ear to ear.
Loved how Rohan was the mastermind behind getting Arjun to Delhi to take his brother out of his misery... Must admit that there are a good few blackmailers in these FF's and im glad Shefali is one of them.
Absolutely loved Sameer's Mandir scene and Rohan's sarcastic thought that love changed Sameer.
Hope to see you writing about Rohan and Preeti in the near future

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MeenAkshi Kalra

@dreamyp

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Posted: 7 years ago

#89

Loved preeti n rohan conversation.. dil le lo hayee so cute.. awsm update dear..

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: moumita04

Sur... PM karti hun raat ko... 😃
Arjun ka to kya hi kehna... woh kare to raasleela... Sameer-Naina kare to character dheela... Aisa situation hai... Na akkal hai, na sensitivity, and naa hi courage... Behen ke kaan pakde Taiji ne to flinch kiya but beech me kuch bolne ki himmat nai... Usse choti Preeti me kitni daring hai... Aur khud apni zindagi me tadka lagane ki koshish me laga hua hai... tab safari suit se darr nai lagta usko... Naina ka saath dene me hamesha darr lagta hai... 😡

Preeti blackmailing Arjun is interesting scenario... Minu (TereLiyeMinu) baki hai blackmailing me... Usko batate hai..!! 😆

BOLD: 🤣 Mere kaanon me gaana bajne laga...main karun to saala character dheela hai...kaash ye gaana un dinon release hua hota to Sameer Arjun ko dekh dekh ke gaata aur naachta...fir uske samne Naina ko apni baahon me leta aur use chidhata 😆 LoL...kahan se kahan chali gayi meri imagination! Vaise us Arjun ko to dekh ke na itna gussa aa raha tha kal! You are absolutely right- guts nai hai bande mein...ekdum fattu! Alas, opposites attract...isliye bechari Shefali bhi fas gayi! And I too really like Preeti's character- us ghar me koi Naina ke liye support hai to Preeti hai- she can stand up for the correct thing n speak her mind out...Bela aur Anand ko chod do aur...baaki sab us ghar me useless hain!😆

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