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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: souhasini

Hilarious update dear. Arjun preeti nainasameer scene was super


Thank you dear!! 😆 Glad you enjoyed the fun part too!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: chaaru26

Such a wonderful update

Safar suit's ranting session was 🤣
The bike ride and the rooftop romance was super cute.
I really want Naina-Rohan-Deepika bonding in the serial also


Thank you Charu!! SS to bolta hi rehta hai...puri duniya se problem hai use! 😆 So happy to see you liked the romance! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Really kan pakad ke sorry for nt unresing it soon..
Well loved this update about how they got comfortable with each other.Well! Are you planning to convert it into SS? I love the story uptil now as it had been sketched.Stretching it would make lose a certain spark in it.My POV though.Hope you don't mind the comment.😳

Coming to the update--
Oh god I really loved SS in this..how he doesnot get sore throat after shouting so much..😕 Good that he slept and our love bird could fly to their nest to have some coochie coo moments.😳 However I especially loved the characterization of Arjun.Being elder to a sister who is madly in love is sometimes a a pain and more of anxiety.Being an elder sister I feel for Arjun.But it was so nice to see Sameer gentle manly asking for his permission to take away his darling sister and ensuring all her security.

Any elder brother/sister can happily give away his/her sister's hand to such a gentleman.

Rohan and Deepika scenes were lit and I really hoped they could have explored this in show taking some inspiration from fandom.Two characters gone waste...Well you have utilised them well and have exploited their roles which definitely adds to credibility of yours as a writer.

All in all looved the update.
Thanks for the PM and keep coming with more.


With love--
Minu.
Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990


Thank you Azraa dear! Glad you enjoyed the 1st date in Delhi!😳Would write another part or two then and include Prehan romance!😳



Thank You
Thank You
Thank You
So now this is now officially an SS
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Posted: 7 years ago
Convert it into ss, sur...just love ur penning...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Woohhh.. what a update dear!!.. Maja aa gaya padhke.. waise Dilliwali date mast thi.. 😉

You wrote the third part.. I thought it's two shot.. but you did well now please write fourth part also and make it the four shot.. 😃

That part is really an amazing.. total romantic.. loved it!!

Sameer's signal through song, Preeti's idea and her answer to Arjun.. everything was perfect.. 👏

Rakesh is such a irritating character.. mujhe to woh stories mein bhi pasand nahi aata.. 😡

I loved how Arjun helped SamAina for their date.. finally saala maan hi gaya.. I liked their conversation

Finally Vishakha got to know about Samaina.. As supportive mother, she blessed them

Rohan, Deepika and Naina's meeting was very nice.. I felt it realistic

And finally romantic parts.. In this update we got 2 kisses with 1 flying kiss.. ☺️

Bike ride.. Naina's hand was around Sameer's waist and her head on his shoulders, yeh to sirf stories mein hi ho sakta hai

Rooftop.. sameer was making her blush from that lipstick mark on letters..haayye us kiss ke bare mein kuch bolna hi kam hai so no words for this and jaanu was also making me blush ☺️

I have a complaint dear.. why did you write so many dishes names?? I'm on the diet.. muhh mein paani aa jaata hai, samjha karo na.. 😆

Please update soon.. Thanks for the PM dear

Edited by msdfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing description of their date in Delhi... was really surprised at the way Preeti fooled SS and Arjun agreeing...hahha ...itna sweetness usse kabhi expected nahi hai😆
Their time together was really nicely described...Mt Abu ki yaad aa gayi😃
Rohan and Preeti ...would love to see together😃
thanks for this awesome update dear😃

Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani

Of course u have to continue it...

U don't have any other option
Omg Sameer's failed attempt to kiss her lips but he made himself satisfied with cheek kiss
And that "jaanu" loved it
Next time I want Preeti Rohan scene too
But this update was just perfectly romantic
And whole time while reading it I was just blushing ...blushing and blushing. ...😳



Aww dear! Thank you so much! 😳😳 BTW...what do you prefer being called? 😊
So happy to see you enjoyed the innocent romance on the brink of exploring adulthood! 😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

Kya tha ye ...omg I can't tell you how happy I'm feeling after reading this update ..its the best

You made my boring day so jolly jolly ..love you
I was waiting for it since sooo long ..I seriously love this story of yours ..
Samaina lovers ke sukhe hue dilon pe pyar ki baarish kar Di tumne .
I really wish show mein Aisa kuch dikhate but we don't need worry when we have such amezing writers like you

Coming to the update ..can it more cuter than this
It had all the emotions I like in a story romance , comedy , tashan ...the dialogues were just awesome ..dil le lo
Sameer dheet Maheshwari was superb.. Loved Sameer and arjun conversion it was the highlight of the update
Specially that " kanyadan ..pinddaan " one and Sameer controlling himself from spilling another cheezy line in front of arjun ..I loved it to the core
As per arjun Sameer taking " permission " from him was fantastic.. Samaina hug and a hand kiss ..uff mar gai mein
And then the bike ride after that was so romantic
You wrote vishakha's scene with samaina soo well ..I could imagin every bit of it ..I wish CVS show something like this in near future ..
Loved that chotu sa preehan moment ..rohan blushing
You are making it so difficult for me to believe that rohan is not going to come in ahemdabad ...par ek din we will surely get preehan
Sameer teasing our bholi Naina is all I need ..he was in full mood ..that lipstick mark on letter talk was so hot
And our boy complementing his girl's skin was so like typical gf - bf ..well that's what they are ..
Thanks you so much for this wonderful update my dear


As always waiting for your updates
Please do come soon
Bhagwan bhala karega

Love
Laalchi reader

Hey Manisha dear! Dil le lo! 🤗 Love you too yaar! I wanted to show some romantic moments between Samaina...initially thought of starting with Qutub Minar n Lal Kila n Chandni Chowk types...but then I thought Naina subah mili to raat bhar Sameer wait kaise karega uske bina...n pehle in summers, we also used to sleep on the rooftop, under the sky...especially jab light chali jati thi toh...with machardani n all...now times have changed! So just wanted to show something on those lines...
Tumhare dil me Samaina pyaar ki baarish ho gayi...bas isse acha kya ho sakta hai...pata nahi show mein kab aankh micholi khatam hogi inki! 😆
I wanted the romance to be innocent, yet a bit suggestive...both Sameer n Naina are growing up n are madly in love...kitna door reh paayenge...😊 Added a dash of humour here...as Safari suit ke chillane and Arjun ki apparent permission to leni hi padegi na...wanted Preeti to chip in...I'm sure she would do so on the show too someday! Blackmail Arjun...😆
n I somehow wanted to show Vishakha gets to know about Naina...show me to sare armanon pe paani fir gya...ab Preehan, Preedit kuch to mile I'm thinking ki Preeti ko kuwari rakhenge 🤣
n ab Sam ko Naina ne kiss marks bheje toh...Sameer chance pe dance to maarega hi...pata nahi show me to is dumbo ne notice bhi nahi kiye...sach mein bholuram ban gaya hai yeh!
Anyways..thanks for showering all the love dear!

Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thank you dear!😊

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