TS: Kaun Apna, Kaun Paraya (Part3- Page17) - Page 17

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

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Hey Simi!! Thank you so much yaar! You won't believe I dreamt about you last night! 😆 So I somehow knew it was you...and you were on a family vacation on a desert resort...night camp near an oasis type...n ur kids (I know plural ho gaya) were playing by the sea-side (yeah yeah..desert ke side mein 😆)...n kaafi rainy rainy sa weather ho raha hai...n u r telling us on the forum that you are on vacation for 4 days...so agar mera sapna sach hua to u r going on a vacation hehehe!

Don't mind dear...laga to share kiya! 😊

Coming to the update...Thanks a ton dear! You always come back with such detailed n lovely comments that I feel fulfilled as a budding writer! Really- it's very encouraging! 😊

In the Agarwal family, Preeti is the only one who can tackle Arjun n in the Agarwal family-to-be, we can safely include Shefali hehe...baaki Maheshwari ji to kisi ke baap se bhi nahi darte...thoda bahot Naina ke baap se bas! 😉 How I wish we could see the supportive Arjun n the doting brother he was shown in the beginning of the show...I was actually angry at Sameer that he stole her shoes, n she was crying innocently...he went to eat in the canteen, while Arjun made Naina eat her tiffin...ab the tables are turned though n I love it! 😊

Vishakha- Naina n Deepika-Naina ke bade hopes the mujhe Delhi track se...par wo kehte hain na...khoda pahad, nikli chuhiya...wahi haal ho gaya hai Delhi track ka toh...at least Kedi ka toh!

A date under a starlit sky is my favourite...I hope I can get one someday...but the pollution here n the crowd...😕 so living it thru our Samaina!

Ab Naina lipstick marks bhejegi letters pe to Sameer bholuram to hai nahi! Wo to bas Naina ke pyaar aur innocence mein kho gaya hai...varna pehle wala Sameer hota to kabka use kiss bhi kar chuka hota...but I hope we will see the rise and return of the swag wala Sameer Maheshwari too...

Thank you so much for such beautiful words dear!!!

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Lots of Love

Sur

Originally posted by: angelic567

haha sur... U dreamt about me... Dats great 😆... Meri shakal kaisi thi dream me? 😉... Btw desert toh hai yahaan pe... Seaside bhi hai... Bt i'm not on a vacation... Ab toh Ramadan bhi started... May be eid holidays pe jaungi... Bt not definitely to a desert 😆

Delhi track ka toh poora kachra kar diya tha... Kachru se bhi zyada 😉... Cvs were high on something while writing those tracks n even this manhoostrack😆... Waise ashi riddhima ki offscreen pics dekhke i too had hopes on naina deepika scene... Par kuch nahi mila... Bt thanks to you for writing this.. .. Atleast this dream is fulfilled this way... From love in mt. Abu to this one, u always managed to surprise me with amazing stories... All the unfulfilled dreams do get fulfilled reading your stories... Be it this one ir nanu naina last meet... Thanks a ton dear.

Love you dear.

Originally posted by: angelic567

haha sur... U dreamt about me... Dats great 😆... Meri shakal kaisi thi dream me? 😉... Btw desert toh hai yahaan pe... Seaside bhi hai... Bt i'm not on a vacation... Ab toh Ramadan bhi started... May be eid holidays pe jaungi... Bt not definitely to a desert 😆

Delhi track ka toh poora kachra kar diya tha... Kachru se bhi zyada 😉... Cvs were high on something while writing those tracks n even this manhoostrack😆... Waise ashi riddhima ki offscreen pics dekhke i too had hopes on naina deepika scene... Par kuch nahi mila... Bt thanks to you for writing this.. .. Atleast this dream is fulfilled this way... From love in mt. Abu to this one, u always managed to surprise me with amazing stories... All the unfulfilled dreams do get fulfilled reading your stories... Be it this one ir nanu naina last meet... Thanks a ton dear.

Love you dear.

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update
preeti is darling
I love arjmeer ka convo they r cuties
Yeee!! vishakha accepted naina as bahu... loved it
aww Rohan missing preeti n everyone teasing him
finally a beautiful date
loved the update

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Really kan pakad ke sorry for nt unresing it soon..

Well loved this update about how they got comfortable with each other.Well! Are you planning to convert it into SS? I love the story uptil now as it had been sketched.Stretching it would make lose a certain spark in it.My POV though.Hope you don't mind the comment.😳

Coming to the update--

Oh god I really loved SS in this..how he doesnot get sore throat after shouting so much..😕 Good that he slept and our love bird could fly to their nest to have some coochie coo moments.😳 However I especially loved the characterization of Arjun.Being elder to a sister who is madly in love is sometimes a a pain and more of anxiety.Being an elder sister I feel for Arjun.But it was so nice to see Sameer gentle manly asking for his permission to take away his darling sister and ensuring all her security.

Any elder brother/sister can happily give away his/her sister's hand to such a gentleman.

Rohan and Deepika scenes were lit and I really hoped they could have explored this in show taking some inspiration from fandom.Two characters gone waste...Well you have utilised them well and have exploited their roles which definitely adds to credibility of yours as a writer.

All in all looved the update.

Thanks for the PM and keep coming with more.

With love--

Minu.

Originally posted by: AaishaM

I know mai bohat piche hun, but please no joote chappals. Dheere dheere hi sahi sab cover krungi.😭

Arey nahi dear...no worries...I had read ur comment sometime back...but missed to reply there...so sorry yaar!

Hye rabba. This Majnu Maheshwari is who I badly miss in the show. Trying out different ways to spend time with his lady love. Kya idea chuna hai boss, gaana bajwa kr hint dena. Vaah vaah. And Naina is no less, apne majnu ka hint smjh gyi. I am proud of her.

Hehe...dono ka 6th sense connection hai na...samajh jaate hain ek dusre ke dil ki baat...yaar...mujhe na wapis se aisa Sameer dekhna hai show mein! 😆

Ye Preeti ko bbi dharti faad ideas hi aate hain? Preeti the savior, I love her always. She is such a strong support system to Naina. Naina is indeed lucky to have her. Lol, kya nautanki baaz hai dono ladkiyan. Bdiya acting kri. Uff this Safari suit uncle, wi he ever change? Sara time ka ka ka ka. Kuch kro inka bhai.😆

Munna se inspire hoke Preeti ko bhi dhartiphaad ideas aane lage hain! Me too- Preeti is one character I simply love at par with Mundit...matlab they aren't really side characters- as important as leads themselves...show me aadhi jaan to yahi log daalte hain! Safari suit to kabhi badal nahi sakta- kaan mein ruyi daal lena behtar hoga! 😆😉

Aaj ka Arjun is back with his ka ka too. Uff this guy, dono baap bete ka kuch nahi hoga. Preeti, preeti, jijaji ki saali ji, dil le lo. The love she has for Naina and her love is so endearing. She can go to any lengths for them. Sucha a selfless soul. Kya pataya hai Arjun ko, shabaash.🥳

Sach mein...baap numbari to beta 10 numbari hai! Preeti is really selfless...n she is one character who has never degraded Naina nor ever thought that she wasn't good enough for Sameer- while everyone else thought so...infact she makes it clear to Sam that he too is lucky to have her! Arjun ko tackle karne ke liye Preeti hi best hai! 😆

Sameer Arjun scene: I loved the fact that Sameer didn't hide anything From Arjun. His fearless attitude and the conviction with which he said about Naina had surely given hints to Arjun that Sameer will not listen to anyone when it comes to Naina and his relation. haye sameer , tum b dil le lo. Saale ko aisi hi treatment ki zarurat hai.😆

That's true yaar...I actually adore men like Sameer in real life too...pyaar kiya to darna kya...pyaar to bahot log karte hain, but nibhane ki himmat sab mein kahan hoti hai! Sameer is fearless as he's not doing anything wrong n he understands Arjun's POV too...that's told him everything, but at the same time, made sure, that he isn't waiting for his permission! That's the swag wala Sameer Maheshwari for me! 😉

Oh my god Oh my God, finally he kissed her hand and this time Naina didnt slap him. haha bach gaya ladka.

Oh that bike ride, I am in Samaina dream land. Kitna romantic ride thi.

Hehe...ab pyaar mein hai to kab tak rokenge khud ko...romance to hona hi hai...thank you dear!

So, vishakha knows about Naina too. Hmm., serial me to ye hone se raha. I loved how vishakha told sameer to take care. And yes she knows that Nanu knew about Naina too, what can be better than this?

Yep...I so wanted Vishakha to know about Naina, but alas! 😕

Aww Deepika is so cute. Bhabhi aapka naam bhabhi hai, such a pyaara baccha she is. I loved how she instantly bonded with Naina. Kids are always like that. 😉

Kids are innocent and cute...that's what I wanted to show with Deepika...no prejudices attached...she likes Naina bhabhi already! 😊

Hayeee cheeks pr bbi kiss ho gaya? Aaj to didi jaan hi le lo aap. Sameer baba sahi ja rhe hain. Thankyou thankyou so much, Vo kiss vala letter lane ke liye picture me. My bholi bhali naina didnt even know what does those kisses signify. Haha bechari embarassed ho gayi. Pr sameer is such a gentleman.☺️

Hehe...Sameer is a gentleman but he can be otherwise once he's married too...😆 tab he's gonna let Naina go off the hook so easily! Ab ladka jawan ho raha hai na...thoda to chahega kiss karna n all! 😆 n wo lipstick wale mark ka bhi qissa adhura chod diya CVs ne- to I wanted to write about Sam's reaction on those letters too!

Surbhi di, This was an amazing series. This is what I actually wanted to see on screen isntead of Kedi drama. Rohan-deepika-Sam bonding and further their bond with Naina. Cvs have actually lost a golden chance. They could have shown a lot of sensible things which audiences would have loved. Thank God, you wrote this otherwise mera dimaag khr.ab kr diya tha Cvs ne. Thanks again for writing this🤗

Thank you so much for liking this series yaar...even I wanted something light hearted and positive rather than what was shown on screen...I too would say, they lost a golden chance here...they could have taken the show to new heights despite the judaai...but no- now I'm waiting for this manhoosiyat bit to be over!

Originally posted by: anuridi

Thanks for the pm and what a great update..These stories of yours keep the forum active to great extent !!!

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Thanks dear Aaisha...my comments in bold here!