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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Hitanshivyas

Such a beautiful and romantic update and loved the sameer and arjun conversation arjun's reaction was so hilarious specially that kanyadan and pinddan vali line and loved the vishakha and sameer bond too and samaina's romantic bike ride par to dil le lo and sameer teasing naina is all I need thanks for the update and as well as for pm and update soon


Awww thank you so much dear...glad you liked the various instances of the story...n found it an enjoyable read! 😃😃 Sameer ko chahiye to Kanyadaan par sasurji ka iraada abhi theek hai nahi...n I so wanted Vishakha to at least know about Naina...to yahan daal diya...baaki Samaina to hamare hain hi romantic! 😳
Thank you once again!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Hayee, Surbhi!! Kya bike ride thi yaar☺️ Maza hi aa gya

Hehe...Anjali...thank you so much dear!! 😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ayeshakapoor

Nice update dear...
Continue soon...


Thank you dear! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow it was so romantic pleasant .. loved it
Please write more ..
I liked the flying kiss from Naina ..
Please update next part soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lakku19

Wow it was so romantic pleasant .. loved it
Please write more ..
I liked the flying kiss from Naina ..
Please update next part soon..

Hey dear!! Thank you so much!!! Glad you enjoyed the update...and found it to be romantic! 😳😳 Would surely write a part or two more now! Thank you for the encouragement!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Amazing description of their date in Delhi... was really surprised at the way Preeti fooled SS and Arjun agreeing...hahha ...itna sweetness usse kabhi expected nahi hai😆

Their time together was really nicely described...Mt Abu ki yaad aa gayi😃
Rohan and Preeti ...would love to see together😃
thanks for this awesome update dear😃

Thanks for the pm😊


Thanks dear Manisha!! So happy to see you liked it! Haan wo thoda taaron ki chaav mein Mt. Abu types tha na...but I somehow find time spent under the stars very romantic personally! 😳 Ab Safari suit ko tackle karna akele Naina ke bus ki to hai nai hehe! Would try to give Prehan in the next one too!
Love
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: msdfan

Woohhh.. what a update dear!!.. Maja aa gaya padhke.. waise Dilliwali date mast thi.. 😉

You wrote the third part.. I thought it's two shot.. but you did well now please write fourth part also and make it the four shot.. 😃

That part is really an amazing.. total romantic.. loved it!!

Sameer's signal through song, Preeti's idea and her answer to Arjun.. everything was perfect.. 👏

Rakesh is such a irritating character.. mujhe to woh stories mein bhi pasand nahi aata.. 😡

I loved how Arjun helped SamAina for their date.. finally saala maan hi gaya.. I liked their conversation

Finally Vishakha got to know about Samaina.. As supportive mother, she blessed them

Rohan, Deepika and Naina's meeting was very nice.. I felt it realistic

And finally romantic parts.. In this update we got 2 kisses with 1 flying kiss.. ☺️

Bike ride.. Naina's hand was around Sameer's waist and her head on his shoulders, yeh to sirf stories mein hi ho sakta hai

Rooftop.. sameer was making her blush from that lipstick mark on letters..haayye us kiss ke bare mein kuch bolna hi kam hai so no words for this and jaanu was also making me blush ☺️

I have a complaint dear.. why did you write so many dishes names?? I'm on the diet.. muhh mein paani aa jaata hai, samjha karo na.. 😆

Please update soon.. Thanks for the PM dear


Hey dear Sona! I now realized what you meant...I had missed out on this comment by you and Manisha on this story! Sorry for that! 😊
Pehle toh...yaar wo dishes ke names na mere khud ke favourite hain...haha but I'll take care next time ki diet na affect ho hehe! 😆
You are very right...this was indeed meant to be a Two Shot only...but then I saw a few comments with people asking for more...so thought of writing something on their Delhi dates...this was part 3...I have at least a part 4 in mind...definitely! 😳
I'm so happy that you enjoyed the romance in the story...I was just thinking that Sameer would want to spend every moment of his time with Naina now that she is here...😊 so isliye thought of writing something on a night date!
You actually counted the kisses...hehe...abhi maine realize kiya ki I gave 3 kisses here haha! 😆 I wanted Sameer to get thoda bold...agar Naina lipstick marks bhej sakti hai to Sam bhi thoda bold hoga hi na...hehe...n jaanu vaanu bhi Sam ko hi start karna padega! 😆😆
Again thank you so much for the comments dear!
Lots of love
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Uv78

Convert it into ss, sur...just love ur penning...


Thank you UV! Would definitely write at least a part more! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelic567

This was the best update so far

What a plan by sameer... Loved how preeti tried convincing arjun... She knows how to handle the situations and how to play the cards... Sameer managing to convince arjun was amazing... The honesty and truthfulness in sameer will melt anyone... Phir arjun toh loves naina and wants her to be happy always.

Vishakha naina meet is one of my dreams which doesn't seems to get fulfilled anytime soon in the show... Thanks for that part... Vishakha trusting sameer's choice was what i loved... Vishakha's warning to sameer was so like a mother... Loved how sam assured her that he wont cross his limits.

Deepika - naina is another unfulfilled dream... Thank you so much sur dear for fulfilling all these dreams... We have seen sameer's interactions with each and every member of the agarwals... Bt none between naina and sameer's family members... Deepika's questions and her interactions with naina were so damn cute.

What a magical date dear... Taaron ke neeche samaina leti hui... Wow... I can't get over it... Mischievous sameer doesn't want to hold back anymore... The kiss... Him saying her cheek is so soft😳.. Sam teasing her about the lipstick marks on the letters... . Everything was magical... Sur dil lelo for this date... I so wish we get something like this in the show..

You were amazing as usual... Killed it... No words can describe how special this update was.❤️

Hey Simi!! Thank you so much yaar! You won't believe I dreamt about you last night! 😆 So I somehow knew it was you...and you were on a family vacation on a desert resort...night camp near an oasis type...n ur kids (I know plural ho gaya) were playing by the sea-side (yeah yeah..desert ke side mein 😆)...n kaafi rainy rainy sa weather ho raha hai...n u r telling us on the forum that you are on vacation for 4 days...so agar mera sapna sach hua to u r going on a vacation hehehe!
Don't mind dear...laga to share kiya! 😊
Coming to the update...Thanks a ton dear! You always come back with such detailed n lovely comments that I feel fulfilled as a budding writer! Really- it's very encouraging! 😊
In the Agarwal family, Preeti is the only one who can tackle Arjun n in the Agarwal family-to-be, we can safely include Shefali hehe...baaki Maheshwari ji to kisi ke baap se bhi nahi darte...thoda bahot Naina ke baap se bas! 😉 How I wish we could see the supportive Arjun n the doting brother he was shown in the beginning of the show...I was actually angry at Sameer that he stole her shoes, n she was crying innocently...he went to eat in the canteen, while Arjun made Naina eat her tiffin...ab the tables are turned though n I love it! 😊
Vishakha- Naina n Deepika-Naina ke bade hopes the mujhe Delhi track se...par wo kehte hain na...khoda pahad, nikli chuhiya...wahi haal ho gaya hai Delhi track ka toh...at least Kedi ka toh!
A date under a starlit sky is my favourite...I hope I can get one someday...but the pollution here n the crowd...😕 so living it thru our Samaina!
Ab Naina lipstick marks bhejegi letters pe to Sameer bholuram to hai nahi! Wo to bas Naina ke pyaar aur innocence mein kho gaya hai...varna pehle wala Sameer hota to kabka use kiss bhi kar chuka hota...but I hope we will see the rise and return of the swag wala Sameer Maheshwari too...

Thank you so much for such beautiful words dear!!!
😳

Lots of Love
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update
preeti is darling
I love arjmeer ka convo they r cuties
Yeee!! vishakha accepted naina as bahu... loved it
aww Rohan missing preeti n everyone teasing him
finally a beautiful date
loved the update

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