Story of a Kiss - OS (16+) - Page 4

Originally posted by: lakku19

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Wow.. amazing it is.. very beautiful..

I loved his Kiss on her neck.. and him engulfing his arms on her eaist.

I was literally imagining it.

Please do write more.

May be a continuation or another OS..

Originally posted by: Anmol333

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Very quick 😆

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Awesome os 😳😳

Blush worthy 😳

SamAina apna past yaad kar rahe the or Hume goosebumps as rahe the 😉😆😳

That was really hot, how Sameer was making her insane 😳

Do write more ☺️

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

The first definitely not the last ..hope so.😉

Awed by your writing style.👏👏

I would not summarize because that's not needed...I would applaud your choice of your words 👏👏

I know how difficult is it to pen the appropriate words to create intensity.How we have to feel the emotions first and then let the readers feel...So you did a great job at that.👏👏

Keep writing..

If I am not wrong,were you in Peshwa Bajirao Forum?

With love-

Minu.

Originally posted by: KashafZaroon30

Finally raat ko padh liya😆

This was a sensuous and a beautiful piece of writing...

I always feel that writing a sensuous piece is always very difficult...and I must say you have put in a lot of effort here...well-written with proper set-up...👍🏼

That was beautiful 😳
well written

Originally posted by: .Khamosh.

That was beautiful 😳
well written

Ok im back..its really sizzling Kshiti..i loved how their first had to happen in their familiar surroundings where this had to be literally their cocoon nest...❤️!..beautiful as i say the way it started from those light feathery kisses to one blown intense one..☺️.Can actually feel the yearning they had for each other n tat needed to be satiated at some point ..n the way u described it jus gve me goosebumps...!It was romantic yet passionate with those awww talks between them where Naina couldnt even mouth it...!Hmm im jus in dreamland...Thanku for writing this beautiful piece...Have already bookmarked it!😆

Originally posted by: mehraan

Ok im back..its really sizzling Kshiti..i loved how their first had to b happen in their familiar surroundings where this had to be literally their cocoon nest...❤️!..beautiful as i say the way it started from those light feathery kisses to one blown intense one..☺️.Can actually feel the yearning they had for each other n tat needed to be satiated at some point ..n the way u described it jus gve me goosebumps...!It was romantic yet passionate with those awww talks between them where Naina couldnt even mouth it...!Hmm im jus in dreamland...Thanku for writing this beautiful pieced...Had bookmarked it!😆

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Ha ha...how was the experience? 😉

And Thank You. You guys write such kind words and encourage me to write more and more. 😳

Love

Kshithi

Woowww Kshithi!!!!! Just Wowww...