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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

The first definitely not the last ..hope so.😉

Awed by your writing style.👏👏

I would not summarize because that's not needed...I would applaud your choice of your words 👏👏

I know how difficult is it to pen the appropriate words to create intensity.How we have to feel the emotions first and then let the readers feel...So you did a great job at that.👏👏

Keep writing..

If I am not wrong,were you in Peshwa Bajirao Forum?

With love-

Minu.

Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Mera kiss day to aaj hi ho gya☺️

Passionate n intense

Do write more

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mehraan

@mehraan

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Wat we can get in the continuation...?😆 pls specify!🤣

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Kshithi

@Muggle_Diaries

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: angelic567
Wow... In dreamland😳

Thank You. 😳

Love

Kshithi

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Kshithi

@Muggle_Diaries

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: SammP
This is indeed MAGIC!

Loved your start and how it continued with the story. The library scene was very well conceptualized and presented. Complete natural and organic.

Great Job!

Wow.. thanks a lot. 😊

This means a lot to me.

Love

Kshithi