New FF: tum meri ho part 16 (pg 53) April 30 updated; no pms for this - Page 9

Originally posted by: Anamaaezah

I am absolutely a newbie here... I love this story sooo much ... I don't how many times I have read it... normally I am a silent reader...but your story made me to write...

How sweet. thank you for commenting dear. Please keep your comments coming. its inspires me to imagine more hahahh :)

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Absolutel sizzler!! Loved Majnu Maheswari and Lajwanti Laila :)

Sameer definitely used the permission to improvise to the max!!

Loved his bold intense avatar. Naina must be wondering that if he is so hands on even before her confession.. baad mein kya hoga!!

Next update eagerly awaited!

lol my Sameer had lot more in mind but, this forum has many youngsters here...zyada romance will give fainting teenagers and i will have to order ambulance hahahahha 😆 so I am keeping it cute with an edge 😆

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed

Laila Majnu hayeee Kia Likha hai ufff kafi zabardast scene that lol agar class na hoti toh pata Nahi Sameer Kia kardete

Up writing it girl please don't stop it .. believe me it's wonderful ...

Waiting for the next part .. I hope we will get some more Romance it that hayee I actually crave for their romance ...

Ur an amazing writer and there's no doubt it in

Keep it up girl

Writing something wonderful is not easy .. but you have such an amazing talent of writing please keep writing don't stop .. more power to you

Thank you Alisha for commenting and thank you for liking the story. Keep commenting :) And thank you for sending power my way hahahah :D I wish they have one of those days where they play what a viewer has written, i would totally write a sizzling episode for them hahahahh😆 Its hard to put your real imagination in words, that only you can imagine...but I am trying my best 😆

Bit of a late lateef this time!!

Enjoyed sameer's intense stares at Naina... 😳
Na jaane kya kya sochta raheta hai apne dreamworld main

Laila majnu was the perfect play for this beautiful couple. Especially hamare bindast and bold Sameer ke liye!! Bechari Naina
😆 !! Can't find a way to tame his intensity and impatience

Bas ab bol bhi do..
Tbh.. I kinda miss the Sameer and Naina's alone moments.. for me those are the real treats.!!!

😳

I loved all ur updates too much..

Thank you all who liked and commented. I don't know how to quote multiple people at same time so, i thank all :) Please leave more comments and like as much as you can to motivate me to write.

Part 6
Naina was so blushed up from what happened in the class. She did not even have the gutts to look up around the class. All left the class, and Naina was packing her bag along with Swathi. She was very slowly packing her bags as so many thoughts about the class play was running in her head.

Swathi: Naina jaldi karna, kiska intezaar kar rahi hai?
Naina: haan haan jaldi kar rahi hoon na Swathi...aur kisika bhi intezaar nahin kar rahi...bag pack karke andar toh rakhne de
Swathi: jaldi karna fir hum khel nahin payenge aur next period shooru ho jayega...
Naina: theek hai tu aage chal mein aati hoon...
Swathi: kya yaar naina, Theek hai mein jati hoon...tu jaldi aajana...


Naina packed her bag, and placed it in the little hiding spot in her desk. But she was so lost in her thought that instead of going to play with Swathi, she just sat there on her desk in her deep thoughts. There were so many things running in her head.

Sameer entered the classroom. He noticed Naina sitting on her desk. He stood at the entrance and kept starring at her lovingly but, she did not move a bit or looked his way. He coughed but she didn't hear him. She just kept starring in one direction without responding. Sameer realized that he she was lost in thoughts.

There was no one in any of the classrooms. or the corridors, as during games period all are outside. No one bothers coming into the classroom.

Sameer slowly walked towards her, and she kept starring blankly, completely lost to her surroundings. Sameer came and stood close to her desk, and starred down at her, and she felt his presence now.

She came out of her thoughts, and just looked down with her eyes towards her side. She saw his feet, and slowly her eyes moved up and realized that he was standing near her desk, and starring down at her smirking. When her eyes met his, he raised his eyebrow, and winked at her. She was jolted a bit, and just in nervousness got up from her desk from the opposite side of where Sameer was standing and turned away from him. Her back was facing him.

Naina: tummm...tum yaahan kya kar rahe ho?
Sameer smirked, put his hands in his pant pockets in a stylish way.
sameer (smiling looking at her nervousness): wohi joh tum kar rahi ho...
Naina: mein bas abhi jane wali thi Swathi ke pass...
Sameer (teasing tone): accha? tumhe dekhke aisa lag toh nahin raha tha...

Sameer went around the table and took couple of steps towards where she was standing, hands still in his pockets...and she moves forward couple of steps away from him to maintain the distance...
Sameer smirked realizing what she was doing. But he was having too much fun teasing her now.

Sameer: accha meri taraf dekho bhi nahin ab?
Naina (blushing) nodded in a no
Sameer moved two step closer to her. His body towering so close to her from behind, and his breath fanning literally on her head. She felt him close, and she tried to move two steps ahead again.

But this time, Sameer grabbed her Dupatta from one side. She didn't expect that and tried to move further but, he was too quick. He pulled the dupatta and she was brought back two steps her back nearly colliding into his chest. He brought his face down to her ear.

Her back was facing him, her face was all pink, looking down at the floor. His face was so close to her ear, him bent down slightly, his breath fanning the skin on her neck and her ear.

Sameer (whispered): sharmati hui bahot khoobsurat lagti ho...
Naina sighed, and she felt as if her heart stopped beating for a minute.
Sameer (whispered again): Nainaaa(seductively), itna sharmaogi toh mein khood ko sambhal nahin paunga...and turned his face towards her slightly to look at her. His chin was almost touching her shoulder, and his head was slightly twisted towards her face.

Naina felt very shy so, she covered her face with both her palms. She couldn't understand all that she was feeling, nor could she let him see her in that situation. She took a step forward but, he again stepped forward towards her.

This time he completely kept his chin on her shoulder. Her face was still covered by her palms. He slowly let go off her dupatta, and brought his hands to her arms and slid them down her arms and towards her hand which were covering her face. Naina stopped breathing for a moment.

He tried to move her hands from her face but, she wasn't letting him. When he finally managed to get her hands off of her face, he noticed her hands were wet. Sameer got concerned and he slowly turned her to face him.

Her face was down. Her eyes were still tightly shut, her face was super pink, and there were drop of tears flowing down her cheeks from her closed eyes. He looked at her face and got worried.

He brought his hands to her cheeks and wiped her tears with his thumb. But more tears kept running down her face.

Sameer (softly): kya hua Naina? Meine kooch galat kaha?

(small pause, starring at her face lovingly, and his both hands holding her face)

Sameer (softly): kooch toh bolo, please... tum ro kyon rahi ho? Mujhse kooch galti ho gayi? Dekho meri taraf aur bolo kya hua?

Naina couldn't take his eyes on her but he was not the one to let go so easily.

Sameer (whispered): pleaseee bolona...

Naina: Sameer wohhh (tears flowing down her eyes)

Sameer: hmmm (Sameer wiped her tears)

She sighed

Naina (whispered): Sameerrr please aise mat karo...

Sameer: kaise?

Naina (whispered): Sameerr, please

Sameer very well knew what she was referring to but, he wanted her to open up to him. Speak her mind with him.

She moved his hands away from her face and turned sideways from him and looking down in all nervousness.

Naina: tum please aise meri taraf mat dekho...please aise mere paas mat aaya karo...

Sameer was looking at her face from side...he came in front of her...looking down at her...

Sameer: kyon?

Naina: kyonki...woh...

Sameer: kyonki???

Naina (turning away from him, facing away from him): kyonki yeh theek nahin hai...

Sameer: kyon, yeh theek kyon nahin hai??

Naina (a little nervous, a little frustrated, a little shy): Sameer please, tum kyon nahin samajh rahe ho...

Sameer: ismein samjhna kya hai Naina...hmmm?

He came a little closer to her from behind...his breath was fanning on her...

Naina: please Sameer, log dekhenge toh kya sochenge? Tumne kabhi socha hai

Sameer: mein logo ki parvaah nahin karta...

Naina: Sameer please samjhne ki koshish karo..please...(pause)...meri badnami ho jayegi...

Sameer: mere hote hue tumhe kisi bhi baat ki chinta karne ki zaroorat nahin hai...

Naina: please Sameer...

Sameer: please Naina...ab bahot ho gaya...ek toh tum mujhe I love you nahin kehti ho, aur ab mujhe pyaar karne se bhi rok rahi ho...

He turned her around all frustrated...

Naina: Sameer please...mat karo aise...

He grabbed her by her shoulders.

Sameer: Naina, mein tumse pyaar karta hoon...tum kaho na kaho, mein bhi jaanta hoon ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho...aur is duniya mein koi aisa nahin hai joh mujhe tumse door rakh sakta hai...tum meri ho...sirf meri...

He grabbed her hands in his...she sighed...he tried to bring them upto his face, but, she resisted...he looked in her eyes, her eyes pleading...her head nodding a no stopping him from his this madness...His eyes were speaking volumes...There was so much passion, so much love in them that any woman could go weak in her knees...(if it wasn't 90's, he would have kissed her but, he knew his limits)

Finally he gave in to her pleading eyes...

Sameer: chalo theek hai, mein Sameer Maheshwari ek vadaa karta hoon tumse, ki mein tumhe sabke saamne tang nahin karunga (winked and smirked). Akele mein kooch nahin hoga, uski koi guarantee mein nahin le saktaaa...And gave a huge grin to her...

Naina snatched her hands away from his hold in her angry avatar...looked at his smiling face, gave him a you are impossible look, and left from there...

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Originally posted by: priyavishu18

Yipeee...

My Dear Buddy I m First to send Reply to U...

Marvelous Update Yaar...

😆 Thank you buddy Priya😃 Glad you liked the update. I wanted to finish this scene but, mother called lol so had to run...otherwise, you get jutta and chapaal on your head😆

I have read all the parts and all of them are excellent!

Originally posted by: Veda1125

I have read all the parts and all of them are excellent!

Please keep writing!

thank you Veda😃