Ishra new story " Bin Tere Kya hai Jeena" part 1-page 3 23/12/2019 - Page 2

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Interesting prologue

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Interesting

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Interesting prologue

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Congratulations for ur new story di

Interesting prologue

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Part 1


Dehradun,

a lady was walking through a corridor of a private school..The school runs classes from nursery to class 5..This school is owned by Mr.Raman kumar bhalla a multimillionaire and the most yong bachelor in the city.


"what the? oh my god phir se" the lady again got irked seeing her empty class.she quickly dials a number taking her phone and spoke..


" hello mihir..where is my kids? "


mihir - your kids? arey humare bacche kaha hue..jo mujhe baccho ke bare mein pooch rehi ho..


mihika - mihir dont make me angry..i have to start the classed but school mein ek bhi baccha nahi hai..


mihir - oh tho aise bolo na..i dont know where is your kids are?... one minute i think..


mihika - tum sochba bhi math duffer, bhai kahan gai..zaroor bacche unke saath honge..yeh bhagvan parents bachon ko yeha padne bhejthe hai aur yeh bhai hai ki bacho ko school se hi gatab kar de dethe hai..mihir search for them fast..aaj parents meeting bhi gai..i want kids back with in an hour..


mihir - arey yaar cool down let me search..saying he disconnected the call and dial's ramans number..but Our handsome hero was busy with his kisds team.. he was telling some story to kids in an open area which is filled with full of greenery..


Dekho Dekho Kya Woh Ped Hai, Chaadar Odhe Ya Khada Koi - 2

Baarish Hai Ya Aasmaan Ne Chhod Diye Hai Nal Khule Kahin

Ho Hum Dekhe Yeh Jahaan Waise Hi Jaise Nazar Apani

Khulke Socho Aao, Pankh Jara Failaao

Rang Naye Bikhraao, Chalo Chalo Chalo Chalo Naye Khaab Bunle

he was singing it with making different faces and actions which made kids laugh..

Sa Pa Dha Re Ga Re Ga Ma Pa Sa

Bum Bum Bum, Bum Bum Bum Bole

Hey Bumchik Bole, Are Masti Mein Dole

Bhala Machhliyaan Bhi Kyun Udati Nahin, Aise Bhi Socho Na

Socho Suraj Roj Nahaaye Ya, Baal Bhigoke Yeh Budhdhu Banaaye Hame

Saare Taare Tim Timaaye, Ya Phir Gusse Mein Kuchh Badbadaate Rahein

Khulke Socho Aao, Pankh Jara Failaao

Rang Naye Bikhraao, Chalo Chalo Chalo Chalo Naye Khaab Bunle

Ye Ye Ye Ye Ye.....

Bum Bum Bole, Masti Mein Dole

Bum Bum Bole, Masti Mein Tu Dol Re

he was made kids dance and they were enjoying with him wholeheartedly

O Rat Ratke Kyun Tanker Full, Tanker Full, Tanker Full

Aankhein Band Toh Dabaa Gul, Dabaa Gul, Dabaa Gul

O Band Darwaaje Khole Re, Khole Re, Khole Re, Khole Re

O Ja Bindaas Bol Re, Bol, Bol, Bol, Bol Re

Main Bhi Hoon, Tu Bhi Hai

Main Bhi, Tu Bhi, Hum Sab Milke

Bumchik Bum - 8 Bum Bum Bum Bum.....

Bum Bum Bole, Masti Mein Dole

Bum Bum Bole, Masti Mein Tu Dol Re

Aisi Rangobhari Apani Duniya Hai Kyun, Socho Toh Socho Na

Pyaar Se Chunake Inn Rango Ko Kisine Sajaaya Yeh Sansaar Hai

Jo Itani Sundar Hai Apani Duniya, Uparwaala Kya Koi Kalaakaar Hai

Khulke Socho Aao, Pankh Jara Failaao

Rang Naye Bikhraao, Chalo Chalo Chalo Chalo Naye Khaab Bunle

(Bum Bum Bole, Masti Mein Dole

Bum Bum Bole, Masti Mein Tu Dol Re) - 4 O Bum Bum Bole


after having lots if fun time with kids raman drooped them in the school almost ath the school ending time..mihika was very tensed with kids missing so she postponed the parents meeting and said sorry to the parents personally on the phone..


" Thank you bhayyaaa.love you a lotttt..heyyyyy....all kids screams with happiness making raman smile..


he was about to go when mihika comes running to him..


" bhai rukko"


raman - what?


mihika - what is this bhai.school time khatham ho geya aap ab aa rehe ho...aise kaise bina bathaye bachon ko le ja sakthe ho aap..uske parents ko kya kehathi mein..you know because of you i postponed their exams and parents meeting..


raman - ohh thats not a big matter..chill yar..bachoko padai ke alawa bhi kuch chahite hotha hai aur mere school main sirf padai nahi chalega..samjhi..


mihika - phir bhi bhai..it was wrongg..aage se aise nahi karonge aap.


raman - bilkul karunga main..take it as a fun yaar..han ok let me go now i have attent a meeting..


mihika - bhai ek minute..


raman - now what..he made an irritating face..


mihika - yeh kuch saaman chahiye school keliye..she said farwarding a list to him..


raman - 20 bench, 20 desks, toys for small kids, chocks, duster... he reads the list.


" whats this benches and all yar..cancel tjis list and bring only toys...bacho ko khelne di na.." he said tearing the list.


" bhai, new classes keliye yeh sab zaroori hai.."


raman - no ways dear..bye..saying he get inti the car while mihuka looked at him unbelievingly then went from there..


raman was about to take the car forward suddenly a little boy jumped infront of his car making him scared to death..he quickly put sudden break and got down from the car..


" hey..are you ok" he asked to the boy cleaning his white shirt whichi is filled with dust..


" bhayyaa..i am ok.." he said smiling


raman - you scared me champ..where are you going in jiffy..


boy - there..he pointed towards the gate..


raman - why?


boy - papa ane wala hai..papa keliye wahan wait kartha hun main..


raman - awee aapke papa abhi thak nahi aye..


boy - nahi


raman - teek hai tho papa ke ane thak ice cream khane chale..


boy - aap ice cream khilaonge mujhe?


raman - han bilkul


boy - ok..


raman - ok lets go..saying he made him sat inside the car and drove for ice cream parlor..


Next day morning when raman came back from his jogging he find police on his corridor..they were questioning mihir about some kid..few ither people are also with them..


" hey whats happening here? " raman asked


mihir - bhai..i don't know what they are saying..


raman -"whats the matter inspector "


inspector - Mr Raman, see their child is missing from your school yesterday evening..and yesterday night some people saw the kid in your car..


raman - what? oh my god..saying he quickly runs to inside his house and starts to search for someone..after about five minute he found the little boy sleeping hugging a teddy bear..


" mera bacha.." seeing the sleeping boy his mother took him and showers kisses on his face..


" i am so sorry mr.kapoor actually yesterday i took him to an ice cream parlor after that he wants to see movie so i took him here..and we didn't realised when we drifted into sleep..i am really very sorry.." he apologized to boy's father..


mr.kapoor - see mr.bhalla you can say that easly, you cant imagine how we got scared..aap andazaa bhi nahi lega sakthe..


raman - i told you na..i am sorry..its just that i forgot every my pain and loneliness when i was with him, i felt very happy with him..if you don't mind kya aap kuch dino keliye usse yehan chod sakthe ho..i will take care of him like anything..


mr.kapoor - what nonsense are you talking mr.bhalla..agar bache ithne pasand hai tho shaadi kyun nahi karthe..


raman - its none of your business mr.waise bhi theen aur bacche hai na aapke phir isse yehan chodne mein harz kya hai..


" in that case bacho se maa baap ki rishthe samachne keliye acche baap ki hona zaroori hai" boys mother said getting angry on him.which made raman to feel a pain in his heart...


after they left with the boy raman was sitting inside his room silently thinking about that lady's harsh words..thats when mihir comes to him


" bhai dinner ready hai "


raman - mihir, uss aurat ne mujhse aisa kyun kahan..mere maa baap ne mujhe sadak pe chod diya tha tho mera kya kazoor..his eyes got teary


mihir - bhai no mother can leave their child alone..tho aapne tho uss aurat se uska baccha manga tha "


raman - phir meri maa ne mujhe kyun choda mihir..he looks at mihir


mihir - bhaiii...are you ok..he asked getting concerned


raman - its ok mihir, i am fine..i think its time to make my own family..


mihir - mathlab..bhaiii...oh my god..bhai aap shaadi keliye maan geye...mihir got very happy hearing him.


raman - no way mihir..i was just thinking about adopting a baby..jispe aur kisi ka adhikar na ho..jo sirf mera ho.


mihir - whatttttt? mihir was shocked..


raman - what mathlab..what?


mihir - bhai baccha adopt karoge aap?


raman - han kyun, nahi kar sakthe kya main.


mihir - its not like that bhai..i thought..


raman - ki main shaadi karunga..teri tharah pagal dhodi na hun main..


mihir - bhai dont underestimate..


raman - yah whatever..so its decided tomorrow we are going to father peter's orphanage..


Next day morning raman woke up early than usual and got ready to go to the orphanage..soon he left with mihir..reaching at the orphanage he saw a cute baby boy in his aya's arms..it was live ay first sight..the baby was just 1 year old..with the first sight he decided to adopt him..soon he met with father peter and told him about his wish..


father - mr.bhalla i appreciate you for your big heart but sorry we cand give you kid..hum yehan bachelor's ko babies adopt nahi karne detha because our policy is bacho ko maa baap dono ka pyar milna chahiye..aur yehan hum baccho ko orphans ki tharah nahi khudke baccho ke tharah treat karthe hai..


raman - father but..i can take care of him alone..


" kyun? alone kyun bhai..jab aapki wife hai..actually father peter bhai ka shaadi ho chukka hai aur in logo ka baccha ho nahi saktha..he wants to give a surprise to bhabhi..aur bhabhi mein hi kami hai tho yeh usse yehan lakke uss kami ka ehasas nahi karana chahtha" raman was surprised yet shocked hearing mihirs fake story..but father was looking at raman like he got convinced with mihirs story..


Father - I thought he is unmarried..mujhe patha nahi tha..i am sorry


Mihir - its not your fault father zyada logo ko patha nahi hai na isliye..


father - mr.bhalla agar yehi baath hai tho.aap apni wife ko yeha le ayiye main bath karunga usse.uske baath aap dono milkar bache ko adopt kar sakthe ho..but we have to see your marriage cerificate and about yout wealth and all background.


hearing fathers demand raman agreed to him and left the place..he waa actually very annoyed with mihirs lie..he scolds him for that too..


raman - duffer abhi biwi kaha se launga main..


mihir- bhai dont worry hum kuch paise de kar kisise drama karvayenge aur kaam hothe hi woh hissa khatham..


raman - aur marriage certificate.. tera baap layega kya.


mihir - kya bhai..we will make a fake one..


hearing mihir raman thought for sometime and spoke


raman - ok fine..


mihir - yeh hui na baath, bas aap mihika ko math bathana mere idea ke bare mein..khoon kardegi meri..


raman - chal duffer..saying both left to their home..


it was late at night raman was sleeping suddenly he heard his dogs barking sound..he got up and came out to look..he saw a shadow inside his car.. he slowly went near the car after taking his gun..when he opened his car door he got horrified seeing a girl inside sleeping..


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Edited by Muskan193 - 5 years ago
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Awesome update

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Gosh!!!! Too much interesting🥰🥰🥰 just can’t wait to read the next one!!!! Plz try to update soonishhhhh😘😘😘

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