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Dhristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#211

Very emotional update but feeling bad for ishra dono ko ek kar do so that they can confess soon

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kathyinae

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Posted: 8 years ago

#212

Amazing update
update soon
feeling very sad

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Jinan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#213

Awesome update!

He loved her, but didn't confess.

He decided to divorce her to rectify his mistakes.

Thanx for the pm

Continue soon

Edited by Jinan. - 8 years ago

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ishra_JD_club

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Posted: 8 years ago

#214

awesom updt rida ..

i loved tyhe cnocept ..

beutifully written rida...

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Akriti154

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Posted: 8 years ago

#215

Emo update di
raman missing ishita
he's guilty
ishita misses her kids n him n denies to marry abhi
raman files fr divorce n permanent custody of kids to ishita
continue soon
thnxxx 4 pm

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divz9769

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Posted: 8 years ago

#216

awesome update

help called raman he heard adi ru cries and got worried help told him to come home he came and saw adi ruhi crying and ishita was nowhere he asked help about ishita he told himishita is gone smoewhare and gave the letter raman reads the letter and got shocked he was shattered he loves ishita he was planning to confess her her in evening loved romi scolded raman and said be happy with his kids ishita deserve batter because raman forced her to marry and make physical relationship with him raman is guilty

ishita got angry on her family members and said she will not marry abhi she is missing adi ruhi and raman

raman hugged ishita's gift which she had given him on his birthday

raman called his lawyer and asked him to prepare divorce paper and custody papers he is giving kids permanent custody to ishita and hoping she will forgive him

his flashback was nice

pls continue soon and PM me also

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Ishrasoul

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Posted: 8 years ago

#217

hi friends
I m very happy with your all love you keep showering on this new concept.. thanks for your lovely response...Here is the end of this story hopefully you all will like it...
Enjoy reading it
ISHRA THREE SHOTS: YOU KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN TO ME

SHOT THREE: BOL DO NA ZARA
Iyer house
Bell rings... Mihika opens the door and see Raman standing there with his head down... She tries to close the door on Raman face Raman holds the door and says: I want to talk to Ishita...
Mihika glares at him and shouts: why... Now what left... Listen Mr bhalla contract is ended... Stop interfering in akkas life...
Raman: just one...
Mihika: no.. just get lost...
As mihika voice raised.. Ishita comes out of the room and gets shocked Raman standing there.. lots of emotion were in her eyes... Love pain anger ... Raman sees Ishita standing there... He tries to walk towards her but mihika comes in between and says: don't dare Mr bhalla...
Raman: Ishita...
Mihika: why you are not getting that now you have no right... Give her divorce asap so that Akka can marry Abhi... Got it...
Raman: Ishita... Just listen to me... Adi ruhi...
Ishita has masked her face with void of any emotions but as she listened about her babies she runs to Raman and holds Raman collar and says: kiya hua... They are fine na... Bolain.. mere bachy theek hain na...
Raman was just looking at her while ishita shook him and shouts: why are you not answering Raman.. tell me adi ruhi are fine...
<>Raman nods while ishita sigh in relief and closes her eyes as tear fall from her eyes.. Raman wipes her tears... Ishita opens her eyes and stares at him...
Raman: just five minutes of your life ishu...
Ishita sees him thinks : five minutes??? Lekin mein to AP Kay Saath poori zindagi chahti Hoon Raman... Ishita turns her face and moves towards her room and says: only five minutes...
Mihika tries to say but Mrs Iyer holds her hand and shook her head in negative...
Raman enters the room and sees Ishita standing in front of window and looking outside...
Ishita: bolain...
Raman: wo ... Actually...
Ishita: come to the point...
Raman sees her with teary eyes while ishita turns and looks at Raman her heart bleed seeing him teary.. both were lost looking at each other... Trying to behold their face thinking that it will be last time they are seeing each other
Itni Mohabbat karo naMain doob na jaaun kahin
Seeing herself loosing to him, she quickly looks away and breaks their eye lock.. Raman moves closer to her while her heart was pounding fastly...
Wapas kinaare pe aanaMain bhool na jaaun kahin
A lone tear escape from her eyes as Raman stands close to her.. Raman gently wipes her tears and both looks at each other...
Dekha Jabse Chehra tereMain toh hafton se soya nahin
Ishita: adi ruhi kaise hain...
Raman: kaise hoongay APNI mumma Kay bina...
Both were trying to hide their feeling to confess how much they love each other...
Bol do na zaraDil mein Jo hain Chhipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahiMain ksi se kahunga nahi
Raman takes a paper from.his pocket and forward it to Ishita... Ishita sees the paper and took it.. as she opens the paper her last hope gets murdered mercilessly as the paper state divorce...
Ishita get angry and looks at Raman who was looking down unable to meet her eyes.. her eyes were filled with anger...
Ishita: what is this...
Raman: divorce papers...
Ishita clenched her fist in anger and was about to says but stops as Raman words ring in her ear...
Raman: divorce paper along with adi ruhi custody to you permanently...Ishita: custody... Muje per.. contract..
Raman folds his hands in front of her and says: I am sorry.. I am sorry ishita... I ruined your life... I forced you in marriage...
Tears were flowing from their eyes... Raman continues to say: I shattered your dreams... I was cruel and heartless to you... I used you to take revenge...
Ishita looks at him and was about to says but Raman stops her and says: you don't deserve me Ishita... Tum bohat achi ho aur mein Bohat bura... I am ashamed of myself Ishita...
Raman turns his face away while ishita was just looking at him... Raman wipes his tear and says: adi ruhi tumahre hain... Sirf tumhare... I couldn't give you any happiness.. except hurt... But now.. I will give your children back to you... I know you can't live without them...
Ishita closes her mouth with her palm to stop herself from break down... While Raman was having great difficulty in saying: hosakty to MAAF kardaina Ishita ... shayad dil say ye bojh Kuch Kam ho.. lekin mein khud kokkabhi MAAF nahe KAR Sakoonga
Saying this he start walking towards door... he badly wanted to turn but he knows that if he see her again he will not able to hold himself.. while her feet gave up and she collapses...
Raman stops Ishita looks at him Raman says in his heart but it reaches Ishita ear: one more thing Ishita... I love you... I really love you...
He leaves...
While ishita was just looking at his retreating figure and as if she has listened his heart talk she smiles widely and cries loudly...
Mihika comes inside holding adi and ruhi... Both kids jumps on to their mother while ishita was just laughing madly and hug them tightly...She was feeling so happy as she got her life back she felt a heavy bruden has reduced from her chest...
While iyers were happy to see Ishita happiness... Mihika holds her hand and says: Akka...
Ishita smiles and says: I am so happy mihika.. you don't know... Today I got everything... I am so happy...
Mrs Iyer caresses her daughter hairs and says: Kanna we are with you... Jo bhi decision lo... Hum tumhare Saath hain... Mihika and Mr Iyer nods...
Next day
Raman was a lost soul he didn't slept whole night was just crying holding Ishita picture... As the new dawn came, he was feeling suffocated he thought to go to park where he use to take Ishita and kid... he goes there and sits under the tree and was silently crying...He imagines Ishita sitting beside him smiling at him...
Mujhe neend aati nahi hai akelekhwabon mein aaya karo
Seeing her his lips curves in to smile and tries to touch her but his imagination break and he finds himself alone there making his heart wrench...
Nahi chal sakunga tumhare bina mainMera tum sahara bano
Raman hides his face in his palm and says: I love you... I love you Ishita...
A reply came to his talk: I love you too raman.. listening to the sweet voice Raman looks on and sees Ishita sitting beside her holding their daughter who was sleeping cuddling to her... He was just looking at her without blinking eye as he fears that she will disappear...
ik tumhe chahne ke alaawaAur kuch humse hoga nahe
Both were seeing each other when Raman tries to touch her. She closes her eyes.. as he touches her cheeks he realizes that she is indeed here. he cries and says: why you are here Ishita...
Ishita glares at him and says: you can't rule my life Raman.. you can't take decision of our life on your own... I didn't this right to you that you leave me...
Raman looks at her and shook his head and says: your happiness doesn't lie with me Ishita... I am sorry for all my deeds...
Saying this Raman tries to gets up but stops as he felt a smack on his cheek he hold and sees Ishita glaring at him and then she holds his collar and says: listen Mr bhalla AP Meri zindagi mein khud aye per mein apko Meri zindagi say nahe Jane doongi... Never... Got it...
Raman sees her and tries to comprehend her words.. Ishita continue to says: bohat hurt karty hain AP... When I don't wanted to live with you you forced me.. and now when I can't live without you you are leaving me...
Raman: dekha I always give you pain...
Ishita: okay then I will give you punishment... Ready...
Raman nods...
Ishita: punishment apki ye hai Kay Ap muje pyaar Do... Wo pyaar Jo Sirf mein ne Mehsoos kiya kabhi izhaar nahe Suna...
Raman: how can you forgave me so easily... Ishita says: meine apko MAAF kiya pata hai kiyon... Because you gave me everything... Our babies and you...
Raman smiles weakly...ishitacame closer to him and says: Raman don't leave me... mein nahe Jee sakti... AUR mein sab janti Hoon Jaia mein apky lie Mehsoos karti Hoon AP bhi wohi karty... when you were leave my room I listened your heart raman.. bolain khud say alag nahe karain gay na...
she forward her hand and looks at him.. Raman holds his hand and nods .. both smiles...And took ruhi from her and kisses her and says: adi... Ishita points at the direction where adi was playing with mihika...
Ishita: I want to listen something from you.. Jo AP khud say bolte rehhty hain...
Raman sees her..
Ishita: say it Raman...
Raman: kiya???
Ishita: mein ne itna sab bola per AP so bol hi nahe rahy...
Bol do na zaraDil mein Jo hain Chhipa
Raman smiles and comes close to her and whispers in her ears: I love you jaan... Making her shiver as his thick husky voice reaches her ear...
Unable to hold herself she hugs him tightly and cries and says: I love you too...
Main kisi se kahunga nahiMain ksi se kahunga nahi
Both were hugging each other tightly making little ruhi sandwich... She cries.. both tries to cheer up their Princess.. both looks at each other.. Raman wipes her tears and says: these doesn't have any space in your life because your eye should be shining with spark of happiness... Promise jaan I will fill your life with happiness...
Ishita smiles and put her head on his chest while he smiles and feels contended to have her both girls close to him.. he feels a gentle tug at his leg and sees adi standing... Ishita took him in her arms and Raman pulls his family in hug .. while all bhallas and iyers were happy seeing the reunion of the couple who travel a long distance from revenge to love ...
That's it... My dear friends I hope you all will like it waiting for your lovely comments and response don't forget to hit like also... Please a long comment.. hoping that I justified writing this...
Love you
Rida

Edited by ishrasoul - 8 years ago

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