ISHRA SS. Rab ne bana di jodi updates part 16 on page 58 on 21/7/17 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Lovely update!!!
What is the connection between Sarika & Ishita?
Now Raman is more intrigued to know about Ishita??
Hope he comes to know about Shagun's kaand.
Keep writing and try to send PM's you will get more response.
Update soon and try to give long updates plzz.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Suma1012

Nice concept

interesting too
update soon
and do pm me

thank you for ur lovely comments

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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Nits83

Lovely update!!!
What is the connection between Sarika & Ishita?
Now Raman is more intrigued to know about Ishita??
Hope he comes to know about Shagun's kaand.
Keep writing and try to send PM's you will get more response.
Update soon and try to give long updates plzz.

thank you taking ur valuable time in reading my story
I have made it long update
Nd i can't send pm as i don't know how to send pm
Do update ur atories fast
I m waiting eagerly for ur update

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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: divz9769

nice update

sarika is elder than ishita she calls sarika di
sarika asked what happen with her why she looking pales ishita pleaded her she will say her everything but not tell about anything to anyone sarika said ok but on condition sarika asked ishita not to call her di she said ok sarika looked ishita from head to toe and was shocked she asked ishita what happen to her when she became this sanskari ishita was making puppy face and asking sarika not reveal about her anything raman saw that and got determined to know about her sarika asked mihir he was saying something about a girl that was not ishita right he said it was ishita only ishita left from there avoiding sarika sarika got angry on mihir when he said anath to ishita she was thinking about ishita's change behavior she also left from there raman was thinking about ishita and about her paled face he thought to know about it next day
pls continue soon
pls don't stop writing slowly u will get more response

this is the longest comments i have wver got
Thank you for reading my story and commenting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Hello friends
I m back with my update

Part 5

Next day
Raman phone rings , he lifts the call

Param: hello raman

Raman: hello bhai

Param : Aaj hamari tondons ke sath important meeting hai 5 baje..

Raman : ok bhai lekin presentation kon bana raha hai...

Param : presentation ke chinta tu mat kar wo presentation ban jayega. ..important meeting hai bhul mat jana..

Raman: ok bhai..i will be there on time

He goes college and waits for his friends
His mind is still occupied with business as it is inportant contract for success of his business..

Ramans gang comea and greets him
All settles and chat freely ..
Raman mind gets diverted from buainess to friends
They all are happily chatting
Mihir and sarika also joins them
Sarika was silent

Raman: sarika kya hua ?? Tun chup kyu ho?? Kahin firse iss bhudu ne tumse jhagda tho nhi kiya na??
( Raman is like a love guru of college as he helps with everyones love)

Before sarika can say anything mihir said

Mihir( sadly) : agar madam ne mujhse baat hi nhi kiya tho jhagada hona tho dur ki baat hai..

Sarika: nhi bhai aise koi baat nhi hai bas ishu ke bare main soch rhi thi tho...

Mihir: lo sun liya mere se jyada isko uss ishita ki padi hai( male ego)

Sarika : ishu ke bare main kuch mat bolna ..

Mihir;: dekha raman isse abhi bhi ishita ki padi hai meri koi fikar nhi hai..

Before they can argue more Raman stopped them

Raman: bas karo tum dono ..kya bacho ki tarah lad rahe ho ?
Aur sarika kya ishu ishu laga rakha hai , mana ki wo tumari friend hai but iska matlab yeh nhi ki tum mihir ko ignore karo.

Before anyone can speak anything sarika saw ishita going towards college and sarika called her.

Mihir ( dramatically): lo aa gayi tumari ishu..

Sarika : don't dare you call her ishu...wo ishu sirf uske best friends hi bula sakte hai..

Ishita( in mind) di ko bhi inn logo se hi friendship karni thi ..
Kya karu di ko tho mana bhi nhi kar sakti??

Thinking so she goes towards ramans gang

Rohits gang is sitting behind ramans group only
Rohit gave a smile with to ishita ..

Whereas sohail ia waiting for ishita with a big smile..

But ishita ignores it and goes towards sarika..

Ishita feels that they had a heated arguments by their serious faces..
Sarika: hello ishu

Ishita : hello sarika..kuch kaam tha ki aapne mujhe yahan bhulaya??

Sarika:kyu bina kaam ke tujhe bula nhi sakti kya??

Ishita : nhi aise baat nhi hai..

Sarika: haan maine tujhe yahan hamare group se introduce karvane ke liye bulaya hai..mujhe pata hai ki aap logo ka relation acha nhi hai par main chahati hu ki tu bhi mera group join kare...( sarika know ishita quite well that she is secretive person and she is expert in lying ,and if she forces ishu to say something she will either lie to her or will ignore her so she thought to keep ishita in her group to know about her)
and she vows herself that she will bring her ishu back

Sohail( smiling widely) : haan haan kyu nhi ishita aap bhi hamare group ko join karo na ..beeti baat ko bhul jao..

Mihir doesn't like all this as he thinks that after ishitas coming in college their( mihir sarika) relationship is getting trobles( as it is the first time that sarika is ignoring him)

Ishita has noticed sohails wide smile and felt awkward and mihir sad thoughtfull face and get to know that he is not liking it..( here ishita knows about sarika and mihirs relationship but she had not recognized mihir but now she knows that they are in love) and moreover she can't tolerate shagun...and the important reason she doesn't want to be near raman in anyways
( ishu doesn't like anyone fighting due to her )

Ishita kept mum.

Sarika: kya hua ishu chup kyu hai ?? Main tujhse kuch puch rhi hu ..jaldi bolna

Ishita : sarika if you don't mind main mihir se baat kar sakti hu ..
Sarika is not liking this reserved ishu a bit bcoz the ishu she knows is very bubly and full of livelyness and with smile but here the person is contrary to it

Sarika: aisa kyu puch rahi hai ishu?? Maine tuhse puch kar hi toh mihir ko hamare relationship ke liye haan bola tha ..tu bhul gayi kya??

This came a shock for ramans gang especially mihir

Ishu slapped her forehead thinking what a blunder sarika has created in mihir_ sarika relation

Ishita gets angry on sarikas foolishness ..age forget her surrounding and especially raman

Ishita ( bit loudly) you shut up di ..why are trying to hurt mihir jiju ..enough of your ranting ..now keep your mouth shut...

Ishita realised what she has said had her vow to control her anger went down thw drain...

Sarika has done this bcoz to bring out original ishu out and she knows ishita will not let any trouble to touch their relationship as ishu is there and she is happy dance seeing ishitas anger

Ishita : mihir can i talk to you in person ..

Mihir nods and follows ishu

Ishita: see mihir I m very sorry for creating problem in your relation and i know how it feels to feel ignored ( she remembers ishra firat night and the hatred in ramans eyea)and left out which is she doing from yesterday from when she saw me and don't worry i am not joining your group as i am not clearly intrested in anything with your group and if you not like me talking to sarika i will stop that to but plz i don't want you 2 to fight bcoz of me as i hate it as we are meeting after long so she is so concern about me...

Mihir anger melts seeing truth and hurt in her eyes..

Mihir : It's ok ishita you can join our group and talk to your friend warna wo mera katal ( murder) kar degi..( he said to lighten the atmosphere)

Ishita: no I m good plz aap sarika ko samja do and do not fight with her and she will not kill you as you are her life ..

Mihir: yaar tum toh serious ho gayi..chalo kya tum mujhse friendship karogi ...

Ishita: haan kyu nhi ..she forwards hands to shake him

Mihir : hath hila ke nhi gale lag ke ..
They had a friendly hug

Ramans gang was wondering what is taking them forever and and saw them hugging which " many with jealously
Especially raman and sohail

Raman: ( in mind) abe biwi hoke abhi tak maine iska hath tak nhi pakda hai aur yeh toh gale lag gaya ..isse toh main chodunga nhi
Raman then notices sohail who was also burning with jealously

Sohail( in mind) besharam admi ek toh ishita se gussa tha aur fir ab uske gale lag gaya ..isse toh main chodunga nahi . mujhe jald se jald ishita ko propose kaena hoga isse pahele ki koi aur bazi maar jaye..

Bells rings
Raman: abhi toh yeh bach gaya lekin isse chodunga nhi..

Romi: bhai tune kuch kaha kya??

Raman :nhi toh tune kuch suna kya..

Mihir comes and hugs sarika stating sorry for staying angry with her without any reason ..ishita goes to classroom seeing them happy

Mihir: yaar ishita bahut hi achi hai hume usse group main le lena chaiye

Shagun who has come now wearing ultra short listens it

Shagun:( bit loudly) mihir tum uss beheji ko group main lene ki baat kar rahe ho ..uss middle class ladki aur hamare bich tumhe koi difference nahi hai kya..agar usse hamare group main liya toh hamare status ka kya ..

Raman: haan we don't want her in our group that's final ..

Shagun was happy seeing raman supporting her little did she know that he is doing that possessesively to keep his ishita away from mihir and sohail...

I feel pathetic to write 5th chapter on 7th page...
I think i have spent hours in writing this soo
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
It's a beautiful story I like it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Yaar ur story is vry interesting...
M really waiting 2 now dat bubbly ishita which sarika is talking abt...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Very interesting story!!!
Sarika accepted her love for MiIhir after Ishita's acceptance.
Finally Ishita showed her glimpse of bubbly nature.
Raman is getting jealous
Glad to see how their relationship unfolds.
Update soon

P.S: please update the front page with the update page no and updated date
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Lovely update
Ishita don't want any MU btwn Mihir and Sarika
Jallu Kumar jealous Of Mihir and Sohail want to propose her agar Raman ko pata Chala to maar dalega
Shagun don't want ishita in thier group
Interesting story..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
I read all the parts. All are awesome. Ishra marriage. He hates hr. Ishita bcomes silents. Reveal mystery bhnd hr behaviour.
Update nxt part soon

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