ISHRA SS. Rab ne bana di jodi updates part 16 on page 58 on 21/7/17 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Nice update
Shagun is too much she started troubling ishita
Raman feeling restless
Ishita and Sarika are friends
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
awesome update
ishita was smiling talking with abhi sohail was staring at ishita raman got irked ishita is ignoring him
ishita reached her hostel and decided not to mess with raman and his gang next day raman and his gang were chatting sarika came there and hugged mihir she is his girlfriend ishita came to the college and was going to her class shagun called her she goes there shagun was mocking her she didn't said anything class got over ishita received note stating to meet in basement she recognized shagun writing she goes their basement was dark shagun locked her inside ishita started feeling suffocated she was knocking at the door peon opened the door she came out and was breathing heavily raman was waiting for ishita in canteen he saw shgun smiling and thought something is wrong ishita came there everyone was shocked to see her paled sarika and ishita are friends i think
pls continue soon
Edited by divz9769 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Nits83

Nice update dear!!
Shagun is too much...
Finally started to feel bit jealous... make him burn in jealousy
Sarika & Ishu know each other.
Update soon

Thank u dear for reading my story
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sheejarjn

Absolutely awesome story. A very good combo of so much excitement in one. Update soon dear. Very much excited for the next.

Thank u for reading my story
I will update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: divz9769

awesome update

ishita was smiling talking with abhi sohail was staring at ishita raman got irked ishita is ignoring him
ishita reached her hostel and decided not to mess with raman and his gang next day raman and his gang were chatting sarika came there and hugged mihir she is his girlfriend ishita came to the college and was going to her class shagun called her she goes there shagun was mocking her she didn't said anything class got over ishita received note stating to meet in basement she recognized shagun writing she goes their basement was dark shagun locked her inside ishita started feeling suffocated she was knocking at the door peon opened the door she came out and was breathing heavily raman was waiting for ishita in canteen he saw shgun smiling and thought something is wrong ishita came there everyone was shocked to see her paled sarika and ishita are friends i think
pls continue soon

Thank u dear for such a long update
I will update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Hey friends
I am getting pathetic response for my updates
Still i am writing story because of your comments
So plz those are commenting keep it up otherwise i don't think i will write something
If there is any mistake in my story or if u think so plz feel free to correct me as i am new to these stuff..


Part: 4


Sarika comes to ishus table and stare at her shockingly..

Sarika: (with tears) : Ishu!!!!!!!

Ishita: di u??
( Ishita and sarika are not sisters but ishita call her as di out of respect as sarika is elder)

Ishita stands up and hugs her happily with a big smile...
Sarika also hugs her back..

Mihir comes
Mihir: Sarika do u know her???

Ignoring mihir and she parts from ishita
Sarika : ishu Why are you looking so pale ?? Are you ok?? Kya hua hai ishu?? ishu tum yahan ?? Tum kab aayi yahan??

Raman and his gang had gathered around sarika and ishita..

Ishita saw all of them and hugs sarika again..
Ishita ( in. sarikas ears) : Di i will answer all your questions but afterwards ..plz i dont want you to tell anything about me to anybody here.plzz

Sarika: Ok but u have to answer my all questions ..and one more condition..

Ishita: ok di and what condition??

Sarika: You will not call me di??

Ishita: ok di

Sarika coming out of hug glares her
Ishita holds her ears and makes a puppy face showing she is very sorry for calling her di..

Mihir again intrudes them
Mihir : Sarika do u know ishita??

Ishu makes puppy face and makes a sign not to tell him..
Sarika: We are friends

Raman who have heard last bit of conversation that "not to tell anyone about her" is revolving in his mind..he ia in deep thought
He comes out of thought hearing mihirs interogation

Ishita smiles and Sarika blinks her eyes to ishita saying she will not say anything..

Sarika: What are you doing here??

Ishita: I am new admission in 2nd year mba

Sarika: looks ishita from head to toe and widens her eyes seeing her dressing..sarika checks ishitas forehead whether she has fever or not..

Sarika: shockingly : What the hell happened to you ?? Tu kabse sanskari hogai??

Ishita shrugs sarikas hand and glares her to not to say anything...

Raman: sarika aisa kyu puch rhi ho?? What is wrong ??

Ishita pleads through eyes not to say anything and raman also sees her..
Ishita straightens her face looking to raman.

Sarika: bus aise hi bhai ..wo main ishu ko bohut dino baad mil rahi hu na isliye puch rhi thi..

Raman finds her answer suspicious and keeps silent

Sarika thinking something
Sarika: Mihir tum thode der pahele jis ladki ke bare main bata rahe the qo ishu nhi thi na...

Mihir :Wo ishita hi thi..

Sarika: ek minute tum kahe rahe ho ki usne shagun ka bola hua sab kuch chup chap sun liya..

Mihir : haan aur bhai ne bhi tho warn kiya tha usse..

Sarika:ishu what's weong with you?? Tu meri ishu hi hai na.??

Ishita thought of eacaping from further interogation of ishita

Ishita: hum kal baat karte hai abhi mujhe late ho raha hai bus ke liye..

Sarika: Seriously ishu !! Bus!!!

Ishita does not meet her eyes with sarika and bid bye and went from there stating she is getting late for bus..

Raman : kya hua sarika tum aisa kyu puch rahi ho ishita se?? Bus main har koi jata hai ..

Sarika: bhai aap usse warn kyu kia?? Kya kia ishu ne ki aapko usse warn karna pada??

Raman: usne shagun ko insult kiya ..
Mihir : sarika tum uss anath ke liye bhai se sawal puch rhi ho??

Sarika geta angry listening the word " anath"
Sarika holds mihirs color

Sarika:( yells) ishu anath nhi hai?? Kisne kaha ki wo anath hai..??

Raman helps mihir freeing mihir from sarikas clutches..now raman is curious to know about ishita

Raman: tum uss ladki ke liye mihir ka color pakad rhi ho.. Sarika tum jo ishu ishu kar rhi ho usne hi kaha tha ki vo anath hai humne nhi..

Sarika is again shocked to know a new fact of ishita..
Sarika does not say anything and sits quietly..now she is tensed to know about new thing about ishita and her behavior her dressing ..

Sarika ( in mind) this is not my ishu..wo bohut hi friendly insan hai wo kisi se bhi ladthi tak nhi hai insult karna tho dur ki baat hai..ishu modern thi ab achanak kya hogaya hai usse aur usne kisiko kuch batane se bhi mana kiya hai..ishu bohut hi open minded insan hai tho ab aisa kyu behave kar rhi hai..mujhe usse baat karni padegi ..

Mihir is tensed looking at her sitting quietly
Mihir calls her

Sarika: haan mihir
Mihir: are u ok??
Raman became more suspicious seeing sarikas behavior knowing about ishita..
Now he is more curious to know about ishita..

Sarika: ya I m fine..chalo mihir it's getting late .i should be get going
She bid bye to everyone and mihir goes to drop her..

Unknown to them rohits gang is listening to all this commotion silently..
Now everyone leaves with lot of confusion about ishu especially raman..
Raman goes to his apartment and thinks of the happenings of that day
Her pale face
Her relationship with sarika
Her cute pout
Her puppy face
Her pleading eyes
He finds all that adorable..
He closes his eyes to catch some sleep but again her pale face comes in front of his eyes and he mentally determines to find out what had happened with har that day and suddenly he remembers shaguns evil smile

Raman( in mind)kahi shagun ne tho kuch kia nhi na?? Wo pahele bahut kush lag rhi thi fir ishita ke aane ke baad uska mu uthar gaya tha..
Nhi raman shagun aisa nhi karegi tujhe hi misunderstanding ho gayi hai..kal jake college main pata karna padega ki ishita ke sath kya hua tha..
Eventually he sleepa thinking about her

Ishita also thinks of happenings of the day and thinks ab main di i mean sarika ka kya answer dungi..mujhe abhi shadi ke bare main tho kisi ko bhi nhi batana hai kyuki jis shadi ko wo(raman) accept nhi kar rahe hai uske bare main mujhe kisiko nhi batana chaiye aur mujhe nhi lagta ki ye shadi ek saal bhi chalegi aur ab tho di i mean sarika se bhi dur rehna padega..
She thens thinks of shagun and her deeds and thinks isse tho main dekh lungi..lekin main kuch kar bhi tho nhi sakti na wo jo unki friend hai ...let it be ishu calm down ..tujhe gussa nhi karna hai..control kar..
And eventually she also sleeps thinking of a bright morning





Edited by Ishra2015 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Nice concept
interesting too
update soon
and do pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Nice update ... want to know Ishitas background continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Lovely update
Nicely written
What ishita is hiding from raman?
Edited by Jyoti8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
nice update
sarika is elder than ishita she calls sarika di
sarika asked what happen with her why she looking pales ishita pleaded her she will say her everything but not tell about anything to anyone sarika said ok but on condition sarika asked ishita not to call her di she said ok sarika looked ishita from head to toe and was shocked she asked ishita what happen to her when she became this sanskari ishita was making puppy face and asking sarika not reveal about her anything raman saw that and got determined to know about her sarika asked mihir he was saying something about a girl that was not ishita right he said it was ishita only ishita left from there avoiding sarika sarika got angry on mihir when he said anath to ishita she was thinking about ishita's change behavior she also left from there raman was thinking about ishita and about her paled face he thought to know about it next day
pls continue soon
pls don't stop writing slowly u will get more response

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