ISHRA SS. Rab ne bana di jodi updates part 16 on page 58 on 21/7/17

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey frnds
I m a reader
But few hours ago i got a idea about writing a story here
I have read many but want to write one
Lovely ishra has encouraged me when i came up with a idea of writing something.
I m a lazy lad
If u didn't like it u can tell ma directly.
The readers have to suggest ma a suitable title.
I will update prolong soon



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Posted: 8 years ago
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INDEX
Prolong pg1
Character sketch: pg 2
Part 1 : pg 2
Part2: pg 3
Part 3 pg 5
Part 4 pg 6
Part 5. Pg 7
Part 6. Pg 15
Part 7. Pg 20
Part 9
Part 10 Part 12
Part 13
Part 15
Part 16



Prolong:
A girl is sitting in veil in a decorated room nd is having mixed emotions who is none other than ishita..A boy enters the room with a fake smile to his cousins who were outside room teasing him nd he closes door ontheir face nd ture towards ishita with anger, who ia none other than our raman..
He comes to bed near ishita ..nd says
Raman:R u happy now ..yehi chahati thi na ...ab chup kyu ho
[ ishita sits silently keeping her head low in veil only]
ab tum meri biwi ban gayi ho MRS RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA..
aur kya chaiye tumhe,isiliye tumne maa ko mujhe tum se shadi karne ke liye force karwaya tha na..U r a bloody gold digger...
Wo haar wakt ishita ishita karti thi...pata nhi tumne kya kalajadu(blackmagic)
She made me promise on her life to marry u...
But remember one thing tum sirf ek unwanted peraon ho meri life ki..aur ye bhul jana ki tum meri biwi ho ...
Main tumhe kabhi meri biwi hone ka haq nhi dene wala hu
So stay away from me,my things nd my bed...
Maa ke aur relatives ke samne tum aur main couple hai bas ...
Don't act as oversmart by telling her all this stuff...
I will not leave u..
Now get off my bed ..tum sofa per so sakti ho...
But mera things se dur rehna warna mujhse bura koi nhi hoga..
(All this while ishita was not even reacting to any of his words)
Ishita stands up from bed after he completes all his angered words but she is least bothered about all this
She goes towards sofa and lies down without anewering anything but it angered him more...
But he chose to silent
Ishita: (in mind) Omg!!!I m saved from this forced realationship...(she is happy that she doesn't have to fulfill her responsibility of a wife)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting dear...
both are in unwanted relationship...
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue
Both don't want this relation, but why Raman blames her ??
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue
update soon
and do pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations on your first story dear 👏
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Very interesting prologue dear
Both Raman and Ishita don't want to be husband and wife
Waiting for how they fell for each other
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Cool 😎
Ishu ain't the bechari bahu
Raman got married just cos his mom wanted so

I'm eager to read ahead 😃

Cont asap dude 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Character sketch:
Raman:
very friendly nd open minded but hates ishu as he was forced to marry her against his will..
Doing mba..
He is one of the business partner of Bhalla group of industry which is leading company of the country...


Param: ramans elder brother,knows ishu from childhood...ishu adresses him as bhaiyu..

Simmi:params wife

Ananya: params daughter

Vandita:Ramans elder sister married to Bala.(ishitas brother)

Ishita : Very lovely, friendly,
notorious, lively, open minded nd has bunch of friends ,but turned into a silent nd matured girl due to the pravachan she got from her brother vinod before marriage..she obeys him blindly...she considers ramans mother as her mother..so she agreed to marry against her will for his mothers wish ..

Bala: ramans jiju, ishus brother, who loves ishu so much nd has married vandita(ishitas choice)..ishita adresses him as bhai..


vandita:ramans sister ,ishus bhabhi ,ishu respect her as her mother nd shares everything like her friend ...

Shravu: Balas son..very notorious just like ishu..

Kshitija:Balas daughter...notorious like ishu...

Ishu loves both nd they r her partner in crime...

Rocky: ishus love...guess who
Ishus pet dog(german shepherd)..

Ishra has just met once during bala vandita marriage but doesn't know each other..

Pammi:Ramans aunt who doesn't like ishu has said him that she is a gold digger nd had made his mother to force him to marry ..

Bala ,param nd raman r business partners...which is looked after bala nd param but raman remains present in every important meeting..


I hope i have made myself clear wjth character sketch..if u have any confusion then ask me ..sorry frnds I can't do pm as i don't know how to do that so accept my apology





Edited by Ishra2015 - 8 years ago
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Frnds i don't know if anyone of u like this stroy or not ..as i got pathetic response still if u want me to stop this story pm me i will do it for sure...
Here is my 1st part
Morning rays peep from the window
Ishitas phone rings with alarm which wakes her up..
She wakes up and findea her surrounding unfamiliar but soon she recognizes it as her sasural, her so called husbands room..
She goes to freshen up nd takes bath nd wears saree
She looks herself in mirror nd stares like she is looking at any alien nd consoles herself saying it is her present...
She goes downstairs nd instantly a bright smile adorea her face..
Ishita:(with happiness) Good morning maa nd touches her feet...
Toshi:(with bright smile) good morning ishita...Tu itni jaldi uth gayi abhi toh time hai puttar..
Ishita : bas maa neend khul gayi ..
simmi also join them nd trio goes to do puja after finishing puja ..Neelu makes chai
Meanwhile param too came nd greet everyone too
He is staring ishu as she is an alien...
But keeps silence
Toshi nd simmi: what's wrong ?? Y r u staring at her??
Ishu makes puppy face
Param: (with a smile ) : nothing..Anyway where is raman??
Toshi : He is still sleeping...
They had their morning chai
nd toshi ask her to wake up raman nd give him chai
Ishita s face becomes dul..
But nobody notices it...
Ishita goes to ramans room to wake him up but does not dare to wake him
She thinks how to wake up..
Ishita:(thinks)kaise uthau inhe..
Bhai ko tho main balti bharke thanda pani dalke uthathi thi but ye toh garam chai main unki ungli dubake uthathi thi ...nhi nhi agar maine aisa kuch kiya toh yeh insan toh pakka mera murdwr karke jail chale jaiyenge...nd she was making a cute
She was murmuring herself when he woke up nd asked yahen khade kahade kya kar rhi ho???
She was startled with his sound nd was almost going to drop the cup but balanced herself nd forwarded the cup to him..
He took it but was quite impressed with her pouting face nd her beauty which he had clearly noticed it now ...
But again his anger came up nd goes to freshen up giving her angry glare
Ishita goes downstairs nd makes her first dish gajaar ke halwa
Everybody arrives for breakfast
Ishita nd simmi serves everyone..Everybody eats bf nd praises for bf
Raman: maa kya baat hai gajjar ka halwa mast hai neelu na aajkal khana banan seekh gayi... Maa aap neelu ki salary bada dena...
Everyone stares at him nd param broke into fits of laughter saying neelu ne nhi par teri biwi ishita ne banaya hai...Everybody laughs at him he geta embarrased nd remains silent
After sometime everybody is seated in hall
Raman : Maa wo...Maa ...wo kya hai na ...wo
Toshi: Kya maa maa kar raha hai kuch bolna hai toh seedha bol de...
Raman:(holding breath) maa woh mujhe kal college jana hai toh mujhe aaj hi pune jana hai...
Toshi was staring him unbelievably
Toshi: puttar ye tu ki gal kar raha hai...kal hi toh teri shadi hui hai abhi toh tujhe pagphere ki rasam karne teri di yani tere sasural bhi toh jana hai aur ishita..
Raman:(cuts her in middle) (irritatively)kya ishita maine aap se thodi kaha tha ki meri shadi karvao but aapne jabarjasti karvai ab kya main apni padhai bhi chod du...
Param: (thinking something ) raman tu shanth ho jaa ...ja packing karle sham ko chale jana ..
Toshi was to say something but param blinks his eyes saying he will taje care...
Raman become happy thinking he is going away from his forced marriage thinking he will enjoy his bachelor life
little did he know what destiny has in store for him...



I think i have wrriten my update without any mistake but if there any I apologize...plz feel free to corect me ...i will be happy

PLZZZ SUGGEST ME A SUITABLE TITLE FOR THIS STORY...

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