FF | My Heart Beats In My Mind | Teaser on Page-39 | Oct|18 - Page 6

Originally posted by: akriti154

suoperbb update
at first i thought puttar is a good boy
taking care of ishu
bt den he's d culprit
n he framed ashok
having sinful thoughts about ishu
😉
n nw he tells iahita that she has to marry him
giving her tym to say yes in 4 hrs
hw great it is
she beat ashok n he tried to save him empathizing with himself
wht will b ishu's reaction on knowing d truth?
cont soon
thnxx 4 pm

Hi Akku...
I know Raman seemed good in the first half 😆
But you know you can't expect a good Raman in NY story, that too in the very first part itself 😎
Thank you so much for commenting... 😳

Originally posted by: Divanii

Superb update
You made Raman Hero & villian
Two in one
BTW my name is also megha
Update soon

Hi Megha...
RKB two in one 😎
Glad you enjoyed the update... 😳

Originally posted by: ishrasoul

Awesome update
A nice idea.
Update soon

Thank you Riduuu 😳

Originally posted by: foruml

Interesting story Gaya...at first i thought raman is soo nice n sweet person...he admitted ishita's parents in hospital and is taking care of her, even though she was insulting him...but later it is a shock that he is the main culprit not ashok...raman played a smart move, poor ashok got trapped...i liked raman and ashok's convo in jail...
I loved this raman, though he kept the blame on ashok, but he is at guilt and trying his level best to secure ishita's future... I liked his self talk about securing ishita's life... I liked his immediate reaction on his own thought of adopting her as his sister, that she is too attractive to be his sister...
Ashok came to ishita's house with his parents...she slapped him, raman imagined himself in ashok's place as he deserved all those slaps from her...and tried to save ashok from her, but she retorted that did he want to marry her? Which made raman to think in that way...he decided to marry her and given her 4 hours time to say yes, i was like :-O...such a ample time in raman's thought as he usually give one minute to others...
ishra got married...i'm curious to read further...plz update soon and thanx 4 pm...

Hi Laxmi...
Glad you liked the update babe...
Thank you so much for you lengthy comment.. . 😳
Happy that you liked this Raman...and yeah, it's ample time for Raman as he never gives more than a minute to anyone to say yes. Moreover, it's just a yes that needs just seconds you know 😎
I'll try to update asap huh... 😳

Originally posted by: Jinan_R

Thanx 4 the PM... 😊
It looks very interesting 😉
And even Raman did kill her parents, he is guilty n thats why he wants 2 marry her to fulfill her dad's last wish to take care of her. 😳
its 115 likes till now so be ready for the quick update. 😉

Thank you for commenting dear...
Yeah I'm prepared for next update 😉
Glad you enjoyed it...😊

Originally posted by: Roohachu

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nice update
Kinda reminds me of Raman in KKS
Well both are poles apart I know then also
Well Nishu ki concepttt????????????
She's crazy
So I'm up for the craziness
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N about Raman
I love him
I love these kind of Raman
Weird?????????
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Cunning business man he's
The way he ordered to Ashok was something ok
But the way he ordered to Ishita let me stay shocked
how could he just order her to tell the reply in four hours n that too indirectly ordering her to say yes
But it was cute
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Being the culprit he's guilty
Even though he's cunning he do has a kind heart
Update soon


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Hi Ash...
Thank you so much for commenting...
Glad you liked this story... 😳
Girl it's a different RKB and he'd order and make people do things in his favor in his own handsome way 😎
And btw, kks? I didn't get you
Anyways, I'll try to update ASAP... 😃

Originally posted by: lalibhaskar

Hi

This is lalitha

I have read almost all ur stories

But this is the first time I am commenting

The concept is too good

Aww raman did the accident and put the blame on ashok

Bechara ashok he can't even say the truth

Raman truly a business man

Ishita is also a strong character

She doesn't like raman at all

Curious to know how she married him

U always show a different raman in ur stories

Little evilish Atlast hero tho hero hai

And negative characters positively

Waiting for next part

Hi Lalitha...
Yeah this is the first time you're commenting and this means a lot 🤗
Glad you read my stories and liked the new concept... 😳
Yeah I like to portray Raman with little devilishness and negative characters with a tint of good qualities 😆
I'll try to update soonish and hope you'll find it interesting...

Originally posted by: angeliash

interesting story ... raman is a culprit omg shocking and he is acting like innocent person hope he will understand his mistake and rectify it...poor ishu Bcoz of Raman mistake her parents died... plz continue soon

Thank you...
Yeah Raman is a bit too much here and the story has just begun...so he won't rectify his mistakes soon... 😉
Glad you liked the concept...

Originally posted by: discipline

Nice start

Interesting Story dear

Plz continue soon

Thanks for the pm

Thank you Gayatri...

Originally posted by: MagicalHeart91

Interesting and intriguing. New concept though I like it. Raman is really huh I don't know how to judge him. He is bad and good as well. Ashok I like him here. The most I like in Raman is his ATTITUDE. It's good. Hope you will continue and thank you for PM.

Thank you dear...
Glad you liked it...
Yeah Raman has a strong attitude in this story and I'm happy you found it good 😎