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Interesting story...pls update soon.Thank u for pm

wow di v.intrstng different concept loved de 1st updt didn't accept dis shock ...but i love dis Raman ...thanks4pm

suoperbb update
at first i thought puttar is a good boy
taking care of ishu
bt den he's d culprit
n he framed ashok
having sinful thoughts about ishu
😉
n nw he tells iahita that she has to marry him
giving her tym to say yes in 4 hrs
hw great it is
she beat ashok n he tried to save him empathizing with himself
wht will b ishu's reaction on knowing d truth?
cont soon
thnxx 4 pm

Superb update
You made Raman Hero & villian
Two in one
BTW my name is also megha
Update soon

Awesome update
A nice idea.
Update soon

Interesting story Gaya...at first i thought raman is soo nice n sweet person...he admitted ishita's parents in hospital and is taking care of her, even though she was insulting him...but later it is a shock that he is the main culprit not ashok...raman played a smart move, poor ashok got trapped...i liked raman and ashok's convo in jail...
I loved this raman, though he kept the blame on ashok, but he is at guilt and trying his level best to secure ishita's future... I liked his self talk about securing ishita's life... I liked his immediate reaction on his own thought of adopting her as his sister, that she is too attractive to be his sister...
Ashok came to ishita's house with his parents...she slapped him, raman imagined himself in ashok's place as he deserved all those slaps from her...and tried to save ashok from her, but she retorted that did he want to marry her? Which made raman to think in that way...he decided to marry her and given her 4 hours time to say yes, i was like :-O...such a ample time in raman's thought as he usually give one minute to others...
ishra got married...i'm curious to read further...plz update soon and thanx 4 pm...

Thanx 4 the PM... 😊
It looks very interesting 😉
And even Raman did kill her parents, he is guilty n thats why he wants 2 marry her to fulfill her dad's last wish to take care of her. 😳
its 115 likes till now so be ready for the quick update. 😉

Originally posted by: -Nii-

Edited...

Oh my god😲😳

Itna mirch masala,chat masala,garam masala😆...you noe of all possible things o didn't expect this one...but Raman my god,should I say I love him that would be an understatement...you noe my love for bad boys n this bad boy has swept my heart away... whatta swagger❤️

You noe when he was sweet at start I knew there's more to it...n you proved me right...a saint Raman is something I noe you'd never like...just like me n Sri n cheeky😎... cheeky ka thoda doubt hai😆

Ashok loves ishita😲...bechara yaar tu baar baar uska dil todti hai...I thought ashok is evil but Raman.toh it was him who did the accident n framed ashok😆...n threatened ashok that confidence😳...gawd I'm dead...he gets what he wants doesn't he... I'm sure even ishita...

Ashok didn't give easily but finally he'd to...that jail talk was absolutely amazing...puttar full on Ravan mode...

Typical RKB😎...galat hai phir bhi woh confidence...only puttar Can do that😳

Raman is guilty with what happened...n wants to take care of her...but he can't see her as a sister😆...

Ishita is equally stubborn n feisty...she doesn't like Raman coz according to her he's fake..she Doesn't want his mercy pity whatever you call it as...but Raman wants to help coz he's guilty...she doesn't want him around but he says mihir that he promised Mr iyer that he'd take care if her n even remembers his small conversation with Mr iyer...what would ishita do to him if she comes to know the truth,just the thought shudders me

He proposes marriage... let's see how she'll accept it...

This is gonna be fun

Continue soon...

Hey Nishu...me too didn't expect this much masala in this theme but you know I was trying not to make it cliched 😆 And I know you will definitely love this Raman unlike anyone else because you loved Raman of DDS also, who was likely the "badest" 🤣
BTW, you very well know what kind of Raman is this one, so obviously you'd have been shocked to see all goody goody in the starting 😉 I wanted to show how daring he is, so that my poor readers could expect the most unexpected from him... 😈
He'll be screwed when Ishu will get to know the truth and you can imagine her reaction for she's not the abala naari in this one 😆
I know you'll have fun even if it won't be fun 🤣😆 But I seriously hope to make it interesting 🤔

Originally posted by: Mitishrafan

Awesome
Ashok n raman role reversal interesting 😉
Mimi's baby nice 😳
I can't imagine raman Ishita as bro n sis 😆 scary thought 😉
yha bhi Ishita k ashik Ashok 😉 isme sayad ashra ki chemistry dikhe 😆
Update soon

AshRa chemistry like really 😆
Glad you read and commented babe 😳
I'll try to update soon...