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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: PremPBSB
Interesting story...pls update soon.Thank u for pm

Thank you for commenting

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: cutekhusboo
Interesting...
Amazing start
Cont soon

Thank you... 😳

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lalibhaskar

@lalibhaskar

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

This is lalitha

I have read almost all ur stories

But this is the first time I am commenting

The concept is too good

Aww raman did the accident and put the blame on ashok

Bechara ashok he can't even say the truth

Raman truly a business man

Ishita is also a strong character

She doesn't like raman at all

Curious to know how she married him

U always show a different raman in ur stories

Little evilish Atlast hero tho hero hai

And negative characters positively

Waiting for next part

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aishwarya

@angeliash

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

interesting story ... raman is a culprit omg shocking and he is acting like innocent person hope he will understand his mistake and rectify it...poor ishu Bcoz of Raman mistake her parents died... plz continue soon

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discipline

@discipline

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Nice start

Interesting Story dear

Plz continue soon

Thanks for the pm

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Greeshma

@FreedomOfSpeech

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Interesting and intriguing. New concept though I like it. Raman is really huh I don't know how to judge him. He is bad and good as well. Ashok I like him here. The most I like in Raman is his ATTITUDE. It's good. Hope you will continue and thank you for PM.