FF | My Heart Beats In My Mind | Teaser on Page-39 | Oct|18

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Gaayu ur masala to d theme suggested by Nishu is shocking u knw I didn't expect this but I am pleasantly shocked with ur masala
Frst impression on puttar is like awww how Gud is this guy like really he is taking care of ishita and protecting her even now he is doing dat I taught he was innocent but oh my my after knowing d reason y puttar is there because he was guilty dat because of him she lost her parents and none are there for her now so he wants to take her responsibility and also he promised her father dat he will take care of ishita and he was very sorry of wat he did and even appa forgave him before he died

Puttar yaar kya game khela hein and d way he trapped ashokwa in all this oh god am shocked ashokwa ka kismat Karab hein Varna vusi tym pe voh vaha kyun hoga 🤣 and d convo between Raman and Ashok in jail was 🤣 u want a bail I love ishita and den atlast how ashokwa gave up on ishita huh it was awesome

So ishita doesn't like Raman hovering around and wants him to leave but puttar doesn't want to leave and wen Mihir asked him y he is doing this he told dat appa took a promise from him dat he shld take care of ishita and ishita doesn't like any business people because of ashokwa too complicated and ashokwa came to ishita with a marriage proposal and Puttar tried to convince her and wen she asked will he marry her jst in fit of rage he took seriously and he told dat he will marry her and gave her 4 hrs tym huh Hahahaha wen tough puttar is wrong but it was unintentional and also appa forgave him so maaf kiya puttar ko

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ohh my when I started I found raman so sweet caring and lovable . I doubt how you make him so caring n all 😆
and then came the real raman the mighty RKB 😈
bechara ashokwa how easily raman make him the culprit 😎
so basically raman is guilty for that accident and doing all these stunts to hide that
hmm ishita just can't tolerate him but she has to for lifetime now
heheh he can't see her as his sister
so just in heated situation raman asks to marry him 😆
waiting for next to see how this mess is converted into marriage

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@ 1st I thought awww...
How nice z raman...
Wat a nice person..
Who z helping & protecting ishita...
But to see raman z the real culprit behind everything...
Raman didnt wont to spoil his life & he didnt admit his crime..
Insted he put all the blame on the poor soul ashok..
& ishita doesnt like raman even a bit..
She cant even tolerate raman's presence...
Now ishra are married...
Interesting...
Udate soon..

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whooaaa...
that was unexpected...
kya theme thi...nd kya bana diya tumne...
gaya ki leela...
huh...
dnt make ppl hate my baby...he is so gem..
whn he was sweet in d beginning i thought no no..
i cant believe this...its RKB moreover its gayas story...it cant b this simple...so was waiting for the twist... nd der come the twist..
RKB killed ishus parents...accidentally
nd how amazingly trapped ashok...
hiz talks with ashok in jail was fab...
full on attitude...
he is mass...
bole toh jabra ekdam...loved that bail or jail...
with your *pause* jst fab fab fab...
bt ishu kuch jyada nahi kar rahi kya?
why she is behaving so rude to him..😡
usko kharcha pani dena padega shayad...


in short i loved RKB here...[is it new to tell!!!😉]
usne kuch bhi kiya to bhi he will b best in my point of view...
they r married.. so i dnt hv any problem...
he will win her...
nd will tell her that he killed her parents *Accidentally*
with gayus mirch masala..
nd i wanna knw it


reading next one..
sorry for late cmnt..😔

Wow different concept different approach
Loved the first part
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I like this one
Raman should become a good man for ishita just like he did in "tere ishq ki mujh ko adat ha''
Then the story will get more intersting.
but i love these types of stories
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Wow great story
Update soon
Thanks for pm