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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Superb start dear
Interesting plot
Continue soon
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Please update I wish you are my first love also 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
I'm always ready for your Raman...
Hey yaara...
Missed me...
I missed myself too..
I'm not saying i haven't read the updates...paday hai but not fully just upar se...
Sobbing me...
Muje miss karna bcz mein bhi miss karti hoon..long chatting...long comments... regular updates...etc...etc...etc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Kya khaoon siwaeyy yeh k please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sri1091

Unres
Gaayu ur masala to d theme suggested by Nishu is shocking u knw I didn't expect this but I am pleasantly shocked with ur masala
Frst impression on puttar is like awww how Gud is this guy like really he is taking care of ishita and protecting her even now he is doing dat I taught he was innocent but oh my my after knowing d reason y puttar is there because he was guilty dat because of him she lost her parents and none are there for her now so he wants to take her responsibility and also he promised her father dat he will take care of ishita and he was very sorry of wat he did and even appa forgave him before he died

Puttar yaar kya game khela hein and d way he trapped ashokwa in all this oh god am shocked ashokwa ka kismat Karab hein Varna vusi tym pe voh vaha kyun hoga 🤣 and d convo between Raman and Ashok in jail was 🤣 u want a bail I love ishita and den atlast how ashokwa gave up on ishita huh it was awesome

So ishita doesn't like Raman hovering around and wants him to leave but puttar doesn't want to leave and wen Mihir asked him y he is doing this he told dat appa took a promise from him dat he shld take care of ishita and ishita doesn't like any business people because of ashokwa too complicated and ashokwa came to ishita with a marriage proposal and Puttar tried to convince her and wen she asked will he marry her jst in fit of rage he took seriously and he told dat he will marry her and gave her 4 hrs tym huh Hahahaha wen tough puttar is wrong but it was unintentional and also appa forgave him so maaf kiya puttar ko



Sri I amazed myself by thus masala you know 😆
I didn't want a cliched situation where NRI hero comes to India and marrying heroine because of parents and then you know in UK Nishu's twist awaiting 😉 so I thought why not some drama 😈 Moreover, I'm over with cheesy Ramans 🤣

I'm glad you enjoyed it Sri...
BTW, you know Ashok is not as bad as Raman here 😳 and you're right, Ishu's parents have forgiven him and he's ready to repent but he's more concerned for his reputation and clean public profile 😎
Now I gotta think how Ishu's gonna agree for marriage 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: fSharm

Res
Unresed...
@ 1st I thought awww...
How nice z raman...
Wat a nice person..
Who z helping & protecting ishita...
But to see raman z the real culprit behind everything...
Raman didnt wont to spoil his life & he didnt admit his crime..
Insted he put all the blame on the poor soul ashok..
& ishita doesnt like raman even a bit..
She cant even tolerate raman's presence...
Now ishra are married...
Interesting...
Udate soon..



Hi Sharmin...
Hope you enjoyed the story 😳
Yeah at first I thought of misleading you guys by good Raman 😆
I'll try to update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: ..sush..

Wow different concept different approach
Loved the first part
Update soon



Thank you Sush...
Glad you enjoyed it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: ishraholic.maya

I like this one
Raman should become a good man for ishita just like he did in "tere ishq ki mujh ko adat ha''
Then the story will get more intersting.
but i love these types of stories
Update soon



Thank you babe...
Yeah he'll change for Ishita like in "Tere Ishq" but it'd take time unlike that one. I didn't prepare this one to end in 10 shots like that one you know 😳
Hope you'll enjoy it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18


Thanks 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cookieg

Wow great story
Update soon
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Thank you...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Interesting start to quite a new and different story
Raman behind all this
Let's see what you bring up next
Continue soon

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