One Last Time : An IshRa Drabble - part 2 and note on pg 6

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: DikshaN
very nice os
it's very touching and I must say u made me cry
impressing writing

Thanks..glad you liked it..😊

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi
brilliant piece of writing
Loved it

Thanks😛

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: aru_27
nice update
very emotional

Thanks😛

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kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Hi PB its been long haven't talked with you hope you Remember our masti with Nikki and Gang 😆

PB you made me cry with this i totally feel Raman's pain i loved the way you portrayed the sequence unlike our cv's who always love to give importance to unnecessary character's.. Loved you focused on Raman's pain and it would have been great if both ishra talk with each other about how there life was miserable without each other during 7 years they both were at fault they don't need any third person to resolve there issues theycan solve it there own.. But alas its wishful thinking as god knows what cv's want.. But i loved this update will be waiting for next part continue soon 😊

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mystigue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

emotional update
hope the foolish cvs of yhm comes up with something like this
waiting for next part

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Hey Pb, you have to check THIS THREAD, or your PM from Monday 😆

Sorry for spamming your story thread, but didn't know where else to catch you 😛

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bscorp13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -Nidoo-
Hey Pb, you have to check THIS THREAD, or your PM from Monday 😆

Sorry for spamming your story thread, but didn't know where else to catch you 😛

Thank..just checked the thread...loved the surprise. .😛 .I am very lazy replying to pms..sorry😛😆

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mystigue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

brilliant piece
when are you going to update next part
waiting for that

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UmeraT

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

A stroke is too much. RKB doesn't deserve it 😭

You have got to continue this and do justice cos I've had someone VERY close go through this and the shock is too much to take! 🥱

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bscorp13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

This wasn't really meant as a story. .it was always a drabble ...

It was a unconventional take in a part prose- part drabble form about love as an emotional pain giver manifesting itself in a physical form through what I envisioned as raman's last moments. .

I had contemplated ending this drabble many times but always thought I needed to see it in a different light...

But today I felt like I wanted to end this drabble in a particular way... so here goes.

It can be interpreted in multiple ways but let's just say I wanted to write it this way. ..i have my interpretation and you could chose yours or just think of it as a meaningless poem 😛...

But for me ...this is how this drabble ended.

Note : This is purely my take and not a comment on ishita or raman or their actions in the actual track. Its been many moons since and now the essence of the scene is lost too..so do try and think of it as a different story set in a different time but of 2 very known characters called ishita and raman.

This drabble is depressing and disturbing - so please refrain from reading if that's not your cup of tea. ..

Dedicated to those odd folks who claim thry re read this drabble for morbid reasons best known to them...😛..

Hope the second part meets your expectations people

Edited by bscorp13 - 8 years ago