One Last Time : An IshRa Drabble - part 2 and note on pg 6

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Hima Bindu.CH

@himabindu.ch

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Superb dear,, I just love it.. As u say, raman's pain nd agony will never b acknowledged in this show... How much I wish to see something of this sort in yhm... Anyways, what I am expectng... Thank u so much for fulfilling my unsaid wish... I was literally in tears after reading this... Continue it soon dear...

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NINALOGY

@NINALOGY

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Superb And Heart touching update pb
update soon

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Jinan_R
U almost made me cry. 😭
And Raman's true feelings are shown how he doesn't want her to go back... 😳
Their feelings are not even considered nowadays in the show b/c their too busy showing Shagun n her life.. 🤢
continue soon.. 😉

Hey Thanks. .don't know your name yet.

Yup raman's feelings have never found voice in this show in a long time.. the last time was license track I guess...else it's an abrupt end or tb worse still comedy...the first show i guess where the MLs fear of v dying and then leaving his property and biz to his wife was turned into comedy😕

Yup yhm now is about leads like shagun, mani, acp..ishra are supporting cast. . What a pity🤢

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MG_Inactive

@MG_Inactive

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

So glad you took up the pov of a person who has now no importance in the show. Please continue soon...

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Priya

@priyadarshini.r

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Wow Pb, thanks for taking time out to come up with this drabble. It was amazing. 👏👏.

"he had cursed the heavens and his tongue and his fate"

His tongue - The only reason, people are not able to empathise & sympathise with Raman. But does that take away the mental agony, the hurt, the guilt, the loneliness that this man has been through all these years. Does that take away the immense love and affection this man has for his wife & kids ? I definitely don't think so. Infact Ishita has been the very reason for his existence and the moment she was assumed dead, this man ceased to exist. He was a dead man, just breathing all these years.

His pain, his desperation to have both his angles back in his life, his fear of losing them again from his life is so well depicted. It was actually very painful to read , yet very beautiful. I had tears in my eyes. Every "one last time" was so touching Pb. Something we would never get to see in the show.

I would like to see what Ishita feels from within for Raman and a proper confrontation between IshRa, where they share with each other the pain, the angst and the void these people have felt in their life in these years and how they resolve them , put them behind and move forward.

After all, IshRa being perfect for each other in their imperfections, is what make them special and their love so unique and powerful.

Loved it Pb. Waiting for the next part 😊.

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: himapriya
Superb dear,, I just love it.. As u say, raman's pain nd agony will never b acknowledged in this show... How much I wish to see something of this sort in yhm... Anyways, what I am expectng... Thank u so much for fulfilling my unsaid wish... I was literally in tears after reading this... Continue it soon dear...

Thanks for liking this. .

Yup..it was my deepest wish to see raman's pain and agony get an outlet on tjhe show too.. and more so others acknowledging it...sadly no hopes from tjhe show but glad you liked this. ..will try continue soon

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-K.13-

@-K.13-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

omg this gave me goosebumps & some tears to my eyes.

How lovely this would've been to see KP & DT enact this & could've matched up for actor a senses

Alas we are just left to cry over spilled milk and imagine your story playing out in our minds

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Divan-holic
Superb And Heart touching update pb
update soon

Thanks, will try and update soon

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: meghnaghosh
So glad you took up the pov of a person who has now no importance in the show. Please continue soon...

That's sadly true na...raman has no importance anymore, good, bad, ugly nothing..it's like he doesn't matter anymore. .and that after a leap build up which had do mu h scope to showcase his pain, his relief, his repentance and what not. ..

Thanks for liking this😊