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sayujya

@sayujya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Wow...gaayu read it in a stretch with out any break...so captivating...raman is so cute...how he did not lose his temper over ishita's tantrums...and he giving up his illegal business for her ...and how he accepts her baby as his...

Ur raman is every woman's dream hubby...

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dreamy-sa

@dreamy-sa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Wow...read it fully without a break!! Was waiting for days for ur update😆

I so loved how raman is submissive to ishita😳

awesome story overall👏

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Mit

@Mitishrafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Amazing
First question Shagun kahan gayab ho gayi khi dikhi hi nahi 🤣
Raman jealous of subbu 😳
Raman confession in anger loved it 😳
Raman claiming baby as our baby all the time 🤗
Meera is Mihika surprise 😲
Ishita tantrums only for her husband not for her slave 😉
I like appa firstly I imagine raman n appa relation like bagban movie ab n Salman but their relationship was like boss n servant
Ishita confession in hospital lovely
Thnx for pm

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

A fabulous update beautifully written and expressed brilliantly!!!

Ishita has finally fallen in love with him!!!

And of course so has Raman!!

But both scared that the other will leave the other!!!

He wants to stop his illegal business without her knowing which is why he goes to America and then decides to tell her after but she finds out and is very hurt!!!!!!

When she delivers Ruhi she does not look at her until Raman sees her first - aaawww so much love - both have so much love for each other!!!!

He finally comes to the hospital while she is sleeping and he comes and puts his head on her and hugs her!!!

Finally nurse brings the baby in and IshraRu are together!!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!!!

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lalibhaskar

@lalibhaskar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

This is the first time I am commenting on ur story

I loved this story very very much

Too good

Ayyo I don't have words to appreciate ur writing

U r a fantabulous writer

I am always amazed by ur writings

Coming to this story it's awesome, mind blowing

I know this is chotu comment

What to do how much ever I write it is too small compared to ur work

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Sharmin

@fSharm

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Awww awesome update gayu...
I loved it a lot..
Raman z a geniune person...
Who z all set to keep ishita comportable...
So he made shagun's brother to say that shagun z only behind him & she z mad...
After receiving the call from shagun's brother ishita felt reveled...
& by time..
Raman started to love her & he felt jelous when ever ishita started to talk about subbu...
He acted calm infront of ishita as he didnot want to loose her...
& finally ishita fallen for him...
But raman misunderstood ishita & vandu convo...
As he herd only last part where ishita said that she doubted him as he vl leave her vth after taking the money...
Bcz of this he confessed that he love her..
He ignored her as his wife & took care of her as just as a caretaker...
It hurt ishita & made her to understand that she love him..
& finally everything was perfect...
But wat to do its their fate that made ishita to know everything about raman...
That too on the day where their ruhi was born...
He apolize to her but she was in a state to understand him...
& she didnt even look o hold ruhi as she wanted raman to hold her...
Finally everything came back to normal...
But raman z not ready to complete his family vth just 3...
He wanted his family to b a big family vth ishra & their 5 kids including their rooh...
Its an awesome update...
I loved the possesiveness both had for each other & the love they had...
& loved it when ishita wanted raman to hold her 1st...
Amazing...

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peggy

@peg_pionne

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

What can i say it was a mindblowing, amazing, wonderfull and much more i love the story the way they confessed, the caring way Raman treated her and their fears and hurt who were the same, everything was perfect ⭐️

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

It's too long... Need so much time
So a Res

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Divanru

@Divanru

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Amazing update and end Gayu .

Take a bow from me .

How can you write somuch at the same time .

Both usgra are poor ,felt bad for them .

At last they got their happiness in the form of each other and lil ruhi .

Gayu now I want you to write a shagunless story .

I hate her man .

Appa I can't say anything about him .

Glad sisters are together now .

Waiting for epilogue.

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Roohachu

@Roohachu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Gaya Di
I know I'm super late...
N be frank I almost forget the story
sorry for that😭
Blame my brain
But I do remember something in bits n bytes
So comment is chotu
Sorry for that too😭
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First part was so lovely
They met n Appa's death
I felt bad for her
But yaa Appa is so caring he made sure that his daughter is not alone
n then their marriage
Raman's jealousy towards Subbu
The way he obeyed all her orders
The way he cared for her
Everything was sweet.
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2nd part
That was also awesome
Finally they confessed
N their fight
n finally the arrival of that little angel in their life
She don't even want to hold her daughter before him
She didn't looked at the baby too
That's really sad
N then he came and they saw their baby together
How sweet?
N Raman's demand
That was sweet indeed
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Meera being Mihika was an amazing twist
Finally siblings are together
And everything is fine