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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Superb
Amazing
Awesome
Wonderful
Just Loved it
Raman feels jealous bcoz of Subbu
Raman Loves ishu so much
He gets angry bcoz Ishu don't trust him
But Ishiya confessed her love
He decided to left everything For her
He went to US & Left everything
but Ishita ko Sab Pta lag gya
Loved Last part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
you know wen I gt ur pm dat u hav completed this one
i was like how come u can end it in one shot only
but you actually did
n being a writer myself I can imagine how much time n effort it would have taken typing such a long update
kudos to u 4 dat
especially wen u r nt well

ok now coming to d update
amazing amazing update
ishita is making raman do all her works
n he's doing it like her slave
he's attracted to her n this is one of his reasons to marry her
wowww
den she expressed dat he made her feel pampered dat made him blush
hayee
u know blushy RKB always takes me to another world altogether
lol
he was jealous wen she talked abt subbu in sleep n she felt light knowing he had no relations with shgs
too cute dey r
aren't dey
den slowly both began sharing their life n thoughts
after hearing her convo with vandu he felt bad
n den sm emo convo
finally d confession
meera being mihika was nycc
ishita gt her sis back only cz of raman
raman wants to change 4 her n baby
so he ends his illegal business going to us
bt ishu ko pta chal gaya
jagga jassos she is
den hw raman explained his situation to her was beautifully written
she was angry bt eventually she got to feel her pain
she didn't hold or see ruhi cz she wanted to do it with raman
how sweet
her convo wid miku was too cute
den raman came n layed beside her saying he can seek her apology for a lifetime
how sweet
ishita melted hearing this though she was nt angry wid him
den his excitement wen he held ruhi
ishita i want 5 babies
tumse ni hoga to we'll adopt some
really this one cracked me up
all in all
an amazingly wonderful update
thnxxx 4 pm😊

PS-this one is my longest comment on any stories of any writer till date
wow m so proud of me😉
Edited by akriti154 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
I love the update
Very nice
Last lines 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Hey gayu,
It was definitely not like a summary...u did the best one could do to wrap a five shot story in one update. So just chill...it was fab👏

By the way hope u r doing good girl...not stressing n just resting 😉

Yeh shagun baggage ki tarah yahan bhi piche Lange wali thi ...but thank God raman fixed her wherever she was.😆

Whoever has slept with me have told me that I don't kick...omg I was laughing like crazy after reading this.🤣

The way she snuggled him n started blabbering was so cute...she was lying in his arms n telling I love u subbu... poor puttar so helpless can't even show his possessive side.

Shagun was bothering her n after speaking to rohit she was relieved...so cute...

The way raman bursted out after listening to ishu n vandus talk was scary...I thought he will be uncontrollable...but inspite of being hurt he held himself although showing that he is hurt n angry.

Gusse me confession bhi kar diya... haaye...

After trying to convince him by apologising the way ishu got furious wen he was not accepting her sorry was superb...the way she screamed her authority on him n vice versa was just too good... truly JKR style.

Sisters milap was very emotional...

The bhuchal got me tensed. Raman's explanation in the form of outburst was so painful as he has gone through a lot. After the outburst the way he told her how she was the one who made him feel loved n cared was so beautiful...awww I loved that part very much.

They both have gone through abnormal circumstances throughout their life n then found solace in each other.

Last part was brilliant...loved it.

I m so sad that u had to wrap up this story in just two shots... although the last shot was very very lengthy. It was such different n beautiful concept so it would have been a treat to read more than two shots.

U couldn't have ended in a better way though...so lub u for this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Superb update
loved it very very much
raman is so sweet

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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Woww...one awesome part it was
It was like no I don't want him
I want him
I don't want him
And then finally he is mine forever...
Thank God no villainy drama
Only Ishra...loved it
Too good
The last parts was lovely...
5 Babies...aww
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Finally i read this ..i took three breaks..gosh this is so long..
Jst loved this story..
Raman ws possessive for her from day one..
He didnt like ishita taking subbu's name...bt nvr showed anger..
He did everything she asked for..such a gentleman..
Bt the talk with vandu enraged him..
She didnt trust him..it hurt him..
Bt everything went well bcs both confessed..
He nvr told her abt his illegal business to protect her from everything ..n decided to left everything..
Bt ishita got to know..
She thought he cheated her..
His pain ws palpable..he craved for love he nvr got n finally got that from ishita...ishita hurt hom in angrr bt he apologized ...
Last part ws so cute..she wanted him to look their daughter first hold hrr first...he ws so happy..
He want 4/5 kids more...hahaha
Loved it..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
awesome,awesome,awesome,awesome,awesome.👏 i srsly have no words. i luv this so much. btw how r u feeling now?u okay? anyways thanks so much for resending me this.i luv ur writings so much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Aweee 10k words like seriously. How much stress you will give to that poor hand :(. Chal thuj se kuch nahi hoga.

Coming to update. You made it splendid. sirf ek scene diya thumne mere darling shagun ko 😆 budget less kya 😛 haha just kidding. Ishu kick nahi maara sleep Mein 😆 . She missing his late husband grr. She is irked by mere mention of shagun here she is blabbering his name daily in her sleep. Poor Raman was hurt. Aww Raman pressed her feet like seriously such an adorable man he is 😳. She tried all the ways to irk him. He so patiently handled with her. That's really so sweet. Loved the way how their relationship was growing day by day. She really jagga jasoos 😈 always after his study room. Raman was so hurt after hearing ishitha conversation with vandu. He told he will divorce her ooo. Glad she finally confessed her feelings for him. He just left everything for her aww. Wow meera is mihika so happy for sister's 😊. Uff she did investigation finally. Worse fight between them :( . Hospital part tho bahut emotional kar diya. How much he tried to convince her yeh sunthe hi nahi. Vuper se vuse take mar rahi hai. But that last scene was more than purrrfect. She neither touched nor seen her baby aww first right for her papa Raman 😳. So cute five babies 🤣. Gaya honey as you're interested in course of having babies. Give them three 🤣 one they will try on their own 🤣 hahahehehuhu. One more beautiful story Gaya dear 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Superb story dear
Love raman very much in the story
Thanks for the pm
Get well soon and take care

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