you know wen I gt ur pm dat u hav completed this one
i was like how come u can end it in one shot only
but you actually did
n being a writer myself I can imagine how much time n effort it would have taken typing such a long update
kudos to u 4 dat
especially wen u r nt well
ok now coming to d update
amazing amazing update
ishita is making raman do all her works
n he's doing it like her slave
he's attracted to her n this is one of his reasons to marry her
wowww
den she expressed dat he made her feel pampered dat made him blush
hayee
u know blushy RKB always takes me to another world altogether
lol
he was jealous wen she talked abt subbu in sleep n she felt light knowing he had no relations with shgs
too cute dey r
aren't dey
den slowly both began sharing their life n thoughts
after hearing her convo with vandu he felt bad
n den sm emo convo
finally d confession
meera being mihika was nycc
ishita gt her sis back only cz of raman
raman wants to change 4 her n baby
so he ends his illegal business going to us
bt ishu ko pta chal gaya
jagga jassos she is
den hw raman explained his situation to her was beautifully written
she was angry bt eventually she got to feel her pain
she didn't hold or see ruhi cz she wanted to do it with raman
how sweet
her convo wid miku was too cute
den raman came n layed beside her saying he can seek her apology for a lifetime
how sweet
ishita melted hearing this though she was nt angry wid him
den his excitement wen he held ruhi
ishita i want 5 babies
tumse ni hoga to we'll adopt some
really this one cracked me up
all in all
an amazingly wonderful update
thnxxx 4 pm😊
PS-this one is my longest comment on any stories of any writer till date
wow m so proud of me😉
Edited by akriti154 - 9 years ago
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