IshRa OS: An orderly crash (8th May)

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

This one's dedicated to one of the most wonderful people I've had the fortune to meet, here on IF. She's calm, collected, sensible. She's the voice of reason, she's the mama bear, and a genuinely helpful person.

It is based on today's episode - why Ishita chose to leave Raman's side, despite listening to his broken pleas, and the discussion a few of us had off IF.

This is based entirely on her point of view, as she understands Ishita's plight and decision in the moment, and I just hope to bring some light to her thought process in the form of story.

This is by Anku, and, for Anku 🤗 🤗 🤗

Happy Birthday meri jaan 🤗 🤗

To Anku: I was wondering for the longest time to gift something special, when I thought why not write something. But I didn't have the slightest idea of what to write upon, until that discussion happened after YHM today. Even then I hadn't started writing, until the day officially started, and it turned out quite different from what I thought. Nonetheless, I wanted to write on Ishita for you, because Raman I love a little more, but Ishita is who you understand much better 😳 😳

1100 words. Not proofread.

Edited by -Nidoo- - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

I LOVE YOU NIDS 🤗

I wasn't expecting this, not a post on I-F and not an OS on something we discussed in the least.Thank you so so much for treating me to such an amazing gift on my birthday. This moved me, firstly because you wrote one even though you've been so busy and because it touched me anyway. Thanks for making my birthday so special Nids 🤗 And all that you said, back at you. You're genuinely one of the most kind, warm, intelligent and sorted people I've met on this forum. Thanks for being a wonderful friend and confidant always.

Coming to the OS - Yes, I understand Ishita. I understand Raman too. I've always felt a partial liking to Raman a bit more than with Ishita. I don't know why, but his flawed madcap behavior makes him all the more real. But that doesn't mean I don't get Ishita. She seems simple on the surface but within there's just a whole lot of wreckage no one sees and she let's no one see. Everyone's questioning why she can't stay back knowing Raman is incomplete without her, when she knows he needs her. But doesn't Ishita already know that somehow? She knows they complete each other and that he loves her. But if she stays back, and she's accused of being a bad omen, of being the reason of his troubles, how can stay with something like that and survive? It's not easy to live like that. She lost her Ruhi, she lost Raman and then everyone else. But to stay with Raman and see the blame in his eyes everyday would kill her. He would hurt himself and hurt her too...how does one live like that?

You've just beautifully penned the emotions, especially how difficult it is for her to now survive another few years after she's seen him in flesh and not in dreams. How hard it must be to forget the feel, the scent and his presence and move on again. Wouldn't ever want to be in her position. And you make one feel that through your words. You do emotions so well Nids, one can literally feel them through your work. 👏

Edited by -Anku- - 9 years ago

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anku-
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I LOVE YOU NIDS 🤗

I love you too Anku 🤗 Hope you have a wonderful day!

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Zoyamalik2005

@Zoyamalik2005

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Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful😊

Happy birthday 😊

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WittyFlair

@WittyFlair

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Posted: 9 years ago

That was really nice...aww but what a cliffhanger...this definitely needs a part 2 😆

And happy birthday 😊

Edited by Noteworthy - 9 years ago

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

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Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful
Are you continuing ?

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow that was amazing!!

I have not been watching the show so am not sure what exactly happened but I get the gist!!! I am assuming that in the show she has left him but he did not come after her as in this update?!?!?!??!?!

Beautifully written - love the way you have expressed Ishita's thoughts!!!

Please continue soon!!!!

And I would really appreciate a pm for the next update please as I just found this whilst looking to see what is happening on IF!!!

Happy birthday Anku - hope you have a wonderful day and may you be blessed with love and happiness always!!!!

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-K.13-

@-K.13-

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Posted: 9 years ago

This was beautiful and haunting! Lovely writing as always Nids! ❤️

And a special special shoutout to our sweet, calm, level-headed, always willing to listen, ever talented birthday girl - Anku! May you have a blessed & wonderful year ahead! 🤗