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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Beautifully written ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
That's all I can say
I have no words to say
Starting mein I was not able to connect with raman as the dialogues by raman aka karan was reminded ... actually I was really upset with raman for those words ... cvs always make raman say such rude words and I get angry on raman ๐Ÿ˜’
But the way you make us feel the pain by your writing by your words is just amazing
I think you should often write one shots or two shots on the post leap track ... at least your stories will give me some relief

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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
That was sad, but beautiful. Raman is easily understood because he wears his emotions out for everyone to see. Even when he was a closed book his emotions were very evident. He flawed many a times and this time too he's the reason of his own pain. But there's no denying that the man who caused his own pain and who suffers in guilt for causing it to his life his Ishita, loved her with all his heart...to the point that he could destroy himself in her love too.

This was an extremely heart touching view of his feelings, thanks for penning it down ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
beautiful OS prabh
so emotional
u have written ramans feelings so beautifully
loved it
thanks for pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
dear

what an update

you make me cried

my heart goes to raman really really feel bad for him dear

fantastically written emotional update dear ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

beautifully show the pain of raman deeply in this dear excellent dear


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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Beautifully written..
Adi finally knwos d truth..
I hv tears in my eyes..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
This is so painful and I can't help but be emotional after reading this. Can't even imagine the amount of pain and guilt Raman is going through and that he has to die with it, there is simply no escape. Thank God that in reel, Ishita is alive and both will eventually come together.I know the show is long dead for us but the fact the Ishita is not dead on the show and Raman will get a chance to redeem himself is a breather for me.
Please do write more OSes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Wow... simply superb...
I loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
to say it was beautiful would be less...raman's feelings so amazingly worded...

wonderful...keep writing...
god bless..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Prabh that was again so so so so beautiful piece of work from your end...
It was emotional and you again portrayed the emotions as beautiful as always
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Beautiful os
Loved it
Very nicely written again

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