Raman OS | Ek Aur Saal | COMPLETED

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Hey everyone! I'm back with another OS! This one came to my mind after I was listening to a Punjabi song which reminded me of the scene where Raman called out to Ishita when he was drunk. I jtust recently saw that scene on Instagram.

After that, though I continuously tell myself not to write on the present Ishita or Raman, I couldn't stop myself from writing this one. It is only Raman's POV because he is the one character I connect to more than Ishita. His feelings are what I find myself understanding more than Ishita's oftentimes and hence I wrote this OS. However since these characters are no longer what they were, I don't how this OS has turned out since it's harder to relate to the emotions Raman or Ishita feel right now. Nonetheless, since I have written this, no matter how it is, I will post it now. And PMs will be late for this one as well!

And before the OS, this was one I quickly wrote and haven't proofread, so please ignore any errors. So now without any more delay, here's the OS...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its just beautiful though an emotional one
u very nicely portrayed what raman has gone through n he is regretting what he said years ago
he wants her madarasan to be near her to share their baby loss
it was just too gud
I cried reading this
he is devastated n living a soulless life
just loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ur story name reminds me some punjabi song"Ajj ik saal hor..
Ho gaya eh kehnde mainu
Ke main tenu yaaran bhul jana kal toh"
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally updated! Don't know how it is, so please do leave your feedback with all criticism welcome!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg Prabh! This is beautiful! You brought tears to my eye recreating and adding depth to Raman's drunk scene post-leap. By making it on the death anniversary of Ruhi & Ishita - you just added more depth to the emotions! I just love reading your take on things! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So beautifully written. So painful POV from Raman's heart
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prab .. Girl I commend you for giving another brilliant write up on a single scene his drunken state scene... But the beauty that added the depth to this is you turned It inti a death anniversary day. Full of emotions, Ramans pov ... Superb .. His pain , hurt, longing to have a one last chance to see her .. Girl I teared up.
I've read atleast 3-4 Ts/ ss/ os today that made me tear up... Am emotional day for me, thank you for writing this .. Amazing talent .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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a very emotional os
d way u described his feelings was just perfect
plz do write some more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really a beautiful one it is
no words to explain hw the deep emotions of raman have been portrayed by you wonderfully
thankyou 4 writing this
n d pm of course😊

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