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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Emotional...

Beautifully written👏

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Its awsm..
My eyes got moist...
I m always bowled over by ur writing...
That day v got a glimpse of raman's pov..
U made it beautiful by adding so many emotions..
Loved it !!

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ishra_JD_club

@ishra_JD_club

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

amazingly written

emotional part

well done dear👏

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discipline

@discipline

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Beautifully written dii

This story brought tears to my eyes

Thanks for the pm

Lovely story

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yashivid

@yashivid

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Hey prabh

It was a beautifully penned OS full of emotions.

U described Raman's state of mind so beautifully. The kind of turmoil he is going through because of the bitter words that he spewed like venom on that dreaded night...ahhh it was so realistic I cud feel his pain.

He is going through hell for the past seven years after spitting venom in the spur of the moment.

The frustration that he can't undo his deeds is killing him.

Ishita beared the whole worlds taunt but the same thing coming from the love of her life broke the strong woman in her which was s true in real life as well.

I know the emotions of the characters in the show are no longer the same but I just wish that when they show their confrontation after seven years they recreate the magic of old ishra to some extent at least. I know it's waste of time expecting such sensibilities from the CV but still if they cud do for the craze we have for ishra.

Thanks a lot prabh for this OS coz u always write something that we cannot expect from the show. U write with the write balance of emotions, realistic feelings and logic which the CVs don't do so thanks a ton.

Also I would like to request u write an OS or ts based on their confrontation after seven years after they show it on the show.

U know I have so much faith in the CVs that they will again show some kind of shit in the confrontation.

U writing something on that will give us the pleasure was reading what we want n we will not get that in show. So pls consider this request of mine.

Thanks for the PM

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

I m out of words Prabh..

Raman is missing them a lot..

just a drunken scene & u added their anniversary to it..

Pretty serious stuff from you Prabh..

P.S:- U r king of emotional writing oops! Sorry, U r queen of emotional write ups yaar..

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Sweety

@ishitaruhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Too emotional, thanks for this wonderful OS.u made me cry if this type of scenes will be there in rael in the show it will surely break all record ,kp will rock it.but we have the dumb CV N dialogue writer who trying to break the image of LEAD which they achieve in 2years.
Love this RKB. 😛

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Rkchinju

@Rkchinju

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Heart wrenching OS dear...
Raman's Pov was superb!!!
u made me cry 😭 😭
Perfectly written...
loved it ...
keep writing..

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Shravs

@shravsss

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

You rock this bought tears to my eyes. I knew Raman's character has more emotions than Cvs ever portray or will be portraying... This was one of the best... I read about Raman's pov... You are such a gifted writer.

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-FlameOfHope-

@-FlameOfHope-

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

God, this is one terrific OS. I very, very rarely get dewy eyed reading anything. This made my eyes fill to the brim with tears (which I withheld). A great job, Prabh.

I am Anamika, by the way from Meri Aashiqui forum. That was another story ruined by CVs. Sigh.

Would love to read more from you.

Love,

Anamika.