Breaking Away or Breaking Apart? An IshRa TS - Part 4 updated on pg 11 - Page 8

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

awesome...👏

Originally posted by: Anum_says

I really want a confrontation like this in serial. .its very emotional and brilliant.

Loved it

Update soon

Amazingly written pb 👏 the way u potrayed Raman is jst awesome and d way ishita was in so much pain hearing to it and Raman saying to her dat let him get it all out of him as he is decaying from inside it jst amazing yaar Pihu his sole reason to live she is really a blessing for Raman her cry brought him to reality and his justification of y he didn't tell Pihu abt ishita is perfectly put and his stry abt Buddha I loved d way u put it and now he is coming to d point y he was soo angry continue soon yaar

Originally posted by: Sri1091

Amazingly written pb 👏 the way u potrayed Raman is jst awesome and d way ishita was in so much pain hearing to it and Raman saying to her dat let him get it all out of him as he is decaying from inside it jst amazing yaar Pihu his sole reason to live she is really a blessing for Raman her cry brought him to reality and his justification of y he didn't tell Pihu abt ishita is perfectly put and his stry abt Buddha I loved d way u put it and now he is coming to d point y he was soo angry continue soon yaar

Originally posted by: -K.13-

Res 😃

Superb story..

Originally posted by: apoo91

Superb story..

I always have hated the family's interference in raman-ishita's private life.. glad to see they're having a heart to heart talk..

Waiting for next..

Can u plz update an index..

Originally posted by: -K.13-

"You know they say suicide is a split second decision and it's never done slow, but I think i wanted to torture myself and didn't want to let death come easy. I wanted to feel your pain lshita, as you thought of ending it, I wanted to somehow reach out, and somehow see you again, if not in life , at least in death."

^^So heart-breakingly haunting! In addition to giving Raman's hurt a voice, I also loved that you had Ishita voice the question that would've eaten me alive too had I been here..."why not tell Pihu who her mom is?"

I can just imagine KP & DT in this sequence you've built in your story & it would've been amazing to see played out!

Can't wait to see your next update...hopefully CVs don't continue their brainless assault on viewers and creativity! 😆

Originally posted by: bscorp13

Thanks😊..this was actually a tough part to write..glad you liked it.can i know your name?

Hey my name is balasri

Part 3